ff:AADAT pt 23 pg 45 5/5 - Page 17

Originally posted by: nyzbabigyal

i caught up.. go me go me.. i can't get maindek out of my head.. she called jai maindek 😆 tarun's slick 😉 so's uncle ji.. tarun toh abh bhi raazi hai shaadi ke liye.. hehe how nice.. i can't picture 'em all running around like lil kids 😆 yes i can i can picture it.. luvedddddddddd it.. can't wait fo d engagement.. yay.. cont soon deb .. SOON 👏

u read.wow.this maindak part i guess i saw it in som film.i really liked it.tats y i put it.i am glad u all liked it.n thanx 4 d engagement idea.
debolina

thanx 4 readin n sendin me d idea.it was really good.i am not ngry nemore. i tell u this Jai is really restless.Bani ko dekta hai to paagal ho jaata hai.kya karo iska.
debolina

Originally posted by: jnawaz

yaar...what a part..well 2 parts...haila... 😳 😳
how cute the guys running around...who knew jai was like that...so care free... 😃
jai tune toh chance mar liya...bani ko dheka and u went upstairs...kuch to sabar karo... 😳 😳 😳
and yes hun...looks like banis fav spot is in fromt of windows...kya kare...she dreams aobut the romantic night and jai all in one... 😳
debo...kya kare...hum hai hi besharam..we have to know the details of what happens with JB behind closed doors...
we cant help it naa... 😛 privacy gaye bhad mein... 😉
but haila...knock at the door...always geting interupted...
im telling you if its pia..il kil her...dont care if she is good...
har jaga paar pia aajata hai...just like on the show...man...
update soon yaar.
JAZ

WAH WAH!!!! Billi Weds Maindak..... 😆 😆 😆

its awesome buddy...... 👏

Guess i was r8..... YEAH!!! YIPPEE!!!!! 😃 😉

cont soon........... 😃 😉

Originally posted by: Auditi

WAH WAH!!!! Billi Weds Maindak..... 😆 😆 😆

its awesome buddy...... 👏

Guess i was r8..... YEAH!!! YIPPEE!!!!! 😃 😉

cont soon........... 😃 😉

thanx yaar.
i was actually wonderin how u got 2 kno my action plan. newys nice hearin frm u.keep commentin on my shitty ff.i maybe continuin tuesday mornin.i am not promisin it.but i will try.
debolina

hey buddy its not at all shitty okkk... i njoy it a lot..... sooo betta dont call it shitty.... 😛 😉

cont whenveaa u get time...... 😊

please update soon this is getting intersting.........

haila very intersting

pooja

Originally posted by: Auditi

hey buddy its not at all shitty okkk... i njoy it a lot..... sooo betta dont call it shitty.... 😛 😉

cont whenveaa u get time...... 😊

i am dead scared.i will not call it shitty.thanx
kno wat this appraisal means a lot.thanx 4 likin it.i owe u this 1 auditi.
debolina

Originally posted by: pooja1_76

please update soon this is getting intersting.........

haila very intersting

pooja

i will be updatin maybe 2morrow mornin..
it sems u r also into haila.
debolina

helo i am sorry i cudnt update.but i'll surely update at night.
debolina

Part 15

N:sorry for the disturbance.but cudnt help.massi is callin both of u downstairs.u should thank u lucky satrs tht i stop her n came.bhaiya shaadi ke baad ke liye to kuch rakhiye.keh saara mamla aap abhi khatam kar denge.

J:to jaati hai yai nahi.

N:ek shart par.

J:meri maa..

N:nahi behen.

J:haan wohi.natasha yaar plz jaa.mujhe kuch important baat karni hai.do minute main aya.

N:tik hai bhaiya magar sirf baat
with this she swiftly ran away from the room.

J:haan toh hum kaha the.

B:Mr Walia ab hum nikalte hein.

J:inti asani se nahi.

B:Mr Walia plz abhi nahin.koyi ajaye ga.

J:ane do.

B:koyi dekhlega.

