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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: nikhat_niki

are yeh kya indono ki toh pehle se sagai ho chuki hai toh ab seedhe shaddi wah kya fast kaam ho raha hai
cont soon



nikhat main sochti hoon ki y not throw a party on their engagement.tat will be fun.wat say.
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Posted: 18 years ago
sorry guys cudnt complete this chapter i will continue in the evenin.

Part 14

Jai n Bani were totally dumbfounded.they were engaged.

J:ahh let me swallow this truth tat i am engaged to this royal bengal tigress.masi aap kaha ho mujhe koyi bachao.

just then n elderly lady walked in n held Jai by his ears.

M:zaada bol maat munna.agar yehi haal raha to tarun taiyar hai BAni se shaadi karne ko.kyun tarun.

T:ha ha masi.ne time.

J:nahi its ok.main is tigress se shaadi karne ko taiyar ho.
aside to Bani......ek tigress ko tame karna ka alag hi maza hai.wat say.

Bani blushed crimson.Jai had d unique ability to flirt incoherently even amidst all people.

U:to behenji main pandit se baat karta hoon.shaadi ki date fix karlete hai.

P:are uncle di ki engagement mai to hum bahut choe the.aur woh bahut saal pehele hua tha.then y not relive it again.i mean cant we hold another engagement party.kyun jiju.

Jai was more eagar to hav Bani as fast as it cud be.he was happy at the prospect of a fast marriage.

J:uhh magar uski kya zarurat hai.shaadi karlete hai na.

M:oye Jai puttar to chup kar shaadi ki bhoot chari hai.pia tik keherahi hai.agle hafte ek engagement party rakhe.

J:agle hafte khyun kal rakle hai na.

every body broke it into a laugh.
Bani was blushin like crazy.the raed hue of the carpet aws matchin her chhek colour.

U:tik.taiyarri ki zimadri ghar ki bacho par.

T:so all of y raedy.lets get down to some work.

Natasha accompanied Bani to her room.n JAi was surronded by sahil ranveer n tarun.

N:so bhabhi.kaisa lag raha hai.

B:hmm achcha.

N:itna fika sa achcha.ek bat bolti hu.main Jai bhaiya se choti zarror hu magar main unko inta samjti hu ki woh jinko pyaar karte hai woh bahut nazeeb wale hote hai.Jai bhaiya aap se bahut pyaar karte hai.aaj arso bad maine unko inta khush dekha hai.

Bani was listin to all this with patience.

B:mujhe Mr Walia ke bare main kuch bhi nahi pata hai.inka pasand na pasand.

N:aap iski chinta mat kijiye.startin lessons main apko deh dungi.aage ki zimadri aapki.ha magar woh bahut hi garam mijaz ke hai.bachke rehena.

B:pata hai mujhe.gosh kya gussa hai.lagta hai kaan se dhuya niklega.main to daar hi gayi thi.par jab pyaar kar....

N:aapka matlab hai inte time main aap unki gussa bhi dekli li aur pyaar bhi.not bad bhabhi not bad at all.

with this natasha was laughin like carzy n Bani was lookin for a place to hide her totally flushed face.whenever Jais name was uttered by her or nebody around d vicinity she blushed.an unknown feelin wud arise had rattle her senses.

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J:are tarun main to tujhe mar hi dalunga.kya yaar agar tera jaisea dost ho...uff.kine gussa tha main.kitna chilaya Bani par.

T:are wah Jai inte mahi hi tu apna rup Bani ko dikha diya.bechari darr jayegi.

J:tu kya samajta hai.maine uske baad pyaar bhi kiya na.manaya bhi to..

he understood the ball was out of his court.now he has to battle against showers of questions.

T:Jai tu to bara chupa rustam nikle gussa aur pyaar ek din mai.

S:mamaji mujhe apse class leni chahiye.ur my mentor from now.

J:chup kar sahil.

T:ne time netime.ab to Jai ke paas experience ki bhi kaami nahi hongi.jo problem ho Jai ke paas jana.ranveer this goes even 4 u.

by then Jais cheek hav turned red.he was tryin his best to move out frm there n sneak into Banis room.

Kunal came upto Jai.

K:Jai mujhe tumse kuch bat karni thi.

Jai found his face pretty serios.ne ways he wanted to ignore this threesome.

J:guys excuse me.lets go inside to my room kunal.

T:ha ha jao jao.ekbar tumari paas wale kamre main bhi nazar dal lene.


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~guys i will continue later this is not the end of the chapter.i will post later in d evenin.i hav to go for tution.

debolina
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Posted: 18 years ago
hmmmmmmmmmmm ok witing for ur update and so far its good i really liked that tigress part welldone 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 14 b

S:aap to aaj gaya.

Jai with long strides started movin towards them.

tarun in a low voice but audible :katle tarun nehito pitega.


with this he started movin backwards n Jai towards himtarun hit a vase.it crashed on d floor.then d move were seen runnin all over the hall.sahil n ranver to joined them.later kunal 2 joined.it was not well understod who was chasin who.but yes they were all runnin.it was a shockin sight to see the gr8 Jai Walia runnin chasin indias best lawyer n three more established businesmen runin at nothin.it was really an unusual sight.a more the perfect news for the page 3 reporters.if only they had seen them.it was more like school children runnin after a ball.but it was difficult to say who was the ball n who were the players.neways the spectators masi n aditya were havin a wonderful sight.but sombody was throwin mischievious glances from above the hall.it was specially 4 1 person.Bani was peepin from the pillar to see Jai runnin like a schhol kid.


