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Posted: 19 years ago
#41
Pt 1
how bout if jai was following the bus and then he sees some goons with guns heading into the bus. then he realizes, that bani is in that bus and what should he do now? So he follows the bus trying to think of a plan to get Bani out of there. The bus finally stops because the goons say stop the bus, give me all your stuff... and so jai rushes outside and goes inside the bus looking for bani. he yells "Bani" and Bani looks at him helplessly with her hands up just like everyone else. jai then says to them let them go, i'll give you money, but they dont believe him etc, and they tell him to put his hands up too. the goons are in the middle of jai and Bani ,and the goons shoot someone. Everyone is panakeing, running out side finally, and Jai gives his hand to Bani to pull her into saftey. When he pulls her, she hugs him and hold on tight cause she was so scared, shes shakeing and Jai is silent. Then you hear another shot and its at Banis back and while Jai is holding her and she makes that face in slow motion like when someone has shot you and Jai's face gets in slow motion, like omg and then she lets him go and falls. Jai trys to wake her up and is now feeling his love for her. Tune in next time to find out what happens with these two star crossed lovers! Right here, on k t.v.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#42
very wonderful stories 👏 👏 👏
hazira bi thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#43
veryy good. I really like that one.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#44
wow... guys well done great job. 👏 .. wish i was sooo creative....i don't think i can write one like these at all.... i think these stories shud be used in the serial... n Ekta's writers shud be kicked out to make way for u people.. 😉 😉 😉 ...
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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
OMG!!! All the stories were sooo good!!! I can't wait till there are more stories!! I also wish this wud happen on the show!! It wud be sooo romantic!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
wow Raksha and Tia!! i loved you stories!!!
everyone else did a great job too!! we've got some really talented people on the forum!!! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#47
Each and every story is interesting and exiting 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#48
your stories are so good nice one!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
Awesome stuff all of you... 👏

Lemme continue with my story a little bit more... 😆

Jai and Bani are driving towards the picnic spot..Suddenly Jai realizes that its taking a little longer than expected..Since its fast getting cloudy and dark,and not wanting anyone to get worried for them, Jai is even more in a hurry to reach everybody else...But that was not to be..Suddenly the clouds become even more dense and it would rain any moment now..Being a smart lady, our Bani understood that something is not going right and they may have lost their way...But she just keeps quite waiting to hear from Jai..Finally Jai speaks up that they may have to find some place to stay somewhere around that place as after that area, it would be difficult to find a place to stay and its not even safe to get stranded in a car like that in a God forsaken place...

Jai walks into this small lodge kind of a place with Bani following him and they manage to get a room..Both of them get into their room feeling extremely awkward...Bani is also consumed with the thoughts that the rest of the party would be worried for them, specially Rano.. 😭 ...Jai could sense that Bani is lost in some kind of thoughts and he thinks that she was actually hesitating about staying with him in the same room...He tells Bani that while he was gone arranging for the dinner and all, she shld relax and take rest... 😡 ..Bani gives a confused look at him, and in a very concerned manner, tells him not to bother to go out at this hour, as the rain(by then it already started to pour) could get even heavier and dangerous...Jai doesnt say a word and just walks out anyway 😡, leaving a sad Bani behind.. 😭...As expected the rain becomes heavy by the hour, making Bani restless and worried for Jai..All she was able to focus upon was about Jai and whilst praying that nothing should happen to him, she decides that she will go out to the lobby and ask for help...When she walks out, she spots her Khadoos hubby dozing off on a chair in there (serves him right, nai???)..Feeling sad and angry at the same time, she just goes and taps on his shoulder...Jai wakes up with a jolt and asks her in a concerned manner if everything was alright...Bani doesnt say much, but in a cold and a firm voice asks him to just come into the room...Surprisingly our Jai follows her without a word...

Hehehehe..rest of the story....Later 😳 😳 😳

luv,
Raksha 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
that was great raksha 👏 👏 👏
please continue soon can't wait to read the next part 😛

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