love respect and hate(FF)part18 last part - Page 4

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Posted: 19 years ago
#31
dos os really good story loved it plz continue!!!!!!!!!!!! ur a really gud moder 😛 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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dos os really good story loved it plz continue!!!!!!!!!!!! ur a really gud modern writer 😛 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
hello i gt my ideas so here u r
part 9
ranveer:-(bit nicer 2 anu then he iz 2 every1 else) anu we want u 2 put the child up 4 adoption as soon as it iz born
bani,akash and anu'z smiles fade
anu:- you came here 2 tell me this..
bani:- ur seying this now after 7 months of pregnancy
ranveer:- (mean as ever)jus shut up hu gave u the right 2 speak i our family matter (jai iz silent)u have no rite so i wud appreciate it if u kept ur mouth shut..MAMIJI
anu:-(angrily) shut up ranveer if u ever speak 2 my di like that then there will b no worse than me
jigyasa:- (shoutin) dnt tlk 2 ranveer like that he is ur older brother and u r shoutin at ranveer 4 this 2 bit servant girl?
akash:-(cool boy tone gone like magic) excuse me miss jigyasa hu the hell do u think ur tlkin in ma house like that u ent no miss universe that i am going 2 let u speak 2 bani and anu like dat
jigyasa:-(angry)anu is my daughter and she will do as i sey
akash:- (closing his eyes) u need 2 lower your volume as shoutin at us is nt gunna gt u no were except if i gt reeli angry i will knock those 36 perfectly white shiney teeth out ur mouth and in to ur hand.
dadi:-(angry)stop it now all of u i tld u (lookin at jigyasa ranveer jai and aditya in particular) that askin sum1 2 forsake their child is askin them 2 forsake a part of themselves (turning 2 anu) anu u may do as u wish i am alwayz there 4 u
anu smiles weakly
dadi:-(calmly) now y the hell r u lookin at my face gt 2 movin (everybody quitely leaves) bye anu betaa bani and akash look after her
they smile wen everybody has gone anu startz 2 cry
bani and akash sit next 2 her
bani:- come lets eat im hungry
akash:-(cool boy tone) hey...letz go after all my ayesha takia needs food (dadiz filmy style iz like a virus)
they all laugh and begin 2 eat


walia house
jigyasa and ranveer in a the sitting room at bout midnite
jigyasa:- everybodyz asleep rite
ranveer:- ye
jigyasa:- wt are we goin 2 do
ranveer:- i dnt kno buh that child has 2 go and that bani and akash i will not leave them,ill destroy them
jigyasa and ranveer smile... 🤢
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
It's really good!! continue soon. 😊 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i thort i'd write another part (with bit of j and b love) so here u go
part 10
ranveer:- i dnt kno buh that child has 2 go and that bani and akash i will not leave them,ill destroy them
jigyasa and ranveer smile... the evil crew go upstairs 2 sleep
jai comes out 4rm his study tottally drunk (jiya dhadak playing in the backgroung and images of BANI flash in front of him) he goes in 2 the room 2 c bani sitting on the bed wearin a red net saree
jai:- ur here (happily) i knew u wud cum
bani:- and why did u want me 2 cum
jai:-(stuck 4 an answer) i..u..me...c..look...mausi.
bani:- r u sure it woz 4 mausi?? cuz im quite suree that she noz there iz nothing between us then y mausi
jai:-(bashed)well i ment 4 anu's sake
bani:- (laughin) anu...ru serious anu iz more happy away 4rm this house
dead silence
bani:-(cool crisp voice)face it jai u cant live without me u love me and u have 4 a long tyme wtz the point hiding it, if u hide it 4 2 long hu knowz perhaps i love u back and if u dnt hurry sum1 mite tell me they love me first perhapz....................................AKASH PATEL
jai closes his eyes and wen he opens them again in wt felt like seconds he found it woz day time and bani woznt there he searched everywere in the house but not a trace of bani according 2 every1 she neva cam.... 😉


well enjoy i have written so much i probably bored u soz 4 dat buh i cudnt stop
Edited by cutie shruti - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#36
😆 ...that was too good!...especially loved akash and dadi in #9!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#37
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wonderful part
you are truly making a devdas out of jai by torturing him 😆
keep it up
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
woooooooooooooowww so cool we need moreeee 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#39
well ziddi i thort mayb jai shud suffer a teensy bit more 😉 jus 2 gt even with makin bani suffer lol 😆 so herez another part enjoy everybody
part 11
jai closes his eyes and wen he opens them again in wt felt like seconds he found it woz day time and bani woznt there he searched everywere in the house but not a trace of bani according 2 every1 she neva cam....

jai trudged back up2 his room,his eyes filled with tearz and tiredness 4rm keepin up with life he went 4 a shower whilst downstairs sumthing totally opposite woz happening 2 how jai felt upstairs woz pain anguish and a lovers heart sinking faster than the titanic and downstairs a phone call woz bringing good news
RING RING RING RING
dadi:-(filmy)uhhhh this world iznt ment 4 the weak and therefore i must not break for this household will,wait man ma line ent finished yet(tlkin 2 the fone)were woz i ..oh ye,for this household will scatter like a pearl necklace
jigyasa:- (snottily) stop ur filmy dialouges and pick up that fone so that sound will stop i need my beauty sleep itz nt FINISHED
dadi:- (mutterin)jigyasa 2 make u beautiful u wud have 2 sleep 4eva,i wish this woz possible buh it ent-hello
bani:- dadiii
dadi:- BANI putar
jai heard this upstairs and he quitely picked up the fone jus hearing her voice will make my burnig heart feel cool he thort
bani:- dadi today is anu's baby shower ceremony and we want u and aditya uncle 2 cum and sahil if he can
dadi:-(happily) greatt im dere buh promise me 1 thing
bani:- (just as happily) and wts da dadi?
dadi:- in the house put up posters of rani mukerjee and john abraham 😆
bani:-(confused)why?
dadi:- cuz if itz a girl she will luk like rani and if itz a boy it will look like john
bani:- dadi ur 2 much
dadi:-that bani dear i am bye we will cum
bani:- bye
jai:-putz the fone down and lies flat on his face thinking bout bani and her style and everythin about her seemed 2 intrigue him more and more..... he drifted of in2 a deep sleep 😉 in which he dreamed of a beautiful world....with bani 😆

2b continued enjoy 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#40
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pls u can't stop there...wanna see B and J together..
continue soon...

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