ff:AADAT pt 23 pg 45 5/5 - Page 35

Hi Deb,

that long separation? What's up with that! 😭

Can they bear it, don't separate them for so long!

Nice making up, very nicely penned, keep it up hun!!

"Discombobulation" LOL, been ages since I heard that word!! Good job!

that was an awesome part...
loved it!!
especially the ending was beautiful!
but i can't believe that Bani got really scarred of the mouse...
i mean one time scarred but jumping on jai's lap 😆 😆 😆
but why am i complaining...when Jai didn't 😆
love how the shirt is being kinda in a bad situation!
i wonder if the motto will suit here: "Phata shirt, Nikla Hero"(courtesy Sam) 😆
anyways please continue soon
rooj
PS: sorry if i didn't comment on the last part...

awesome part 👏
sont. soon

great part, please continue soon.

swati

Fab Fab Fab Update!

srry kinda in a rush! But had to let u no!

AWSOME UPDATE!

continue soon👏

g2 run!

maddi

Great part.
Loved Bani getting scared of the mouse and went straight into Jai's lap 🤣 . She must be weightless that he kept her on his lap for that long 😆 😳 .
Hope you will update soon, and don't let them seperate for too long please 😭 😃.
Get them married 🥳 😳 😍 .
Hope you will update soon 🤗 .

omg...finally read your update...and as usual...it was great... 👏 ...loved it...haila...mouse...chi... 🤢 🤢 🤢 ...if i had a JW i would have jumped into his 'godi' too 😳 ...but alas...now JW...just a stupid ex who dosent take no for and answer... 😡 😡 😡 ...anyway...im getting off topic...great update my sis...cant wait for next one..
JAZ

g8t prt
i l-o-v-e-d it
continue soon 😃

debo...loved this part...it was so cute...and i liked how they spent time with each other...

please continue soon...and thanks for the PM...
Rivs

Hey Debo,
just read all the parts in one go... loved all of them especially the "billi" part... please update soon.
👏 👏 👏