Dard ka pyar...ff (part 4-end) upated now

The sound of a shot echoed around him....blood spilt uncontrollably...he shut his eyes and let the tears fall and muttered bani...before falling unconciouse...

she was his last and every thought...his every breath..

Bani awoke with a sudden jolt and screamed JAI...she didn't know why but she could sense that he was not ok...she clutched her stomach in pain...tears fell from her eyes..she didn't even know why...she couldnt breathe...all seemed a blur...she got up and started to run...she ran staright from the house where she had been recovering from after the bomb blast, not caring about her killing heacahe...she followed wherever he feet took her...passing the raging and mad traffic...to her heart...she ran for her life...

She felt as if her life was slipping through her hands....

He was rushed into hospital...his state was critical...but he kept murmuring bani....bani...
His family looked on worried and lost for words for the man who was always so strong now looking completly weak and shattered....

He breathed for her...he didn't care if he died...his every and last heartbeat he would give to her...bani...he murmured...

As her footsteps entered the hospital...she didn't even know where she was going, but only one name raced through her heart and mind JAI....
her eyes were swollen, and her hand was bleeding again, where it had been hurt in the bomb blast...she could barely see she staggered to a group of people, not able to reconize them...she was slowly falling uncocniouse...she breathed with her last breath JAI....

He was her life...she somehow had known that he was in the hospital...how strong was their love...she could sense him in trouble...

Walia family turned around to see a completly shatterd and ill looking bani staggering towards them mutterin Jai...everyone was shocked to see her in such a state...then as she fell they screamed....

Both fighting a battle of breath...to live...to find the other...to hold the other...

Two hearts...one heartbeat...wat will happen to them...will their love for the other help them survive??

ok guys i was bored sitting at home...so i thought i'd write a ff...starting from yesterdays epi...its not that good😳...doesn't have any lovey scenes wif bani and J yet...but it will soon😉😃!!
tell me what u think of it ...leave comments!!

luv sweetu

very good,please continue 👏 👏 👏

very good. loved it. please, please continue soon.

wowwwwwwwwwwwww i just the pain in my haert for these two

plzzzzzzzzzz continue. 👏

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plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continueeeeeeeee

awww guys thank you for taking the time to read my ff...i am glad dat u guys want me to continue and i will soon!!
hopefully next part will have some Bani and J scenes! 😉 😃 😳 !!
thanks guys once again for reading it!!
luv ya sweetu 😃

This is you writing when you're bored?!!😕

Hun...you have to continue this!!

Originally posted by: nibbles

This is you writing when you're bored?!!😕

Hun...you have to continue this!!

😆😆lol jaan!!
heheh yh!
and i will contnue it soon!
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wow jaan its a great start! 😛

guys i have just written part 2 and i will post it soon...i just need to add something more to it and tweak it a bit!!
if i cannot post it today then by tomoorw u shall have part 2 at ur very doosteps...waiting to be read😃!
thank u all once again for ur sweet coments!! realli appreciate it!
sweetu 😃