heyguys...this is the second part..i wrote it when i was bored LOL...and i edited and only tweaked it proerly ow...when i was and still am half asleep!!!
so idunno if its gonna be dat good....
But guys just as a warning..read the last few lines of this ff...slwoly and carefully and all will be revealed...that i promise u...
anyways i dunno if u guys will like it i hope u do!!
He was her life...she somehow had known that he was in the hospital...how strong their love was...she could sense him in trouble...
Walia family turned around to see a completely shattered and ill looking bani staggering towards them muttering Jai...everyone was shocked to see her in such a state...then as she fell they screamed....
Both fighting a battle of breath...to live...to find the other...to hold the other...
Two hearts...one heartbeat...wat will happen to them...will their love for the other help them survive??
As Bani fell she felt her heart leave her...her mind became blank as an unknown force numbed all...
She craved to be with him...to touch him...just once...but paralyzed by something strange...something called love...
Joined were they such…that if one suffered, the other would too…
At the exact moment bani had fallen unconscious J's mind had gone numb of feeling and his heart had stopped beating....just for a moment….but his breaths were getting shorter
Neither is aware of what is going on…her heart beats for him…but it is slowly slowing down with each passing moment…as the man she loves is now slowly slipping through her very clasp…
Around the two lovers there is complete panic as the family weeps in distress to see the two loved ones, who love one another to such an extent that neither can bear the others pain...even being unconscious,
To such extent is this families grief that the tears just dare not stop…panic prevails and rules all….
Bani feels her husband slipping away from her and with a slight groan clasps onto reality wakes up and runs out of the room, much to the surprise to the family that surround her…
They shout to her…but none reach her throbbing ears….who just now crave to hear her name only uttered from his…
With her sari's pallu slowly coming off…she runs with her entire might past the almost deserted corridor…to where her heart is taking her…she ignores the numb pain that has suddenly ignited itself within her heart…she runs to him…she breaths for him…
She runs the room…where he is taking his last breaths, oblivious to all…no one has noticed though….she stops abruptly in front of it….everything comes rushing back…and a sudden pain blows gently inside her…she looks into the window where she sees her husband lying there helpless…trying to breathe…
His difficulty is unknown to all…only she can sense it…Their love is so profound…
She opens the door…letting it close behind her and runs to him…and collapses on his body…agonized sobs shake her whole body as she gives her life to his heart…she weeps…she knows…she feels his anguish…she knows he cant breath…but she herself cant either…bound by the same love that made them one…she weeps for all….
Such bitter agony….
Her tears stain his flesh…J is unconscious…but hears her bitter sobs…he can't breathe….but he now has a wish to…
She stares at his pale face and gently with now silent tears falling down touches his face with her fingers…she shivers…tears fall on his lips…she gently brushes them away…and gently, doesn't know why but, bends down and kisses them…letting her kiss of anguish say it all…telling him to breathe…
His suffocation is killing her….
He feels it on his own…so soft…he has a wish to feel them…he can feel her anguish…it is now rushing into every fibre of his body…he wants to comfort her…
His lips slowly part…and he gently kisses her…tasting her teas and anguish…and love…
He doesn't move…he can't, paralyzed by his very own heartbeats…his breath is leaving him…he used what little strength he could…just to feel her once…
Just once…..
Her kiss suppresses his slowing heartbeats…she breaths life into him just for a few moments…with her every movement of her lips…
The ache in her heart increases…as she knows she can now no longer suppress it…she feels his lips move…she understands all through his kiss…she lets him feel her just once more…through the kiss…
Kiss of such passion and longing…
Just once…and then the machine falls silent…not a breath is heard…silence prevails all…tears fall…yet nothing is heard…the final heartbeats beat…
Just once more….just once more….
She falls to the floor…her breaths slowly stopping…she weeps her heart out….refuses to acknowledge anything…such are her tears that she notices not, and hears nothing, the gentle movement next to her….
Her senses are numb that not even this new ray of hope…can rid her of her pain…pain so profound…that her will to live is slowly leaving her…
Tears fall…Two heartbeats now beat…two lives joint…what is the truth…what is going on…will love conquer death…??
Love so profound…that not even death can come in-between…that not even death can separate them…Love so profound…that not even death can come….
Ok guys i know…look at what I've done…but pls dun wrry…be ready for the next part Pls leave comments…
Just to comfort u nothing will happen to bani and J jodi in this ff…
Read the last few lines carefully and then only then will all be revealed…read carefully…
Edited by sweetu144 - 19 years ago
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