love respect and hate(FF)part18 last part - Page 5

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Posted: 19 years ago
#41
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nice part
dadi so cute
plz continue soon 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#42
please tryn bring bani and jai together somehow please
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Posted: 19 years ago
#43
too good .I think jai does not deserve bani as he never takes her side, while her friend does.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#44
herez another part
part 12 enjoy 😃

he drifted of in2 a deep sleep in which he dreamed of a beautiful world....with bani
dadi:- jai putar,jai,JAI WAKE UP
jai:- huh oh itz u dadi
dadi:-jai me sahil and aditya are goin 2 anu's baby shower ceremoy do u want 2 cum?? bani invited us and it wud mean alot 2 anu if we all went
(jai sat up straight at hearing bani's name)
jai:- sure dadi i will cum wt tyme 2 we have 2 go?
dadi:- well bani sed 7.00 buh we will go at 7.01
jai:-(slightly amused) y is that dadi?
dadi:- cuz i wanna b fashionably l8
jai:-(laughin) dadi...u keep up with the tymes at that age i cnt do that teach me 2
dadi:- sureee itz easy 1st change ur wardrobe ur goin 2 a ceremony nt a meeting so wear this itz wt sharukh wore in kal ho na during the song mahi ve and change ur expression do this 1..2..3..eeeeeeeeeeee (copying sharukh in kal ho naa ho)cuz wen ur angry u look like a werewolf 😉 and dnt gt angry and frown u will gt wrinkles alwayz smile
jai:- dadi will do
dadi:- oh and i have shoes 2 go with 2nites clothes jus freshen up and gt ready i'll b back,that line is 4rm an english movie u kno jai
jai:- (laughin) yesss i kno dadi
jai freshens up and comes out of the bathroom wear wt dadi gave him
he looks up 2 c a small slim female figure on his bed,she was dressed in a black silk saree with a strap blouse (like wt tanisha wears in mamta)she had silver jewellery wich sparkled in the dim light she woz a well known person and jai identified her immediately it woz bani..... 😃 😉 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
OMGOMGOGM... im lik soo exctied do con. next part plzz 👏 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
well herez another part
part 13

she woz a well known person and jai identified her immediately it woz bani.....
jai:-(thinkin) i'm nt drunk wich means bani is reeeli hereeee
bani:- (mystically) hello,mr walia well u sure no how 2 keep me waiting u took ur time
jai:- errmmmm..bani. i..woz u kno ...jus..gttin...clothe changed
bani:- mr waliaaaa that made absolutley no sense buh i gt wt u ment (suddenly becomes serious) neyway let me come 2 the point i havent cum 4 a social visit.....
jai:- ...oh rite i unders....
bani:-(interruptin) do not interrupt me plz , rite as i woz seyin b4 u so rudley interrupted (jai looks down) i want 2 ask u wat exactly r u waiting 4, im nt a bus that after every 10mins there will b another 1,i am a women if u dnt tell me u love me how will i kno that u love me i cnt read ur mind ,
jai:-(confused) if u kno that i love u then y wud u need me 2 tell u
bani:- (amused) u reeli thort i am bani, oh dear, u have no common sense nt worry
jai:- (still bit dazed)wt r u then...my fairy godmother
bani:-(angry) this isnt a fairytale and u ent cinderella so listen up i will only warn u 3 times thisis ur 2nd warning tell bani u love her or the path 4 u iz lonliness and divorce
jai:-(agitated at hearing the word divorce) (grabs bani by the shoulder) rite i have had enough of this paheli (riddle) jus tell me hu u r and wt u want
(the light is turned on by dadi and jai stares at the air in wich bani stood moments before)
dadi:- (confused) jai putar wt were u doin
jai:-(reeeli confused) oh ummm nothin we shud go now rite?
dadi:-(quite seriously) ye otherwise we will b unfashionably l8
jai:-(tryin 2 smile) yes dadi
dadi gives jai the shoes and jai puts them on dadi goes out of the door there woz sum1 by the door hummin "humko deewana kar gay" jai looked up expecting 2 find dadi buh it wosnt it woz bani
bani:- (mystically) byeee jai make sure u tell me otherwise i wnt kno
and with that she vanished jai blinked thinkin his eyes and ears had betrayed him and he walked out the door thinkin about wt he shud do tell bani or keep quite....


hope u enjoyed that ill b back in 10 mins with part 14 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#47
wow!!!! thtz was so adorable........i want more.....n more...plzzz continue 😉 😳 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#48
really awesome
dear
👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
more more... BRAVOOO BRAVOOO 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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herez part 14
and with that she vanished jai blinked thinkin his eyes and ears had betrayed him and he walked out the door thinkin about wt he shud do tell bani or keep quite....
they arrived at akashz place, the tension between jai and akash woz high but they managed 2 sey hello
aditya and jai stood by the glass window wich showed the entire beach, and tlked bout business dadi admired john and rani pictures up everywere. and sahil and akash sat on bean bagz and tlked bout girls and fast cars (usual boy thing).then anu came walkin down the stairs with bani, anu in a deep blue crush silk saree and gold jewllery bani wore a pure white saree with silver jewellery both looked great akash and jai couldnt stop staring, anu did the ceremony and after that begin 2 tlk 2 the guest during this akash and bani sat and tlked bani woz laughin and leaning on akash's shoulder jai felt a burning sensation within himself wen he saw this, it woz an emotion wich he had never experienced a feeling of jelousy.the number of guestz decreased as every1 left,jai dadi aditya and sahil 2 left. all the way back 2 his house jai felt angry and in pain he felt stupid 4 nt telling bani how he felt he felt like a dark force had grabbed his heart and woz refusing 2 loosen itz grip he felt like he wud neva b happy and the brightest light wud still b darker than ever. he sat and drank that night for 3 hours thinking about bani and akash 2gther and laughin at him he fell asleep there in the chair thinkin of bani and akash gttin married and him being alone he woke up abruptly next morning 2 find himslef in his study, he had a headache and his eyes pained just as much as his heart, to make it worse the phone rang
RING RING RING RING
dadi picked up the phone
dadi:- oye bani putar you y r u ringin this early in the morning!!!
jai stood up he woz confused and felt somethin bad has happened but he cudnt think he walked out of the room in a brisk attidue manner.


enjoyyyyy 😛

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