Jai & Bani!!! - Page 4

Originally posted by: Tiha

Nice stuff. 😛

Another one of mine...

Dadi came with a great idea of going on a little vacation with the whole family. Once there, romance wanders in the air. The night is still young and the stars light up the faces. Rano and Sahil are gone for a walk, Dadi is staring at her Salman and Sharukh posters in the room, (of the house they rented ofcourse) and even Jigz and Adi are eyeing at eachother. All are in a romantic mood, except for Bani and Jai. Bani is sitting in the garden looking at the stars, thinking about the beautiful moments with her sisters(when doesn't she?), while Jai is standing in the balcony with a drink in his hand. He breathes heavily, trying to heal the wound, that still hurts him. When he notices Bani sitting all alone in her light blue sari, he, for once, forgets about Pia and Pushkar. His eyes do not want blink; afraid to lose Bani of there sight. Jai sighs and walks down, out of the house. He walks towards Bani and stands next to her. She looks at him, sees him, and then turns her face back towards the sky. "I love the stars.", she whispers and smiles. "Hmm.", Jai grums back. "I do not see the reason for loving them.", he says while also staring at the dark sky. "They are so beautiful. I feel like touching them, they are so pretty, but too far." Bani is still smiling, but not looking at Jai who is concentrating on her face, which brings love in his eyes. "Sometimes we do not realise, that what seems so far, we can actually reach for, with our hands.", he whispers. Bani looks up to him and for a moment there eyes connect. "Once something is truly loved, there is not reason yearning for it. It will come to you by itself." Jai smiles ironicly and walks away. Bani sighs; feeling hopeless. Then, out of nothing, a hand touches her hair lovingly and when Bani looks behind her, she sees Jai walking away, not even looking back again.

Tiha 😳

very nice, elegant, subtle, exotic. it was just different. really enjoyed it.

wow guys great stories,
here mine,
they both go out to show mausi a good time and wile at a restaurant, mausi and bani both have lite conversations and they have a good time while jai is just staring at his wife and thinks to himself how beautiful she looks and then when they finished their dinner they all leave for home and bani who is at front with jai is trying hard not to make any eye contact with her husband but they both glimpse each other and try not to let the other know, when they get home mausi goes off to bed and so does jai and bani while sleeping(on the same bed) since mausi made it clear that bani should share the bed of her husband, bani gets jai's dress and a glass of water for her she then very slowly gets to bed but is at the end of the bed, they both have a hard time getting to sleep because of their feelings for one another, eventually they both fall asleep. Dawn approaches and bani awakes and to her surprise jai's hand is around her and she is facing him, she tries to get up but jai is asleep and will not budge. She tries not to wake him but has no choice but to wake him and to his shock he see's that his hand is were it is and apoligizes to his wife she then goes and gets breakfast ready when he comes down he can't help but look at his wife and remember how beautiful she looked last night and how well she can cook, he then remember how he has treated her and then decides that to ask her to forgive him. Art night he tries to tell bani something but she thinking that she is going to get blown up by him does look him in the eye, when he starts in a soft voice she then slowly looks at him and he tell her that he is truly sorry for what he did and for how he has treated her and he knows now that she did what she was told to do and she did not tell pia to leave and he also goes on to say that he has been an idiot and can now see that he has made a bad decision and asks her not to go ahead with the divorce, she then gets tears in heer eyes and says she can not forget all the things he said to her and although she is hurt she cannot refuse the request of her husband. the both hug and smile at each other........ end scene



sorry about the lenght of the story 😛

Wooooooooow, 👏 👏 👏 Wonderful stories..Hmmm, this KS forum is filled with hard core Romantics 😉 😳

Let me try my hand too... 😳 😆

Jai is taken aback at Bani's sudden decision of taking the bus to reach to the picnic spot...Before he could react, Bani was long gone..Now he is left with no other choice except to follow the bus... ..But the bus is no where in sight...As the time passes by, he starts getting more and more guilty as well as worried...On the way he also comes accross a bus which was involved in a horrible accident..Now he gets even more worried and keeps wishing that Bani is safe..In this whole ordeal he suddenly realizes how much Bani has occupied his mind, which makes him really restless and angry with himself...

Finally the bus which Bani boarded comes in sight, standing in front of a small dhaba kind of a thing...Jai heaves a sigh of relief and at once jumps out of the car to go see Bani...But alas, Bani is no where to be found.. 😕 ..He gets really worried and wonders where she might have gone...With a lost puppy face, he gets out of the bus and looks into the dhaba casually...There is our Bani, enjoying a chat with this handsome young guy...A pan of jealousy hits our 'cuddles' instantly...In two steps he reaches Bani and in a typical khadoos style asks Bani if she is done with her socializing, they should move now... 😡...Bani is at first astonished to see her Khadoos hubby there 😳 😆 and even more so as he looks really upset(poor girl doesnt know what he is going through 😆 😆 😆 )...But the person with her finds it a little odd, the way Jai is talking to Bani..So he interrupts asking who the hell he was to talk to a girl like that...Jai in his roaring lion style answers him, he is her husband... 😳 😳 😳 ..Bani is a bit taken aback and also feels happy and shy...Without any further discussions, she says bye to that guy and goes and sits in the BACK SEAT of the car 😕 👏 ..Jai comes back looking as grumpy as ever... 👎🏼...He demands an explanation from Bani as to who that guy was..Bani doesnt understand what hit her dearest hubby but hiding her surprise, she just tells him that he is her best friend from College and has just come back from America after studies...Jai looks kind of annoyed and insecured with this new relation of Bani...but not knowing what else to say, keeps quite 😆...After a while he asks her to come to front seat as they were abt to reach the picnic spot...She obliges him and comes to the front seat and our man is as confused as ever, as to why he feels such a strong attraction towards this girl... 😳 😳 😳

