ff:AADAT pt 23 pg 45 5/5

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Hi guys
I am new here.it is my 1st time i am tryin my hands in writin.so plz bear with me. i am gonn atry n post all the parts in the first page.

AN INTRODUCTORY TO ALL THE CHARACTERS

JAI WALIA :He is an orphan.He has inherited a huge empire from his parents.Lives with his two sisters namely Natasha(a +ve character.Loves her brother.She is younger to jai.She is married to Kunal who is a rich guy.she hasnt concieved yet)and jigyasa(basically a grey character.She is married .Hsas three kids who r nearly d same age as Jai.Jai and she hav a lot of age difference.She is very dominatin though hasent succeeded over jai).Jai knows tat lot of girls drool over him.He is completely aware of the effect he has on d girls.He is a 30 year old business tycoon.girls find him extermly handsome.He has got enough time to look for his soulmate.

ADITYA MALHOTRA:He is jigyasa's husband.A very close friend of jai.Almost a father figure to Jai.He is not as rich as Jai .According to his mother the biggest mistake in his life his jigyasa.(Therent divorced yet for the sake of Jai)

BANI DIXiT:A rich girl.Has three sisters namely Pia and Rano.She runs her family business.She is not as rich as Jai.She is settled in New York.Has never com to india.has a ancesteral house in india (mumbai).Works very hard to expand her business.

PUSHKAR:He is Jai's friend.He is financially unstable.Falls in love with all beautiful girls he comes across.Basically a bhola bhala guy.Life changes for him when he meets the dixit sisters.

RAHUL SIXANT:Bani's friend.Secretly he loves Bani.Never dared to propose her since he is completely aware that Bani has no time for love.Helps Bani run her business.

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hope u like it

Chapter 1 page 1
Chapter 2 page 1
Chapter 3 page 2
Chapter 4 page 3
Chapter 5 page 4
Chapter 6 page 5
Chapter 7 page 8
Chapter 8 page 11
Chapter 9 page 13
Chapter 10 page 13
Chapter 11 page 17
Chapter 12 page 19
Chapter 13 page 20
Chapter 14 page 21
Chapter 14 b page 22
Chapter 15 page 24
Chapter 16 page 24
Chapter 17 page 26
Chapter 18 page 29
Chapter 19 page 29
Chapter 20 page 31
Chapter 21 page 36
Chapter 22 page 40

Chapter 23 page 45



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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow.. can't wait.. fo once bani's rich.. thank god.. luved d preview 👏
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wooww..souundss grr88
do updatee soon..hunii....will be waiting..and yhh datss soo tru ...naz for once bani is...rich..looollz..fanksx...will be lukin forward to it surely !!
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wow...cool preview...im glad that u made bani rich and independent i n ths one...cant wait 👏
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wowie.. sounds good.. gr8 work n welcome to KS forum!!! 😳
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thanks will update the first part shortly.can u huys suggest ne name to it.
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PART !

The sun glinted on the elegant mansard roof of THE WALIA HOUSE,as a turbo powered Bentley Azure (costed the owner almost half a million dollar)drove around the last bend in the seemingly endless driveway.The sight of the imposing French manor cud take any man's breath.The house was surronded by fourteen acres of park and impeccably manicured gardens.The car stopped in front of the portique.The man inside was the most ravishin guy the world had ever seen.He was humming the song La Boheme.He was breathtakingly handsome man with extraordinary elegance.

He stepped inside the house.The house was a reflection to the owners personna.He was greeted inside by his secretory Anita.And was informed about the day's appointment.Suddenly his mobile phone rang and a deep husky voice was heard " Hello, JAI WALIA speaking".The conversation didnt last long.He seemed to be a busy man.

From upstairs a came a lady almost the same age as Jai Walia.Seeing her his expression change.From the seriousness of the face vanished and revealed a mischievios smile.

Natasha:Bhaiya,its ben long.Itne din kaha teh.apko bahut
miss kiya.any ways how was ur trip.

Jai:Ya fine.Shot another deal.Not a big one though.Missed u guys a lot.Where's di.aur aditya.ghar pe sab kaha hai.

N:Everybodys at hope.U will get to see them.O ya the kids are at college.aur Anu ghar pe hai.

J:kyun.di ne firse data.uff ye di bhi na.

N:nahi.she is just ill.

Jai expression changed.He rushed to her nieces room.she had a little temperatur.

J:Has the doctor been informed.Oh my god no body told me Anu is ill.Is she serious.

N:Bhaiya aap chinta mat kijiye.Its a minor flu.Kuch nahi huye ise.Aap abhi aaye hai jaje aaram kijiye.Mai apki breakfast uper apke kamre mai bhijwati hu.

