FF:AT FIRST GLANCE- The End on pg 88 - Page 49

haila!!😳

*faints*😆

Things are heating up in there.............and it's been what, less than half an hour that they've been stranded?!!😆

This is gonna be interesting!😉

Originally posted by: ffern1012

Sabsj please don't be mad I said this because I don't want you to get in trouble.

don't worry dear, am not mad at u at all, i know what your intentions were and thank u very much for that 😃

Originally posted by: loka

very good
continue soon 👏

thanks loka

It is magic from 12 to 14..... Although I read late but still... it was....😳 😳 😳

Mind bolowing sabj.... 👏 👏 👏

It indeed goes together, the cold weather, the past of the best and the despration... if you know what I mean.. 😳

I think we will bee seeing something very interesting... Even though one can only survive when he or she is destined to it... 😳

They say love never dies... 😳.... ermm... 🤔 lets see love + chemistry magnism + passion.... if they will make it, and to add up, the heat is not working...in that cold weather... 😆 😆 😆...I doubt that something will not happen.. it must to.....😆 😆 😆

Now we really have something to look foward...... 😳

I cant wait for the next chapters.... 😃

And one more rquest to make.... the language little pit too heat, if you know what I mean....😳 😳 😳..soo do try to turn into little pit cold.... for the fruits around here.. 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆...

Excellent job... 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Always luv..

hanaane

Originally posted by: sabsj

This is for you Poo ...... for your much awaited, awesome and hilarious reviews, which makes the updating even more fun. 😛

Chapter 13

Moving toward the kitchen to see if there was anything of hers in there, Bani happened to glance out of the window.

"Oh my God" she said, rushing over to the window. It was snowing already. No, it wasn't just snowing, there was a full-scale blizzard going on outside. What happened to the seventy-two hours warning? she wondered. There is nothing you can, this has to happen...Even the destiny wants too and so do we.. 😆 😆

She heard Jai when he came out of the bedroom. He looked beyond her and out the window, uttering one hell of a curse word before quickly walking to the door, slinging it open and stepping outside.

In just that short period of time, everything was beginning to turn white. The last time they'd had a sudden snowstorm such as this had been a two years ago. It had been so bad the media had nicknamed it the "Beast from the East." I liked this pit "Beast from the East" ....😉

It seemed the beast was back and it had turned downright spiteful. Not only was it acting ugly outside, it had placed Bani in one hell of a predicament. She was stranded in a cabin in the Smoky Mountains with her soon-to-be-ex. Things couldn't get any more bizarre than that.

Moments later when Jai stepped back into the cabin, slamming the door behind him, Bani could tell he was so mad he could barely breathe. Why not you drove him crazy...

"What's wrong, Jai? You're being forced to cancel a date tonight?" she asked snidely. A part of her was still upset at the thought that he might have brought someone here a couple of weekends ago when they weren't officially divorced yet. The mere fact they had been separated for six months didn't count. She hadn't gone out with anyone. Indulging in a relationship with another man hadn't even crossed her mind. When you know you will regreth what you say now.. why ask this "Q" in the first place..?😕

Jai took a step toward Bani and she refused to back up. She was determined to maintain her ground and her composure, although the intense look in his eyes was causing crazy things to happen to her body, like it normally did whenever they were alone for any period of time. There may have been a number of things wrong with their marriage, but lack of sexual chemistry had never been one of them. Nope.. you can't fight the difence magnism...😛

"Do you know what this means?" he asked, his voice shaking in anger.

She tilted her head to one side. "Other than I'm being forced to remain here with you for a couple of hours, no, I don't know what it means" retorted Bani.

She saw his hands ball into fists at his side and knew he was probably fighting the urge to strangle her. "We're not talking about hours, Bani. Try days. Haven't you been listening to the weather reports?"

She glared at him. "Haven't you? I'm not here by myself."

"Yes, but I thought I could come up here and in thirty minutes max get what I came for and leave before the bad weather kicked in."

Bani regretted that she hadn't been listening to the weather reports, at least not in detail. She'd known that a snowstorm was headed toward the mountains within seventy-two hours, which was why she'd thought like Jai that she had time to rush and get in, relax a bit and then head out before the nasty weather hit. Anything other than that, she was clueless. And what was he saying about them being up here for days instead of hours?

