love respect and hate(FF)part18 last part - Page 7

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Posted: 19 years ago
#61
poor jai and bani 😭 😭 😭
btw nice parts 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#62
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good job please cont. soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#63
thtz was absolutely adorable.....can't wait for jai n bani to b together.... 😳 😳 😳

plzzz continue.....soon 😉 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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part 18 (last part)
bani holds up her hand 2 silence jai and swings around and walks out the door. jai stands there his heart breaking inside of him cant b heard buh it iz clearly visible on his face, jai watched her leave
jai:-(thinkin) shez walkin out of my life and i am lettin her go, wt kind of person am i, i cant let her go
with that his feet automatically moved he caught up with bani and without seyin a word grabbed her hand and marched back in 2 the walia house and into their bedroom
and he tore the divorce papers and threw the toward the waste paper bin
jai:- ur nt going neywere u cant leave me and go
bani:- stop it wt 2 u want 4rm me
jai:- i want ur love damn it (slammin his fist on the dressing table his hand woz bleedin)
bani:- wt the hell do you think ur doing look at that u could have hurt urself more watch wt ur doing (walks and gtz the first aid box ties a bandage around his hand)
jai:- if it hurts u by seeing this small wound then y r u tryin 2 hurt urself more beacuse by leaving me will inflict the biggest wound on me ever in my heart
bani had tears in her eyes she cudnt take any more of this she knew she cudnt leave because she loved him and she was willing b taunted and insulted the rest of her life if she was with jai then nothing else mattered she walked up 2 him and hugged him dadi hu had cn all of this was laughing
dadi:- total sharukh style, u have been watchin my movies i kno because some of them r missing
jai:-(laughing) dadiiiii nosyyyyy
dadi:- oopz sorry ill leave u continue
next day early in the morning jai was in bed he woke up 2 c bani with wet curly hair and a pink saree on
jai:- gud morning
bani:- gud morning so u finally tld her that u love her thatz gud
jai:- y r u reffering 2 urself in the 3rd person
bani:- im nt look next 2 u
next 2 jai was bani sleepin happily jai looked back 2 the lady in pink
jai:- then.. huh.. i am sooo confused
lady in pink:- dont u remember wt wos it u called me....oh ye fairy godmother
and sweeping her saree over jai she vanished buh in the room jai swore he heard the words "i am alwayz there 4 u cinderella and he could here her laugh


the end lol 😛 😛
Edited by cutie shruti - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#65
THAT WAS SOOO GOOD, UR FF KICKS BUTT , LIK ALL THE OTHER WONDERFULL FF! great job, hopefully u will do another ff... 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#66
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yaar that was excellent
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Posted: 19 years ago
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yaar that was excellent...
great ending!!! loved it!!!
luv sweetu 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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yaar that was excellent...
great ending!!! loved it!!!
luv sweetu 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#69
That was really really good!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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fab ff 👏 👏
plz write another 😃

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