N:kya hua Bani.kise dekh rahi ho.

B:woh main.

N:sach main Bani meine Jai bhaiya ko inta khush kabhi nahi dekha.thanx.

B:kisliye.

N:bhaiya ki zindigi main aanne ke liye.Walia house bhi hasi lautane keliye.


Jai had felt a pearcin glance towards him, an appreciatin glance.he turned around.he saw a petite figure peekin from a pillar.yes it was she.Jai forgot all abt tarun he at first was starin at the lowered eyes.n then abruptly started runnin abruptly towards the vast stair case.


as if Bani had understood wat he intended 2 do she with a swift movement retreated to her room.downstairs nobody cud understand awt happened.minutes ago they seen Jai runnin after tarun n they he vanished in the stair case.tehy cudnt guage wat happened.then it struck them.they saw natasha laughin up in the corridor.


Jai by then had reached in front of Bani's door.he thought of knockin.

J:Bani darwaza kholo.

there was no response.he knocked.with the slightest touch the door opened.Jai pushed the door n went inside.

outside the people were lookin with awe.

(ahhhhhhhhhh shud i say wat happened inside.chi kisi ki privacy ka dachiya ura rehe hai hum.neways kya kare control nahi hota)

Jai in a very low n seductive voice : Bani.

there was still no response.but a heavy noise of regular haert beatin cud be heard.

Jai saw her in front of the window.(kind off 19th june set up *cough* yes jaz she loves windows )

he slowly went forward (say Banis back was towards Jai)

he turned her around.

J:kuch to bolo.tumne suna na.hamari kal engagement hai.Bani.
tum khush to ho na.

Bani was still.her heart was beatin at a rapid rate.to support her from fallin he cluched Jais sleeves.

J:kuch to kaho.

B:aap khush hai na.

he took Banis hand n placed it on his heart.

J:kya mahesoos kar rahi ho tum.

Bani cud feel Jais heart poundin matchin her poundin rate.Bani cudnt take it n more.it aws too much 4 her with Jai so close.she turned around.

Jai went in front of Bani.

J:main tumse bahut pyaar karta hoon Bani.main bahut khush ki haam ek hone jarahe hai.tum kabhi mujhe chorke nahi jaogi na.(with Bani he was very vulnerable)

Bani cud feel his hot breath on her.she huged Jai.to wat say eternity for tehm but as a matter of fact it was minutes.

Bani had Jai broke from the hug still both very very close to eachother.( ahem ahem ).

Bani gave a slight peck on Jais cheek.

Jai was now grinnin like crazy.

with not a second word Jai brought his lips in front of Bani n kissed her.it was first a light kiss but it seemed as if both realizin the need for each other the kiss became intense.both ravishin each other.they brok apart from eachother by a knock on the door.

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ahem kaisa laga.

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debolina

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: black current

hmmmmmmmmmmm ok witing for ur update and so far its good i really liked that tigress part welldone 👏



how do u like this part.thanx appreciatin.if u hav ne suggetios pls pm me.
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Posted: 18 years ago
all silent readers plz comment it helps us write well.these r ur inspiratios 2 continue writen.whether bad or good.comments r encouragin.it make sus feel that ur efforts to entertain u r reachin u.
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 very nice and i was relly laughing when i imagined jai running behind trun 😆 and who the hell koncked ???????? yarr cant they leave them alone nie one and update soon waiting for the engagement party
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: black current

👏 very nice and i was relly laughing when i imagined jai running behind trun 😆 and who the hell koncked ???????? yarr cant they leave them alone nie one and update soon waiting for the engagement party



well actually imagin Jai the mighty JAI WALIA runnin after tarun.wat a hilarios scene.a engagement party help me i am really bad at romantic scenes.plz yaar mujhe dar lag raha hai.mere romantic scenes ka namuna to tumhe mil gaya honga.
debolina
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Posted: 18 years ago
i caught up.. go me go me.. i can't get maindek out of my head.. she called jai maindek 😆 tarun's slick 😉 so's uncle ji.. tarun toh abh bhi raazi hai shaadi ke liye.. hehe how nice.. i can't picture 'em all running around like lil kids 😆 yes i can i can picture it.. luvedddddddddd it.. can't wait fo d engagement.. yay.. cont soon deb .. SOON 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
yaar...what a part..well 2 parts...haila... 😳 😳
how cute the guys running around...who knew jai was like that...so care free... 😃
jai tune toh chance mar liya...bani ko dheka and u went upstairs...kuch to sabar karo... 😳 😳 😳
and yes hun...looks like banis fav spot is in fromt of windows...kya kare...she dreams aobut the romantic night and jai all in one... 😳
debo...kya kare...hum hai hi besharam..we have to know the details of what happens with JB behind closed doors...
we cant help it naa... 😛 privacy gaye bhad mein... 😉
but haila...knock at the door...always geting interupted...
im telling you if its pia..il kil her...dont care if she is good...
har jaga paar pia aajata hai...just like on the show...man...
update soon yaar.
JAZ

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