Dard ka pyar...ff (part 4-end) upated now - Page 5

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Posted: 19 years ago
#41
aawww please continue whenever you can sweetu didi your ff is just excellent aap itna sara posts sa batha sak thi hain ki aap kitna acha likh thi hain please take your time and continue didi love ya didi
aap ki gudia 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 4-very short( no wait...i think i wrote too much now LOL) and not good at all;)

Both could hardly breath but…through each others lips they now could…

Love so profound that death could never come…love so profound… a single touch so profound that words were not necessary….their silence said it all…

Love…..sealed with a kiss


Oblivious to the world and occurrences around them only know of one another's presence in each others arms…tears of pure bliss fall….

He gently broke away from her, her eyes were still closed and she was breathing heavily…he blushed when he saw her swollen red lips…he nuzzled her neck gently…
His senses were still numb from the shock of the kiss…

She opened her eyes and looked into the eyes of the man she had given her life to…she blushed as his intense gaze bore into her…

One love…one soul…nothing more…

He slowly got up…wanting to needing to savour this moment for when their hearts had now forever joined…sealed with a kiss…a kiss of such profound love that even thinking about it was impossible….

Eyes still locked, lost in the motion of time….

Both were now standing….neither spoke…both scared to break what had just only been realised and come true…both scared to break what their one action had caused….

Silence speaks more than words…actions can say it …but silence says it all…

She turned away from him…tears fell…and she gently started to move a few steps away from him…

His eyes widened as he saw her move away from his side…his body felt a sudden ache for her to be close to him...he did not want to be separated from the one person he now considered his whole entire life…

Her very footsteps were stopped by his actions…..she turned around…he saw her tear stained face…his heart ached for her pain...it cried for her tears….
He whipped away her sorrows…with his lips…
Shivers ran down her spine…his very touch killed her…she ached all over for him…just one she whispered silently…just once….

Separation had caused a sudden ache longing for him to be with her hold her…kiss her…love her…

Tears fell…love blossomed…

Sensing her want he teased her, by gently trailing his fingers on her neck, back through her hair….she shivered…her ache doubled…he trailed gently kisses down her neck…forehead…nose…lips…cheeks…she groaned…she dug her hands into his shoulder…they hit the wall with a gentle thud….he smiled gently…loving teasing her…loving her crave for him…his touch…just once….he tormented her with his lips almost touching hers but never holding on….

Torment of the craving heart….

He opened his eyes…and saw what his small actions had on her….he gently bent down and covered his lips with hers….ending her ache…

Two lovers locked in time…not caring for the world around only one another…such pure bliss…

The darkness shone down upon them…covering them protectively like a blanket from all those around…only the moons light could reach their forms….silently kissing…

Kiss of longing and need…of addiction….;)

They slowly and reluctantly broke away…never wanting it to end…eyes filled with love so strong that it was unbreakable…

He enveloped his hands in hers…their foreheads touched….silence prevailed…..
He embraced her in his arms...never wanting to let go…their eyes closed enjoying the moment of love….

That night two souls met forever more becoming one…deep love of passion…all time stopped in their presence….their silence said it all…

That night to lovers met amongst the shadows of the darkness and shine of the moon.

Love…what is love…
Love is Bani and Jai….


I hope u guys enjoyed this part…its not that good compared to the others….pls do leave comments!

luv sweetu

p.s. if u are wondering to the walia family…well they dying to know where bani is…no one thinks that she is maybe with her husband… and they r crying and worrying for jai…funny family…they don't think to check in J's room...but probably for the best because if they did…well I think they'd regret it;)
😳 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#43
I am speechless Sweetu

You are great and this fic just rocks 👍🏼
very good 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#44
awwwwwww that was gr8 and yesssss luv IS jai and bani.. awwwwww mannn that was WOW.. plz cont soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
wow wow wow!!!
I am utterly speechless!!
that was soo beautiful!!
It's a shame it has ended but i look forward to nemore fanfics u have swimming in ur head!!

Luv Taz
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
omgggggggggggggg didi
i am speechless not enough words to praise your writting didi
didi you have to continue it is simply superb
it is just wonderful didi
omg didi please continue just superb 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#47
WOW SWEETU THAT WAS MINDBLOWING! PLEEZ CONT SOON!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#48
didi..

i am amazed,, at ur writing, u said it was bad, its beautiful!!

loved it!!

i was about to say please do continue.. then realised ur title said part 4 was
the end!

It was a beautiful ending!!

👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
omg that was so swettttttmade me cry 😭 and blush at the same time 😉 😳 very beautiful!!!
👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
That was sooo well written!! U made me cry!! 😭 😭 😭 But that was really good!!!!

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