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Posted: 18 years ago
awwww
haah jai got caught
awesome job!
continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Awesome part.
Everybody teasing and bugging them.
Trio not leaving them alone 😆 😆 😆
Loved it.
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
well d engagement is on its way.i dont kno whether it will string ur cords but if it doesnt plz bash navs coz its her idea tht i am gonna type down.
i am really gr8ful to navs on helpin me with d engagement bash.this part is dedicated to all my ff readers ridhjai, jigna, nancy navs,ziddi, n offcorse janwaz.we miss u.hav a gr8 time at d weddin.

Part 16

Jai had a scornfull face.he didnot notice Bani beside him.he was adjustin his rear view mirrow 2 c Bani.but she was not there.confused he turned around he cudnt see her.

S : mamiji mamaji kaise ghari chalate hain.

then it hit Jai tat Bani was in d front seat.

Bani was rather smily cheekily at Jais misery.

B : huh haan acha bahut acha.

S : kya bahut acha.

B : hmmm yeh ahhh.

R : u mean to say jeejs drivin right.

the trio were havin fits.they were havin raelly a gr8 time witnessin the gr8 Jai Walia n his would be wifes flustered state.

Bani muttered under her breath to teach them a lesson.Jai heard tat n whispered to Bani tat he will surely help him.

T : are yeh kya khusur pusar ho raha hain.hame bhi to batao.

J : uski koi jarrorat nahi hai.ghar agaya hai.sab utro mere ghari se.

they sighed havin loosin an oppurtinty to drill the couple.

the entered the mansion.workers were all over the hall.massi was givin orders to them.

M : are yeh yaha kaise maine to apko yeh vase udar rakne no kaha tha.are tumlog agaye.Jai beta to ja Bani ko leke ja.ready ho ja.shaam hone ko hai.guests sab aate hi honge.

Jai silently thanked massi.now atleast he cud have a word with Bani.

near there room.

Jai whispered near Banis near givin tinglin sensatio to Bani.

J : Bani tum khush ho na.

Bani turned around and hugged him.

B : aap yeh kyn puch rahe hai Mr Walia.mein bahut khush ho.

J : nahi yeh saab itni jaldi huya.

they were hugging eachother.when teh both Jai realized they were in the lobby.he heard massi coughin.

J : uhh woh.

M : jaha tak mujhe yaad hai maine tum logo ko fresh hoke taiyer honeko kaha tha.kyar kyon baat nahi.

She went towards Bani.

M : bahu maine munna ko inta khush pehele kabhi anhi dekha.yeh tumko bahut pyaar karta hai.iska dyan rakna.

She turn towards Jai.

M : aur tum.agar kabhi bhi tum Bani ko tang kiye to tumari khair nahi.

Jai n Bani went inside there rooms.

The sun had set in .It was evening. A few of the guest had dropped in. Jai was ready. He was thinking of peaking in Banis room. He was in a completely white suit. He was looking absolutely smashing. He was looking like a romantic hero; calm n composed n who had sprang up from one of the classic novels to conquer the world. His face revealed absolutely ethereal satisfaction. But inside he was equally nervous. He was going to make Bani a part of his life officially. He was absolutely enthralled. His inner sensation were tingling him down his spine. His white Armani suit was doing justice to his looks but not to his present state of mind. He was very nervous n equally happy at the prospect of making Bani his own. But wait wasn't he already engaged to Bani .This was only an opportunity to relive tat experience. He this said to himself more like convincing his inner emotions not to be nervous. But it didn't help much. He knocks at Banis door. After some time the women of his dreams opened the door for him. She was looking beautiful….."No this word wont do justice to her looks", thought Jai. It was the vision of an angel who had just come to earth to become a part of Jai Walia. Jai was thanking his lucky stars for sending this angel to earth just for him. She was wearing a dark red dress with a heavily emdroided ghagra.(she was looking like the day of karwa chaut).
Bani on the other had was thinking that god had sent her, her dream hero. The one she used to read in love stories. He had just come for her to rule her heart and soul. She broke out of the reverie when she heard his deep husky voice calling out his name as if her name was only meant to be called out by him. As she was the slave and he was her master.

J : Bani shall we go every one is was for us downstairs.

B : Just a minute.

She gave some finishing touches.

Jai stood there awestruck by her beauty.

B : ahh lets go.

J : ya…hmm you look divine.

B : Thank you.

They descended downstairs. Every body in the hall was praising the couple. They really made a beautiful couple. They were walking hand in hand. Young men were looking in awe towards Jai. Wondering what was in him that got him such a beautiful patner.The women were throwing jealous glances at Bani wondering how she had been able to get of the most eligible bachelor of the nation.

As they descended they saw the beautifully decorated hall. With balloons and flowers everywhere. Floating candles. The hall was as if painted with hues of red and white.The party theme was red and white.

The party had begun. There was a chocolate cake placed right at the middle of the hall. Jai and Bani moved towards the cake. The cut the cake together, celebrating their new bond. They fed each other. As if realizing the presence of the family around them, they went around the party and fed each of the members.

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the party bis not over yet.i will update soon.waiting for ur replies.
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hope u like it.
debolina

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this was long enough.3 n 1/2 pages of word.
i am waiting for ur replies.






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Posted: 18 years ago
tht's really good
update it soon...........
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Posted: 18 years ago
plz cont soon
loved ur ff
read all 16 parts in 1 time
cant wait for the next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
g8 parts debolina. please continue soon.
swati
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: kinnu410

tht's really good
update it soon...........

thanx a lot.keep raeding.the engagement party is not yet over.

debolina

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: swatinarang

g8 parts debolina. please continue soon.
swati

hey thanx.i am very grateful tat u like it.hope u will raed it again.

debolina

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenal20

plz cont soon
loved ur ff
read all 16 parts in 1 time
cant wait for the next part
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thanx.would love to hear from u again.

debolina

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Posted: 18 years ago
post me or pm me wat u wont to see in the engagement party.
debolina

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