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Posted: 18 years ago
hey debu (i hope i can call u that)
i read all 16 parts in one go
and its really nice...emotional but sober at the same time
loved the tigres part 😆
and Jai's chasing with Tarun Sahil 😆 😆
loved the description of engagement party 👏 👏
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwwwww deb i loved it.. the teasing from rano/tarun/sahil was halarious 😆 jai and bani r not slick after all.. trying to pretend they don't have the rings chosen 😆 that was halarious.. awwww engagement - i can picture jai in white.. sexyy 😳 awwwww everyone's awed by their pairing.. so r we.. so r we.. 😳 😳 can't wait fo d partyyy.. lovedddddddddddddd it.. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
just finished thie entire ff...phew..took couple of hrs but was worth it. 👏 👏 👏

boy wen i read bani is going to wed tarun...i was so depressed i thought jai will go into devdas mode and wat not...thank god u cleared that part soon.. 😃

im sure that rahul chap must be back in the US...after being thrashed by jai...our hero 😳

this pia sounds like a total nri...lol she sounds too funny..

plz update soon...cant wait for more jai and bani moments

neetu
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it was awesome buddy..... tooooooooo GOOOOOD..... 😃

read part 15 & 16 together just now..... it was funny..... the way the trio were disturbing.... BEWARE TRIO!!!!! soon JnB will take revenge.... 😆 😉

plzzzzzzz plzzzzzz plzzzzzzzz cont soon..... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: himali_kokate

hey debu (i hope i can call u that)
i read all 16 parts in one go
and its really nice...emotional but sober at the same time
loved the tigres part 😆
and Jai's chasing with Tarun Sahil 😆 😆
loved the description of engagement party 👏 👏
continue soon

hey thanx.offcourse u can call me debo.d engagement part is still left.u kno d dancin n all tat.

debolina

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Posted: 18 years ago
Oh man!!!!!

i have read this FF from the beginning and read all 16 parts!!!!!

and this is really good!!!!!👏

i enjoyed it all!!!

wow they were engaged!!! oh my! now again!!!!!!! that was nice!!

awww poor j and b!! the others are teasing them!!😆


man cant wait wen they get married!!!! that will be like hai!!😳


but please cont soon!!!!!!!!!!!!😃 keep up the awesome job!!!👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Dk*s_Jaanu_Guli

Oh man!!!!!

i have read this FF from the beginning and read all 16 parts!!!!!

and this is really good!!!!!👏

i enjoyed it all!!!

wow they were engaged!!! oh my! now again!!!!!!! that was nice!!

awww poor j and b!! the others are teasing them!!😆


man cant wait wen they get married!!!! that will be like hai!!😳


but please cont soon!!!!!!!!!!!!😃 keep up the awesome job!!!👏

hey jaanu i alwaz wished tat u will read my ff.n see now u read it n even liked it.thanx a lot.i will be updatin soon.

debolina

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Auditi

👏

it was awesome buddy..... tooooooooo GOOOOOD..... 😃

read part 15 & 16 together just now..... it was funny..... the way the trio were disturbing.... BEWARE TRIO!!!!! soon JnB will take revenge.... 😆 😉

plzzzzzzz plzzzzzz plzzzzzzzz cont soon..... 😃

well this trio will hav to face Jai with his Bani.so de really hav 2 saty allof.

glad u enjoyed it.will update soon.

debolina

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Posted: 18 years ago
here my next update.

Part 17

The party had begun. There was a chocolate cake placed right at the middle of the hall. Jai and Bani moved towards the cake. The cut the cake together, celebrating their new bond. They fed each other. As if realizing the presence of the family around them, they went around the party and fed each of the members.

Elite businessman, politicians, media personas' all had gathered there. It was really a grand event. The party was called on a very short notice. But all the invitees and dropped in. After all, the great JAI WALIA was brushing off his long years of bachelorhood. Jai was been dragged by his friends to the bar. Even though he was present with his friends his soul wandered around the place where Bani was sitting with her friends. They had quite a few eye-locking sessions, those were either of them could turn their eyes away. Their was some kind of magnetic pull a bond that would never let them face away.

Jai's friends were discussing about Jai's college life when Tarun noticed that Jai wasn't really paying attention.

T : are bhai ! was sup ? . We are here to talk about you. Your grand marriage and here you are not even paying attention. Hello you here? Uff stop flying in air. Come back to earth. Jai are you listening. You will crash with aeroplanes.
JAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII.

J : Huh kya. Were you saying anything.

T : Mr Jai Walia if u stare at your would be wife like that she will burn into ashes. It's been ages since I am calling you to attract your attention. But it seems that your not even present here.

J : ahhhhhhh woww kuch nahi. I was thinking something. You people carry on.

Varun Jai's college buddy : Jai it happens. Par I am far experienced than you. Shaadi se pehele to yeh aankh micholi chalti hai magar shaadi ke baad yehi aankho se aangare baresne lagte yeh. Good luck buddy. Your next in the path of eternal doom.

With that Jai and all his friends burst out into a laugh.

T : Waise Jai you remember Sonali.

J : ahh kon.mujhe tikse yaad nehi hai.