Anyways, that's about it for now..Sorry for stretchchchchchiiiiing it like a rubber band... 😳

luv,
Raksha 😳

kimlee and raksha these are beautiful. cute

Originally posted by: Tiha

Nice stuff. 😛

Another one of mine...

Dadi came with a great idea of going on a little vacation with the whole family. Once there, romance wanders in the air. The night is still young and the stars light up the faces. Rano and Sahil are gone for a walk, Dadi is staring at her Salman and Sharukh posters in the room, (of the house they rented ofcourse) and even Jigz and Adi are eyeing at eachother. All are in a romantic mood, except for Bani and Jai. Bani is sitting in the garden looking at the stars, thinking about the beautiful moments with her sisters(when doesn't she?), while Jai is standing in the balcony with a drink in his hand. He breathes heavily, trying to heal the wound, that still hurts him. When he notices Bani sitting all alone in her light blue sari, he, for once, forgets about Pia and Pushkar. His eyes do not want blink; afraid to lose Bani of there sight. Jai sighs and walks down, out of the house. He walks towards Bani and stands next to her. She looks at him, sees him, and then turns her face back towards the sky. "I love the stars.", she whispers and smiles. "Hmm.", Jai grums back. "I do not see the reason for loving them.", he says while also staring at the dark sky. "They are so beautiful. I feel like touching them, they are so pretty, but too far." Bani is still smiling, but not looking at Jai who is concentrating on her face, which brings love in his eyes. "Sometimes we do not realise, that what seems so far, we can actually reach for, with our hands.", he whispers. Bani looks up to him and for a moment there eyes connect. "Once something is truly loved, there is not reason yearning for it. It will come to you by itself." Jai smiles ironicly and walks away. Bani sighs; feeling hopeless. Then, out of nothing, a hand touches her hair lovingly and when Bani looks behind her, she sees Jai walking away, not even looking back again.

Tiha 😳

Wooow..this is the best and I hope they show this in the serial as this bit falls pretty much in the line of the story that's happening right now...

Originally posted by: raksha.l

Wooow..this is the best and I hope they show this in the serial as this bit falls pretty much in the line of the story that's happening right now...

😳 Thank you dear!

Originally posted by: princessjojo

very nice, elegant, subtle, exotic. it was just different. really enjoyed it.

Thank you very much 😳

okay here's another,
jai is driving behind of the bus so that they would arrive the same time for the picnic, jai has bani's face on his mind all the time and cannot stop seeing the look on her face as she told him she wants to get out of the car. He has an accident and the bus with bani in it comes to an abrubt halt, all occupants of the bus on hearing the screech of the tyres of the car rush out to help the driver, on seeing the car down the ditch bani rushes to the site to see if anything is wrong to jai he has broken his arm and cannot exit the car, bani then frantically tries to get help,shouting out at anyone to please help her husband on seeing this jai has a change of heart, he see's how much bani loves him. He then tries to get out of the car again, at the same time some people come and help jai out of the car and bani gets jai to the hospital, there jai tells bani that he is sorry for what he did and begs her to forgive him, he then begins to cry and bani, being bani, also cries saying that she has taken all the insults from him knowing fully well that he had grown to hate her because of what pia did and she is willing to let him have his happiness if that means she has to sign the divorce papers, he then tells her if you want me to be happy,then tell me that you do not love me,she starts to cry and says that he will have to be unhappy because she loves him a lot.

nyc 1 guys!
o.k a new 1 4rm me.
jai drives behind the bus to bring back bani.the bus stops do let other people on while jai gets out of his car to go to the bus to bring back bani. he calls her name but there is no respomse so he climbs in the bus and asks the driver to halt the bus 4 a while,jai spots bani standing.jai calls out bani's name and bani looks at him with a surprised and a bit happy look.he pushes in the crowd to reach her and after pushing and struggling he got to bani.
he asks her to come back with him but she refuses.
(but doesn't say sorry to her because of his ego)
she says tells jai she doesn't wana come with him and she'd prfer it if they make their own way.
an irritated jai holds onto bani's hand while bani is struggling to flee her hand from jai.(jai knows he doesn't like it when bani leaves him and also kbnows he can't live 1 min without her)
he tells her lets go!
he pulls her all the way to the car and and opens the front door of the car.
he waits 4 her to go in and then bani gives and walks storming in the car.
(and magically the bus is gone from the scene)

hope u liked this story.

lovely!! i like the magic effect!! tends to happens alot in this soap!!! 😆