FF:AT FIRST GLANCE- The End on pg 88 - Page 48

Oh god sabsj, you are becoming bolder, bending down at the refrige...... should I continue... sexual tension at its height, how are they gonna survive for days without touching, yeh bani to gayi. Clever girl you sent a snowstorm their way. Cheeky and great part. You gave an insight to jai's misery on receiving the divorce so she initiated it. get her to admit her mistake and her shortcomings and more importantly get them to talk about issues bugging them. Good work. How is your recovery coming along. Hope you are discharged soon. Take care. 😉 👏

Originally posted by: purple_penguins

wowie!

that was awesome.. hehe they have to spend time together 😳 ... i love it... the quotes were awesome... i was laughing and cringing so much at the humour... and i think the guy next to me thinks im a lunatic... 😉 .. awesome job sabrina!!!!! keep it up hun 👏 👏

**aviva**

hi aviva .......... yes am forcing them to spend time together ..... good to know that u like the quotes, a lot of hard work goes into getting to the right one .......... and the humour, well we all need to laugh, share it with the lunatic next to u also, am sure he wouldn't mind.

Originally posted by: ovaltine

Oh god sabsj, you are becoming bolder, bending down at the refrige...... should I continue... sexual tension at its height, how are they gonna survive for days without touching, yeh bani to gayi. Clever girl you sent a snowstorm their way. Cheeky and great part. You gave an insight to jai's misery on receiving the divorce so she initiated it. get her to admit her mistake and her shortcomings and more importantly get them to talk about issues bugging them. Good work. How is your recovery coming along. Hope you are discharged soon. Take care. 😉 👏

no dear, have always been the bold kind, but tried to control, u have no idea how many drafts i had to go thru to finally get it to the "acceptable level", what i first came up with was almost like aditee's missing pages, if u know what i mean 😆 ...............

u guessed my intentions ........ as for Bani, am gonna reserve my comments and let my writing do the talking ..........

recovery is coming along great, should be home by this weekend. am counting the days.

burning hottt!!
wow temperature rising , huh?

Ok sabsj, first off I am glad your ok and feeling better 😃 😃 😃 . Jannu you now I love you a lot but honsetly watch the language 😳 😳 😳 , remember we have young kids on this site and their amma's are going to get you with belans if they ever find out 😆 😆 😆 what you are letting them read. So dear gladly continue this ff, but please keep the language to a decent level, I don't want the mods chasing after you espesically since they all haven't been in the best of moods recently. Ok take care and get pleanty of rest.
Love you

Originally posted by: ffern1012

Ok sabsj, first off I am glad your ok and feeling better 😃 😃 😃 . Jannu you now I love you a lot but honsetly watch the language 😳 😳 😳 , remember we have young kids on this site and their amma's are going to get you with belans if they ever find out 😆 😆 😆 what you are letting them read. So dear gladly continue this ff, but please keep the language to a decent level, I don't want the mods chasing after you espesically since they all haven't been in the best of moods recently. Ok take care and get pleanty of rest. Love you

i re-worded/deleted as much as I could, i am well aware of the kids on this site, and believe me i have read even more explicit language on some other ff's and what i have written in comparison is of a much more decent level. thanks for the warning anyway ...... if they do chase after me, they better do the same to the rest too. i'll be more than happy to discontinue just in case anybody has a problem ....... i rather save my energy for something more worthwhile

AWESOME parts sabs 👏 👏 👏

and NO WAY are you going to discontinue this FF!! I will NOT allow you to 😳

if you want to take rest, feel free to do so...but you are OBLIGATED to write at least one part per day...or i'll go through THE JAI withdrawal...like i said...just any jai is not enough...THIS JAI FROM THIS FF 😳 😳 😉

Originally posted by: sabsj

i re-worded/deleted as much as I could, i am well aware of the kids on this site, and believe me i have read even more explicit language on some other ff's and what i have written in comparison is of a much more decent level. thanks for the warning anyway ...... if they do chase after me, they better do the same to the rest too. i'll be more than happy to discontinue just in case anybody has a problem ....... i rather save my energy for something more worthwhile

Sabsj please don't be mad I said this because I don't want you to get in trouble.

Awwwwwww bani just say that you love jai and want to try to work it out!!!!
Girl Scout cookies!!!!!! Yumm!!!!!!!!!

hehe the humour is hillarious!!!!!!!!
three strikes and you are gone!!!
reminds me of the song take me out to the ball game!!!

thanks for the pm sabsj!!!
much appreciated!
send it again wen you update!

awesome job! 👏

I love your fanfic but I must admit that its the humor of the day thats my favorite part.

Oh yeah, I hope that by the end of the strom Jai and and Bani haven't killed each other and have made up.

-Rimpy