J:deklene do.akhir we are engaged.aur kya ek main apni pyaari si billi se pyaar nahi kar sakta.

M:haan meri honewale bahu ke maindak.kyun nahi.(holdin his ears)magar ab nahi.Bani tum jao.main ise niche lati hoon.

Bani with a totally crimson red face hurried out of the room.

J:ahh massi plz choriye na.

M:massi keh bache.intna bara ho gaya hai phir bi bacho ke tara behave karta hai.

J:ahh sorry phir nahi hoga.plz mssi choruye na.main bara ho gaya hoon.aur phir niche saab intezar kar rahe hein.to chale aap hi ne to kaha der ho rahi hain.

massi n Jai atlast deceneded down the stairs.they could see everybody grinning.tarun had a wicked smile.even ranveer was grinning.it waw quite an unusual sight.it was only Bani who was trying to hide her face.

M:chalo shabi shaam ki party ki taiyari karni hain.munna tum Bani aur rano ko leke shopping par jao.woh ring kardni hai.

S:hum bhi chalte hain na.(winking at Jai)

J:nahi sahil uski kya zaroorat hai.

T:are wah Jai.tum apne favourite bhatije aur best friend ko chorke shopping par jao ge.

M:haan haan.tum dono bhi jao.bahut shoppin baki hain.hum ghar pe party ki taiyari karte hain.

T:haan haan very good idea.kyun Jai.

Jai was fumin inside.he wanted he knock this tarun and sahil right way.

J:driver do meri aur tarun ki gharu nikalo.

T:are uski kya zaroorat haim.ek hi ghari main jaate hain na.

J:are waah hum paanch hai.kaise ek ghari main fit karenge.

S:kyun nahi.aap aur tarun samne bet ja na.i with this two beautiful ladies can sit at the back.

T:chalo chalo de ho rahi hain.

before Jai could say anything every body had walked outside excepting Bani.

Bani holding his hand :are mere maindak inta gussa mat ho.sehet ke liye acha nahi hota.

J:are ab tum bhi mere mazak ura rahi ho.keh yaar is Jai Walia ka kya halat hai.kal tak iske sath kyon mazak karne ki gunjayish nahi karta tha.aur ab.


in the car

T:are Jai aaj inte gusse main kyun ho.apne dost ko bhi nahi bataoge.

J(grittin his teeth):are tumhare jaise dost honge to maan ki baat maan main hi rahe jayegi.

they reached the mall.Jai was in a very rotten mood.
they were looki for a jewelary shop.rano dragged Bani to a store.Jai followed them closly followed by tarun and sahil.

R:di isn't this beautiful.

B:haan rano it surely is magar abhi hame kuch aur kardna hai to baad main.

sahi and tarun were observing Jai's raection.

T:are bhai kya soch rahe hoon.jake karidlo.

Jai turned towrds them and gve them a smile.
Jai went inside the store secretly and bought it.

next they went to a jewelary shop.

Bani was standin next to Jai.they cudnt decided upon a rind.

sahil tarun and rano were really gettin bored.the salesperson was also gettin hayware not gettin neclu from Jai and Bano on there choice.
suddenly tarun sprang up.

T:are Jai jaldi kar.tab tak hum ate hai.

J:haan tumlog jao.hum yeh katam karke ate hain.

the trio left.

both Jai and Bani smiled at each other.

J:haan aap yeh dono pack kar dijiye.

Jai n Bani had decided on the rings before.they were tryin to get rid of the trio.

they were now relieved.atlast they were left alone.

they stepped outside the shop.tey were planning to go to the nearby a restaurant to munch something.

R:wah di bari jaldi hogayi.

Jai and Bani looked bewildered.

T:chalo chalo ghar chalte hain.massi chinta karegi.

J(under his breath):yeh log kabhi hume akele hi nahi chorte.i promise.soon i will settle all the scores.

S:chaliye mamaji jaldi.

they were in the parkin lot.Jai aws the first one to get inside the car fumin inside.

the tri swiftly sat in the back saet.leavin Bani to sit in the first seat beside Jai.


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debolina