"Yes, I did listen to the weather reports, but evidently I missed something" said Bani.

Jai shook his head. "Evidently you missed a lot if you think this storm is going to blow over in a couple of hours. According to forecasters, what you see isn't the worst of it, and because of that unusual cold front hovering about in the east, it may last for days."

"To be happy with a man you must understand him a lot and love him a little. It works that way hun... 😉 😆

To be happy with a woman you must love her a lot and not try to understand her at all." "Yes and "Yes and "Yes....😛

Bani swallowed deeply. The thought of spending days alone in a cabin with Jai didn't sit well with her. "How many days are we talking about?" she asked, her voice clearly trembling. Why cant you forget for once going away..... I know you dont want to..😳 😆

"Try three or four" replied Jai with an intense look. Is he really trying to do what I think... ? 😳 😕

Bani didn't want to try any at all, and as she continued to gaze into his eyes she saw a look of worry replace the anger in their dark depths. Then she knew what had him upset. They were always good in communicating with each other through their eyes …….. words were secondary. Still hah.. What a couple... 😛

"Do we have enough food and supplies up here to hold us for three or four days?" Bani asked, as she began to nervously gnaw on her lower lip. The magnitude of the situation they were in was slowly dawning on her, and when he didn't answer immediately she knew they were in trouble ………………… Big Big trouble.

Jai saw the panic that suddenly lined Bani's face. He wished he could say he didn't give a damn, but there was no way that he could. This woman would always matter to him whether she was married to him or not. From the moment he had seen her at the store that day and their gazes had connected, he had known then, as miraculous at it had seemed, and without a word spoken between them, that he was meant to love her. And for a while he had convinced her of that, but not anymore. Evidently, at some point during their marriage she began believing otherwise.

"Jai?" called out Bani.

He rubbed his hand down his face, trying to get his thoughts together. Given the situation they were in, he knew honesty was foremost. But then he'd always been honest with her, however, he doubted she could say the same for herself.

"To answer your question, Bani, I'm not sure. Usually I keep the place well stocked of everything, but like I said earlier, I was here a couple of weekends ago, and I used a lot of the supplies then."

He refused to tell her that in a way it had been her fault. Receiving those divorce papers had driven him here, to wallow in self-pity, vent out his anger and drink his pain away with a bottle of Johnny Walker Black.

"I guess we need to go check things out," he said, trying not to get as worried as she was beginning to look.

He followed her into the kitchen, trying not to watch the sway of her hips as she walked in front of him. The hot, familiar sight of her in a pair of jeans and pullover sweater had him cursing under his breath and summoning up a quick remedy for the situation he found himself in. The thought of being stranded for any amount of time with Bani wasn't good.

"Women marry men hoping they will change. Men marry women hoping they will not. So each is inevitably disappointed." Yeah for some reason... 😉

Humour for the day

Good, bad and worse

Good: Your hubby and you agree, no more kids.... 😃
Bad: You can't find your birth control pills .... 😆 😆 😆
Worse: Your daughter borrowed them... 😡

Good: Your son studies a lot in his room... 😃
Bad: You find several po*n movies hidden there... 😡
Worse: You're in them... 😲 😆 😆 😆 😆

Good: Your husband understands fashion.. 😳
Bad: He's a cross dresser ... 😡
Worse: He looks better than you ... 😕

Good: Your son's finally maturing... 😃
Bad: He's involved with the woman next door...
Worse: So are you... 😲 😆 😆 😆

Good: You give the birds and bees talk to your daughter.. 😃
Bad: She keeps interrupting... 😡
Worse: With corrections.. 😲

Good: Your wife's not talking to you... 😔
Bad: She wants a divorce.. 😲
Worse: She's a lawyer ... 😆 😆 😆

Good: The postman's early... 😃
Bad: He's wearing fatigues and carrying an AK47... 😲
Worse: You gave him nothing for Christmas... 😆 😕 😆 😆

It was mind bolowing part sabj... and the humour of the day was totaly an outstanding... I enjoyed it very much.....😃 😃 😃

Thanks for the lovely update.. 👍🏼

Always luv..

hanaane

Originally posted by: pooja.walia

fantastic part....👏

I LOVED IT....😳 tell me what u think of the review😉

and this is for u...🤗 Poo

U know what I think about your review, now a days I write mainly to get reviewed by u ......... u make me wanna keep writing ...... lekin meri limitations hain, toh main kya karu ......... awesome sweety, thank u so very much for your humour, comments and of course your encouragement. what would i do without u.