T : Are tumhe kaise yaad hoga. Sonali the girl in the college who had a major crush on you.

J : Guys I seriously remember no such girl.

V : Jai how will you remember. There were so many girls brooding over you 24/7 that its quite impossible for you to remember one such girl.
What say Tarun?

T : Absolutely. Anyways she is back in town. At present she is the best model. The Walia's that is your company has approached her for their product launch.

J : So, what is so new about that. Why are you telling me these things? Wait are you telling me of that Sonali who use to sit beside me in the English classes. Wow she is back. It will be fun. (He was grinning)

B : Kya fun Mr Walia.

J : huh kuch nahi.

T : haan haan kuch nahi. Bas Jai ki ek purani dost is back in town. Isiliye yeh inta khush hai. Haina Jai.

J : Haan hmm.
(under his breadth) Wait till my chance comes Tarun Sablok. You will pay for this. Aise maza chakhaunga ki yaad rahega.

T : Did you say something.

J : No. Absolutely nothing.

S : are aap dono yaha kya kar rahe hai.Jaiyena dance kijiye. Hey DJ, lets rock the dance floor.

Jai asked for Bani's hand. She very graciously placed her hand on Jai's hand.
The music engulfed the whole of the dance floor.
Sahil was dancing with a very reluctant Rano. And Pushkar and Pia very swaying with the music.

From the surroundings Jai and Bani could here praise on their matched.
Bani was clutching on to Jai's sleeves. Jai was staring intently at those chocolate brown eyes as is sinking in the Arabian ocean. Bani was blushing beetroot.

J : Did anybody tell you that you are looking very beautiful yes.

B : Hmm yes.

J : huh who?

B : Hai koyi.

J : Bani batao mujhe gussa ara hai.

B : are isme gussa hone ki kya baat hai.

J : Bani.mujhe batao who kon tha.

B : kyun. main aapko kyun batao. Aap jaiye apne dost ke saath jake batheyi.bate kijiye. Main apki kya lagti hoon.

J : acha to yeh baat yeh.Waise tum nehi this apni dostoke saath.uska kya.

B:who to … are wah main kya karti agar aap mere saath nahi the.mye bore ho rahi thin a.

J : O.Tik hai. Magar aab mujhe batao kon tumhe compliment kiye. Sabhi jante hai kit um Jai Walia ki hone wali patni ho. Kisne kaha Bani tumse?

B : apki aankho ne.

J : main uska …..huh …… Baniiiiiiiiiiiiii

With this they embraced each other.

B : waise aap inta gussa kyun hogaye the.

J : mujhe saha nahi jata ki mere ilava tumhe aur kyon dekhe.

B : Inta pyaar karte hai aap mujhse.

J : Tum soch bhi nahi sakti.

The song changed. They were switching partners. Jai was now dancing with Anuradha and Bani with Sahil. They were laughing and giggling over something.

Jai was staring at Bani with amazement. How beautiful she looks when she smiles. Bani had caught Jai staring at her.

The song changed. Now Jai was dancing with Rano and Bani with some anonymous person. He was rather drunk and was misbehaving with Bani. Jai was busy laughing away with Rano's witty comments when he noticed this. At once he excused himself from Rano and quite elegantly excused Bani from the hedoic partner. But the man was reluctant to let go off Bani so easily. He pulled Bani from her waist. Jai turned with blood red eyes. With one blow he hit the man heard straight on his nose. The man was bleeding. He stood up half conscious and tried nearing towards Jai. Jai picked him in the air and threw his away. Tarun, Sahil, Pushkar, Aditya and Kunal had to come to the spot to free the man from Jai's maddening rage. The party atmosphere was rather disturbed. Jai went to Bani's side and held her hands.

J : Tum tik ho.

Bani slowly whispered : Hmm

Jai embraced her tight near his heart as is never to let her free. A determination in his eyes to protect her from all odds. Jai had lost all his priced relationships before. He didn't want to loose Bani.

Jai took over the mike.

J : Sorry ladies and gentlemen the inconvenience. We may continue with the party.

With amazing self control Jai had resumed himself to his normal self. Maybe that is the reason he is JAI WALIA.

A : Ladies and Gentlemen we may now proceed with the ceremony. Jai and Bani idhar aao.

Jai took Bani by her waist and brought her to where massi and Aditya were standing..

Kunal gave Bani the ring and she slided it onto Jai's finger. Massi gave Jai the ring and he slided it to Bani's finger and then kissed her hand. Everybody cheered. After all the most eligible bachelor was going to get married.

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debolina

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: nyzbabigyal

awwwwwwww deb i loved it.. the teasing from rano/tarun/sahil was halarious 😆 jai and bani r not slick after all.. trying to pretend they don't have the rings chosen 😆 that was halarious.. awwww engagement - i can picture jai in white.. sexyy 😳 awwwww everyone's awed by their pairing.. so r we.. so r we.. 😳 😳 can't wait fo d partyyy.. lovedddddddddddddd it.. 👏

hey buddy thanx.i happy tat u njoyed it.just posted apart.hope u will like tat.this part is also dedcated 2 u.

debolina

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