wow! nice
heres mine
jai and bani have a argument over something in the bed room and as usual, bani doesnt say anything. Shes just looking at him with her eyes filled up with tears. Then she goes out of the room and sits on the stairs alone, crying. shes thinking that she is so lonly and how horrible things have gotten and shes just crying there. Shes talking out loud and saying, mr. walia took us in and we were so good to each other, honest happy etc...Then jai walks out to find her and sees she is crying on the stairs. he hears her talking and he stairs at her. He walks towrd her from behind feeling bad. he almost puts his hands on her shoulder, to show his sympathy or to just comfort her, but then he hesitates. He slowly but surely walks back to his room and sits on his chair thinking and haveing a drink. he thinks about how pia betrays him, sees her picture in his head, but then, he sees Bani helping her, protecting her, he sees bani in beutiful saris smiling and thinking of when she gives him tea, puting out his clothes and then he gets a frustrated sort of mad look on his face and drinks more. Bani then walks in as if she was not crying. she puts her blankets on the floor, ready for bed and she also puts a glass of water near jais bed on the table and jai just stares at her. He is sorta drunk, and while he is heading towrds the bed, he swaggers, stumbles, Bani sees, stares, and he is about to fall when bani starts helping him.he lays on the bed while bani is helping him, and stares at her. she puts blankets on him and she goes to sleep. Jai begins to realize the feelings he has for her. in the middle of the night, bani has pains in her head, she turns on the light to drink some water ad jai wakes up. she begins to walk to her "bed" and staggers and jai says "Bani?!" she feels diizy and falls on the floor. Jai quickly trys to wake her up, but she wont. he starts paniceing and carrys her to the car and they go to the hospital. hes waiting in the waiting room, anxious, and paceing back and fourth. The dr. comes and tells him that bani was haveing palpatations and that she should not be stressed or else she will have occasional skipped heartbeats that can be very harmful, dangerous. Bani then walks in the room ready to go and jai looks at her and walks towrds her and hugs her. he doesnt say anything but the silence betwenn them tells you everything.
what say? š