J:ya its ok.(still his face marked a expression of fear)


Jai entered his room.Lit the lits.He sat on his king size bed.He knew he was alone in life.But never excepted the fact.He knew his heart was waiting for somone.Someone who
loved him and not his money.He knew there were girls drooling over him.But never felt the urge to mingle with them.

Suddenly his door flew open and there stood Anu.

Jai rushed to her

J:y did u com up here.ur sick.go n rest.

A:woh mamaji actually i am alright.

J:Its better u dont argue.so go and rest.

A:Mamaji i am fine.actually it was an excuse for not goin to college.I was sick and tired of followin the same old routine.But when i saw u so upset with me gettin ill i came to u to reveal the truth.sorry.

J:its ok.The truth is i also used to do all this when i was at ur age.

There a fit of laughter that cud be heard which brought in jigyasa.

Ji:Jai tum aagaye.ye keya Anu y r u up here u shud me down restin.u r becomin very disobedient nowadays.

J:Di its is ok.She is feelin a little fine now so i thought of talkin to her.i will take care she takes a lot of rest(eyein towards Anu)

Ji:Its ok then.I will go and tell adi that u r here.

J:Ya i wantin to meet him desperately.
oh di while goin plz close the door.and except for aditya dont let ne one disturb us. u see we r sharin a lil mama banji moment.

A lil later Aditya entered with a big glowin smile.
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guys hope u like it.if u want i can continue.i am not as good as the others here.Pardon me for my mistakes.


PART 2
Aditya walked in with a big grin in his face.He was happy to see his friend after so many days.The threesome sat had a gala chat.It seemed as though they were all of the same age.After a while Anu's cell phone rang.She exused herself and went to attend the phone.Aditya turned towards Jai.H had expected that Jai would go to office first.

A:I thought u wud be goin to office.U had told me so.

J:I planned it.But thought i wud com and meet everybody and then go to office.y is there any problem.

A:No dont worry.Pushkar and I managed the office quite well u see.And Pushkar managed to return to office everyday witha black eye.

Hearing this both broke out into a hearty laugh.

A:Ne ways enough u shud go to office and check out ur new office.It will be a pleasent sight for u.

Just then Jai's cell phone rang.
It was Masi on the other side.

M:Hello,Munna.kaisa hai.Tere trip kaise tha.

J:Masi mai acha huh.Chandigarh se aap kab lotrahi hai.

M:Bas do teen dino main.

Jai cud hear Dadi on the other side.He wanted to speak to her.

J:Masi aap zara dadi ko phone dengi.

D:Ha Jai puttar kaisa hai.

J:Mai acha hu.Aur aap.

D:Yaha bahut shanti yeh jigyasa ke bina.wayever tujhe abhi tak koi mili kai.

J:kya dadi.sach kyoin danki larki milti hi nahi.

D:Woh Rani Mukherjee kasi rahegi.

Jai and Dadi entertained eachother like this for sometime.And then jai headed for office.
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On the other side of the world a girl in the late 20's cud be seen walkin hastily on the streets of New York.

She entered her office which was at the 20th floor of a buliding.
Laura her assistant rushed to her sayin that the meetin wud be startin in another 15 mins.
She gathered her belongings and rushed towards the conference room.
She was greeted by a large number of whites.Very confidentaly she addressed the members present.

Hello this is Bani Dixit.The managing director of Dixit enterprises.

She carried on the meeting with utmost grace.She returned to her office soon after the meetin ended.

She was greeted with a stack of papers lyin heaped on her desk.
She frowned unable to decided from were to start.she was at home for 2 days coz Rano aws ill.Now she had enormous amount of pending wok.
Just then the door flew open and enter Rahul Sixant.Like gentleman he offered Bani help.Soon they both were busy clearing the mess from the table.

R:Bani u were suppose to go for the meetin in chicago.U sud be there by tommorow.Shud i accompany u.

B:No its ok. I remember.I will be catching a flight in the evening.

R:O BTW u were suppose to go to india.ur uncles lawyer had agained called up to confirm when u r coming.oh yes he told me to convey to u that u have to go there with ur sisters.

B:After the chicago meeting is over i will surely go to india..Ah rahul can u bring me a cup of brew plz.

R:Ya sure.

with this Rahul exited and Bani again collapsed into her dream world.The very thought of goin to India excited her.

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Hope u guys like it.will be waitin for ur reply's
Debolina.

Edited by frndsnstrngers - 18 years ago
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Interesting start jaan!😛

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Great Start!!! Pls continue soon!!!
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great beginning.loved it.You should name your ff. 😊

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