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Posted: 19 years ago
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thankz 4 da commentz guyz well heres part 5
anu:- BANIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
every1 lukz in the direction and see her tumbling down the stairssss
akash runs down stairs and he scoopz bani up into his arms and walks out of the house as fast as he can anu followz anu sits at the back of the car and tries 2 bring bani back in2 conscieouns (soz bout da spellings nt veri gud)akash drives as fast as he can 2 the hospital his heart beating so fast that his ear drums r popping. they reached the hospital and rushed bani in 2 the operation theatre, they waited outside, the doctor came outside finally and sed her condition is still quite serious buh she iz stable u can go nd c her now and plz collect the prescription 4rm the main reception
akash:- thank god shez orite
both of them walk in bani smiles
bani:- (weakly) hello
anu:- di hw r u feeling?
bani:- ill survive
anu:- this is all my fault im sooooo sorry.. i shud have nevaaa insisted on leaving
bani:- dont worry ill b fine now u have 2 worry bout urself and the child akash iz it orite if we stay with u?
akash:- is that sumthing 2 ask buh since u asked yes u can
bani:- wen can i leave im reeli bored
akash:- u have onli bin here 4 2 hours and ur already moaning no matter ill go ask the doctor
akash leaves he reaches the main office and bumpz in2 jai,the tension is high between the 2 the both give each other angry looks (dey jealous of eachova)
jai:- (angrily)watch were ur goin
akash:-(jus as angrily) no i wnt afterall itz not ur house so dnt u dare tell me wt 2 do and hu r u here 2 meet ur gyalfwend?
jai:- itz none of ur business buh if u must no im here 2 meet my wife BANI
akash:- well i guess u ought 2 no she ent interested in meetin u (luks behind jai).....or ur family shez gt her family ME AND ANU.......
jai has anger in his eyes and his fists are at his side.....

hope u like it 😃 enjoyyyyy
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Posted: 19 years ago
#22
well i jus thort of an idea so i thort id rite it down b4 i 4gt 😆
part 6
akash:- well i guess u ought 2 no she ent interested in meetin u (luks behind jai).....or ur family shez gt her family ME AND ANU.......
jai has anger in his eyes and his fists are at his side.....
jai:- (griiting his teeth) u..need..2..mind..ur..own..business
akash:-(calmly)bani is my business shez my best friend
jai:- (calming down slightly)she used 2 b ur best freind and as her husband u have no rite 2 stop me
akash:- i have every rite cuz u her husband 4 names sake u never loved her and if u did love her then y wud accuse her without thinkin
jai:- (mumbling)...(sounded like i made a mistake)
akash:- (victorious voice) well mr walia if u dnt mind i have sum business 2 attend 2 so will u kindly gt out of my way
jai moves and decides 2 cum back l8er he and everybody else leaves
akash:-(cool american boy tone)yo... doc can i have a word
doctor:- (slightly upset at being addressed in that way )yes mr patel hw can i help u
akash:- 1st call me akash and 2nd bani wantz 2 leave so can she cum wid me 2 my house ill hire a nurse nd everything so can we take her home?~
doctor:-(still mardy bout being called doc) ermm very well buh i will take no responsiblitity if something happens 2 mrs patel..(akash woz gunna interuppt buh he liked the sound of mrs bani patel).. and yes u can take a nurse nd im alwayz here if u need ney help
akash:- thankz doc..(seeing the frown on his face)..tor

they took bani home the very next morning,jai again came 2 the hospital and narrowly missed bani and as he didnt no were akash lives he woz left with nothing but a picture 2 remind him of her (he misses her)

there we go another part complete 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#23
that was great i really enjoyed reading that....hope u continue 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#24
tht was amazing 👏 👏 ....yipeeee.......atleast now jai realizes how much bani means to him....he misses her!!! he misses her!!! 😆 😆 .........plzzz continue......can't wait to read more 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#25
awwwwww... how CUTEEEE... cant wait to find out wat happenes next 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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fab part
please continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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well hello agen i cnt stop writin my fingers cnt stop writing so herezz another part sorry 2 bore u
part7
they took bani home the very next morning,jai again came 2 the hospital and narrowly missed bani and as he didnt no were akash lives he woz left with nothing but a picture 2 remind him of her (he misses her).....
jai didnt search 4 bani as he thort she wud b happy living with akash buh 1 day after 7 months without bani he cudnt hold it in he had 2 meet her so he searched and seacrched 4 a week till he found the adresss conincidently it woz anuz birthday in 3dayz so they decided 2 go there 2gether

akash's house on anu's birthday
evening time
bani is wearin a black and silver saree with a fantastic silver chain anu is wearin a red dress (maternity 1 cuz she gt a 7 month baby in her) and akash is wearin a black nd red t shirt and denim trousers they r sittin down 2 eat a fantastic meall wich they prepared altogether they had jus decided they were goin 2 the beach 4 a midnite walk and ice cream (akash woz rich and lived in a sea facin flat)
knock knock
akash:- (cool boy tone) oh man hu iz disturbin ma meal i swear if itz the guy 4rm downstairs seyin he wants sumthinn i will give him somethin his teeth in his hand
anu:- (laughin) jus chill akash ill gt the door he wnt ask me 4 it cuz ill pretend 2 b in labour pain i kno dat scares him 😆 😆
anu opens the door 2 find her whole family her smiles vanishes and anger appearz
anu:- yes can i help u
everybody is shocked at this behaviour of anu's esp mausi hu iz dere as well

well ill continue in bout 10 mins so enjoy ill b back 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow... kewl... omg please please please con. ur leaving me hanging yaar
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Posted: 19 years ago
#29
agen cnt stop maself so here we go (agen)
part 8
anu:- yes can i help u
everybody is shocked at this behaviour of anu's esp mausi hu iz dere as well
mausi:- beta, dnt sey that we r ur family and we love u
anu:- sorry mausi,im nt angry with u am jus angry bout wt they sed(lukz at every1 else )sed
bani hears mausizz voice and comes rushing 2 the door closely followed by akash
bani:- (happily) mausi u? omg come in itz reeli hot in the corridors come in 2 the cool
akash seyz hello 2 every1 bani closes the door after jai has enetered (jealousy baby) akash and jai stare at each other with pure disgust
bani:- so wt do u want tea,coffee,juice or water
aditya:- nothing bani sit down we need 2 tlk 2 u both and u 2 akash
akash:- (cool boy tone used by accident)ye wtz up popz..(embarresed) i mean uncle
dadi:- dnt worry putar ur just like hrithik roshan totally foolish but cute live long putar
everybody laughz even jigyasa and ranveer
anu:- ( bit angry bout everybody laughin at akash) yes but wt did u want 2 sey
aditya:- (serious) i think ranveer shud explain and we want u 2 understand we have ur best interests at heart
ranveer:-(bit nicer 2 anu then he iz 2 every1 else) anu we want u 2 put the child up 4 adoption as soon as it iz born
bani,akash and anu'z smiles fade


well enjoy im thinkin of ideas lol 😆 😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
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omg.....tht was so cute hun👏........plzzz continue soon😳😳

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