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Posted: 19 years ago
#51
aww!! that was fab shruti!! 😛 😛 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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shruti please make jai confess his love soon 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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part 15
jai stood up he woz confused and felt somethin bad has happened but he cudnt think he walked out of the room in a brisk attidue manner.
dadi:- bani putar y did u ring so early if jigyasa wakes up ill have 2 c her face and she will tlk 2 aditya as he iz home rite now she cannot steal my son away 4rm me
bani:-(happy yet concerened) dadi dnt worry it wnt happen...let me cum 2 the point we had 2 take anu 2 the hospital yesterday night and the anu has had a baby boy
dadi:- (extatic) WHATTTTT !!!!!!!!! that means we have a john abraham in our family nowww wt good newz
bani:- (happy) anu wantz 2 meet u all so we decided wen she gt discharged 4rm the hospital we will come and meet u afterall i need 2 talk 2 mr walia
dadi:-(filmy) he will be a drop in the vast ocean of people in the world buh 2 me he will be my world
bani:- dadi we will bring ur world soon

1 week l8er
door bell rings
dadi:- were the hell iz every1???? must b sleepin itz onli 2 in the AFTERNOON (mumbles)no 1 does neywrk round here all of them jus sit and tlk they never run out of topics
opens the door
dadi:- ANUUUUUUUUUU awwww look at likke john jr
anu :- dadi hez nt john hez upen patel
akash:- no wayz man hez like me afterall i am the BEST
bani:- ye dnt gt such a big head it wnt fit through the door
akash gtz embarresd
bani:- 1st we need 2 fill in the birth certifate form
child name:- aman
motherz name:- anisha
fatherz name:-....
wen bani read this every 1 fell silent akash looked up
akash:-...akash patel
bani dadi and anu looked in his direction
akash:- yeh anu i wanted 2 tell u 4 a long tyme buh i cudnt sey neything i wanted 2 sey "I LOVE YOU" and "WILL U MARRY ME"
anu gaped as she 2 liked akash and at a loss 4 words simply nodded dadi gave a loud laugh
dadi:- i reeli wanted 2 sey a filmy dialougue buh ill use my own words, akash ur greattttttt
everybody laughed they filled in the rest of the form and sahill came galoopin down
sahhil:- anu is this my newphew
anu:- yesssssssssss and this (she looked in akashz direction)iz ur jiju
sahil:- really akash man u chickened out easily man weres the funn now have funn being tied down 2 1 woman
akash:- i wudnt of sed tht if i woz u
sahil:- yyyyy???
akash:- because rano is standing behind you
sahil jumped and turned around 2 c no1 and akash made a chicken sound they laughed
bani:- errmmmmmmmmm u guyz tlk i have 2 tlk 2 mr walia
she walked upstairs 2 find mr walia in his study
jai:- (thinkin wen he saw bani ) no im nt fallin 4 this again itz my imagination
bani:- mr walia i needed 2 tlk 2 u
jai:-(harshly) ofcourse u did,long time no c did u 4gt ur way here,neyway wt do u want 2 remind me this tyme (emotion and sadness in his words) i kno wt u have cum 2 tell me nd i cnt take it neymore, itz tru wt u sey and im seyin it rite now out loud .................
............I LOVE U BANI.................


enjoy 😳 😛 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#54
omg.... how cuteee... omg wow... next part pleaseee 👏 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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plz cpntinue i want 2 see bani reaction please
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Posted: 19 years ago
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part 16

............I LOVE U BANI.................
the words echoed round the room boucing of the wallz and being heard in baniz ears it repeated itself like an old record player reapting itself bani woz shcoked and slumped down in2 the nearest armchair jai realized that this is the real bani and he jus tld her his feelings he felt embarresed and wished sumthing wud happen 2 draw the attention away 4rm this incident suddnely there woz a loud cryin sound coming 4rm downstairsssss (it woz aman patel the baby)bani walked out the door as the tension was 2 much and she went 2 c wt the problem was jai also went out but didnt go downstairs
bani:-(horrifid) wt happened?
anu:-(rockin aman backwards and forwards) itz sahil. tell bani di wt u did
bani:-sahilll wt did u do?
sahil:-(lookin down) i woz playin with him and i toon his dumb toy do he started 2 cry (pullz a face at the baby)
bani:-(pullin sahils ears) hez a small child and u need 2 grow up
sahil:- (runs round as bani let go) nooooo i wnt grow up im still a child
jai sees this and smiles and thinks it wud be great if she woz mine and stayed here 4eva
jai:- wt iz happening??
sahil:- mama look anu iz gettin married 2 none other than akash...ji
jai is thinkin i thort he loved bani then anu
jai:-wt reeli thatz gud newz (walks up 2 akash gives him a hug ) (whispering) sorry no hard feelings
akash:-yh sorry
dadi:- we will do this marriage like no1 has cn b4 it will b a walia marriage 2 remember
bani:- ermmmm sorry 2 spoil the mood buh i came 2 give these 2 mr walia there divorce paper
jai and everybody else is thunderstruck



well there we go thatz the next part
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ahhhhhh nooo nooo divorce... Nahhiii 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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gr8 story yaar... waiting for the next
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Posted: 19 years ago
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omg...omgg. just like madison said....nahii....no divorce......😳

awesome job👏...shruti.....plzzz....continue......can't wait to read on....

next part....plzzzz.......😛

Edited by KHJL - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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part 17
jai and everybody else is thunderstruck dadi notcing the tension
dadi:- oye lets go i wanna show aman garam masala u kno john
sahil:- dadi i wanna watch the girls...yoo...yaar
dadi:- oye i am nt ur yaar im ur dadi nd onli aman can watch go do ur wrk
sahil:- aman yaar u tell dadi 2 let me watch
(aman laughs)
anu:- hez laughin at u haha
sahil:- laugh laugh wen i have a kid it will beat aman up
akash:- oh reeli my aman iz 10 times stonger than u aman can beat up ur child with his hands tied behind his back
they all argued out of the sitting area in2 dadiz room
jai:- bani wt is all this??
bani:-(holding back tears) itz a divorce itz wt u wanted
jai:- itz nt wt i want at all i want 2 b with u forever
bani:-lies itz alll lies dnt sign if u dnt want buh i cnt live under sucpision all my life
jai:- look im seyin sorry 4 it nd no1 will ever suspect u or accuse u ever agen
bani holds up her hand 2 silence jai and swings around and walks out the door. jai stands there his heart breaking inside of him cant b heard buh it iz clearly visible on his face


lol heres another part complete enjoy😃
Edited by cutie shruti - 19 years ago

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