Originally posted by: nibbles

Whoohoo!!

3-4 days sound perfect to me😉...........enough to make them realise what they'll be missing out on if they do actually divorce!!

Keep it going Sabs.............just love this FF!😛

thanks nibbles .......... believe me 3 days is more than enough for the inevitable .............. thanks dear, will keep on going as long as u promise to keep reading 😳

Originally posted by: $h@aq...

Sabbbyyy hun !!!! thnksx ofr replyingg to my pm yesterday !! apperciate that !! i knoww my reason wasnt good enough !! but i still apologiseee !! 🤗

Arre yaar, apology which was not at all required was most warmly accepted.......... i don't need reasons .........

i hopee itss all safee to enter here !! no jootes thrown towardss mee !! 😭

more than safe .......

hun !! i knoww i avee missed out a lot !! but i reaalyy hope my pm's madee even 1% of it !!!

ur pm's made up 100% for everything

hun !!!! amazingg !! as susal ..u alwayss levee me gaping at the screen ..and i jsut cant find any words at all ...soo agan .. i m speechless !! but all i want to say is simplyy breath - takinglyy tremendous !!!! how doo u manage to do taht !!

jai walia hain hi aisi cheeze, ki joh dekhe, bas dekhta jaaye

in oneee way i am sad that i missed all the interactionss with u ..and dhappyy ..so i dint havee to waitt..fro all the updatess !! the aayy u end is simplyy killer stylee ..and i wudnt be balee to wait !!! .. considerin i am alwayss called the updatee bugger !! ..looollzz !! i am OFFICIAL I.F UPDATEE REMINDER / CHECKER co ANALYIST ! looolzz !!! okaayy now tht didnt makee any sensee !! 😉 o00hh well just laugh !!! 😆

u can bug me anytime, i like getting bugged ........ anyway the end is almost near.

hun !! wowowoow !! the wayy u portaryy jai !! i need to takee a feww breathss to composee my self ! Gosh !! 😳 😳 😳
the way u madee the stroyy progress ! 👏 👏 👏

thanks dear ........

i reallyy was ssoo sad ..when u siad u were going to givee a leap .and then the divorcee...i was ssoo sad.... 😭 😭 but then it was all worth it !!!!

told u to trust me

awesomee !! .. hun !!! aww i am ssoo glad all thesee -5 dayss they spent togtehr ! will be jsut enough to makee them realisee their lovee to each other !! 😳

your wish my command

hun !! hatss off to you !! for ur quotess !! Gosh !! i am keeping an account of them !! ..hun !!! i lovedd the crush onee !! itss soo trueee !! and well selecteddd !!!! 👏 👏 👏 i simplyuy lovee you for ur quote slection !!!! i reallyy need to comee and meet u ...loolz !! evtimee i read ur updatee i get soo inspiredd by you !! hun !!!! u r simplyyy gifted and talented !! [loolzz ! just stole that from teh contest i am in for science ...chem and bio]... i wish i was ssooooooo goood at english ! always trid never worked !! 😭 😭

am gonna stop writing ff's and concentrate on quotes and humour only, only these two are appreciated, my story can go to timbucktoo for all u care 😆

hun !! noww that i am abck !! i realllyy want u to updatee soon i mena ASAP ....but do takee caree fo urr health !! i dont want the whole of ur familyy comingg afetr me ! ... takee good care of ur self !! okaayy told u taht in pm ! 😉

i already updated in your honour

Thnksx oncee again for takingg my apology into consideration !! .. reallyy appreciate it hun !!!

mention not ever again

luvv yaa !!
Shafaq ! 😛
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