Dard ka pyar...ff (part 4-end) upated now - Page 3

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Posted: 19 years ago
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🤗 thank u all for reading the second part i realli appreciate that u took ur time to read it!! 😃
i really appreciate all ur comments!!
I will post part three later today or by tomorrow!!
Once again THANK YOU!!!
😃
guys i am srry...i most likely will continue it tomorrow...as i am exhausted, i had guests at my house....srry guys....but i promise u tomorrow part 3 will be on ur computer screens...just waiting to be read!!
luv ya
sweetu 😃
Edited by sweetu144 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i loved it
so wonderful 👏 👏
a big bear 🤗 for writting such a great ff
pls do cont hun
take care
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Posted: 19 years ago
#23
really nice 😛 please continue 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#24
great fanfic...... enjoyed reading the parts...... pls do cont soon


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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: girly_arshxoxo

wow! raksha great starting so much suspence and suddenely breakes out too good! 👏




oofeeeee my jannn...wat a bad mistake...how can u forget my name...its not raksha...its sweetu😆😉....arshuuuuuu...i fink some1 is having memory problems...LOL..😆😆...how could u forget my name 😆😆😆!!!


Edited by sweetu144 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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appology NOT accepted😆😆....yaar change it naaa...how could u forget my name...yaar its sweetu!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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OK guys here is the next part…it is not that good…as I once again woke up late and just wrote what came out of my head…as i made a promise that i would post it today...hope u guys like it though….


There was a gentle movement across the room…..but she was oblivious to it, her heart was breaking…she lay motionless on the floor, only her stifled sobs could be heard, they shook her body….and were slowly killing her…

Silent heartache….of the broken heart…

The movement came closer….

She felt a warm hand on her shoulder…yet refused to acknowledge it….all her hopes and dreams had been shattered all had in an instant turned to ash….she wept her heart out….
How could she acknowledge this person when the one who her heart was weeping for was no more….

Two heartbeats….one love….

And then she heard it….her name…uttered from those lips which she thought would never once again say her name….
Her tears still fell….refusing to acknowledge all…not daring to believe…...

Not daring to believe the strength of love…not wanting to…

The strong man like figure slowly bent down and gently lifted her chin…her eyes were closed and she was crying tears of blood for her heat….the one who she had just lost….
But had she really??

She still refused to acknowledge the person who was now holding her face and gently stroking her hair….how could she….

Two heartbeats….one breath….and only one message of love….
What is going on??

She was not surrendering herself to her senses…she didn't want to open her eyes and for it to be a dream….but her heart was sending her strange messages…those that even if she wanted to believe she dared not…

He knew she wouldn't acknowledge his presence…she had numbed all her senses…to such extent was her pain and love for him...he needed to show her tell her that it was him…living and breathing….she had brought life into him…through that one kiss…Now it was his turn….he would give back her life, the one he had just moments ago stolen….

Stolen heartbeats….stolen breath…but only one love…

He slowly bent down and touched his lips against hers…so soft…he let out a groan and pulled her closer, needing her wanting her, never wanting to be separated from her….
he deepedned and Lengthened the kiss with each movement of his lips against hers...
He trailed his lips down to her neck...to where her pulse was now beating wildly, he knew that she now knew all, he gently bit down and then trailed his tongue over it…
He gently trailed his lips back to hers and kissed her passionately…With every movement of their lips…their love was now slowly being sealed and becoming stronger…each were pouring their heart out…to one another…all was sealed with a kiss…

Kiss of such anguish and love….that it was maddening….

She couldn't breathe….it was him….his kiss…it was him….She knew it was him, the moment his had touched hers….gently tears fell….but silence still prevailed all around…

Through one kiss all was proven….all shattered and lost hopes once again one…..

He gently let go off her and nuzzled her neck and trailed his fingers around his mark…his of love for her….he felt her shiver….and gently kissed her again…needing her and now never wanting to let go….he wanted to needed to taste her…hold her...he kissed her till the breath left him…yet he still continued…

Both could hardly breath but…through each others lips they now could…

Love so profound that death could never come…love so profound…... a single touch so profound that words were not necessary….their silence said it all…

Love…...sealed with a kiss of two people with one love, one heartbeat and one heart

Love so profound...that death was unimportant...only each others presence was...


😳 i hope u liked the third part...if u guys want i can end it here or just contionue on...
😳 this part wasnt that good...i was no in my senses when i was writing this...lol i was like half asleep...any comment would be appreciated !!

LOts of love
sweetu 😃
Edited by sweetu144 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#28

WOW IT WAS AMAZING
PLZZZ CONT SOOOOOOOOOON 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#29
GReat swwetu, but do continue 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#30
tht was so good plz continue soon!!! 👏 👏 👏

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