Tere Sath Sath Chal Diya Mn [KriBir SS] [Chapter 15 Page 20] - Page 7

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Posted: 6 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: arya1210

bahot bhaot wo word for update .its fabulous .i am loving this kribir bond.Omg mr rbk is fall.Ok i will wait for 12 day s for update but uske baad no waiting

abey itna bhi TY na bol...😳
Wo word babes...😳
Happy that u loved it...😳
Hehehee...not yet...he was just joking...😆
Ok no waiting...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Divya333

Superb update Haya... Loved it... Cabbage face 🤣 lol... Loved every part n enjoyed it... Waiting eagerly for the update.. .Update soon

wo word titli...😳
Glad that u loved it...😳
Hahhahaaha...itne handsome bande ko kon cabbage face bolta hai...😆😆😆
Happy that u r enjoying this story...😳
Will update ASAP...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: vinushi

Mere cc (chikne chupde) bande ko cabbage face bola haya Tera haat today dungu 🤣... rocking one Yar ... Inni jaldi faal ik he is joking...as always...but waiting for krobir fall in love ... update soon

cc...😆
Mne to nhi bola...😆Kritika ne bola...😆😆
Jo torna hai Kittu ka tor...😆😆
Wo word dude...😳
Hahahahha...ya he is...😆
Ranbir will soon...😉
Will update ASAP...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#64
just working on it...😳
Will update ASAP...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: paru000

Haya super update. Their fight always a treat. Update soon dear.

wo word paru...😳
Ya a big one...😳
Will update ASAP...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#66
[Chapter 5]
[LUSTFUL]

Kritika was busy in cleaning the kitchen and Ranbir was continuously irritating her with his tharki talks...

"Stop eating my brain!!!!!!!! "

She shouted at her level best...
And he became awkward...

"Get out..."

She first held his hand...
But on realizing the wrong move she suddenly left it...
And he found another chance to tease her...

"Oho!!!!! Someone is being tharki..."

He said winking at her...

And she just left a breath and moved to the other work...

*-------*--------*-------*

In lounge she was dusting the cupboard...
Standing on the chair...
when he came from behind and scared her...

"Bhaooo!!!! "

She got affraid and fell down...
He caught her in his arms...
And smirked at her...

"Scaredy cat.."

He said pulling her leg...
And she stood up with a jerk...

"Just shut up...u scared me knowingly..."

She said clentching her teeth in anger...

"Ok phr next time mn nhi pakronga..."

He said with an attitude and left the place...
And she shouted from behind...

"I dont need u...just go to hell..."

*-------*---------*--------*

After doing all the refinement she was leaving the place when he called her from behind...

"Hey ms.blind..."

He said with a smirk...

"Now what the hell do u want???"

She said tiredly...

"If u want u can sleep here..."

He said looking at her tired face...

"No need thanx..."

She said with an attitude and left...

*---------*----------*-----------*

Next day begin with their casual routines...
Kritika was going to work when she again met the disaster of her life...
The one and only mr. Ranbir Kapoor...

She saw him and was about lo leave hiding her face behind files...but she was caught...

"Hey wait a min ms. Blind..."

He called her from behind...

"Now what???"

She said irritated...

"Were u hiding from me??? Oh my God!!!! U r scared of me..."

He said smirking...

"I think so u live in any other world...me and affraid of u...hahahhaha...joke of the century..."

She said laughing...

"Heyyy!!!! Bubble gum..."

He said lil bit loudly in a goon's style coming lil bit closer...
And she got affraid and moved back...
He laughed at her reaction...

"And someone was saying that she isnt affraid of me..."

He said smirking...

"What u want from me???"

She said irritated...

"Nothing just love..."

He said making a kissy face...

"Yukhhh!!!! Keep ur that kiss to urself..."

She said making awkward faces...

"Dont worry i wont attempt...cmng to the point...Thnx for being my made and cleaning my house..."

He said smirking at her...

"Just shut up i m not ur made..."

She said angrily...with a lil bit high pitch...

"Ahan!!! Slow my love slow...everyone is watching ur madness..."

He said laughing at her...

"First of all i m not ur love and second of all i hate u...now get lost..."

She said now slowly...

"But i love u naaa!!!!! "

He said giving her a flying kiss...

"Arghhh!!!! "

She said stomping her feet and left...

"Will see ya baby...now u r forcing me to make u my obsession...and dont be my obsession baby otherwise i will steal u from ur fate..."

He said smirking with an attitude...

*-------*---------*----------*

Precap: dont come closer...

Hope u guys like it...
Do comment and hit like...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#67
what an update 😳 and the last line tu .Last line ne tu dil hi chora liya . Tujhe pata mai tere updates ke liye roj if check karti ho but tu itne time lagati hai 😭 . Really can't wait for next part
a huge clap for last line👏
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Posted: 6 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: arya1210

what an update 😳 and the last line tu .Last line ne tu dil hi chora liya . Tujhe pata mai tere updates ke liye roj if check karti ho but tu itne time lagati hai 😭 . Really can't wait for next part

a huge clap for last line👏

wo word baby...😳
Haahhahaha...me too loved that after writing it...😆
Awww...wo word for that...but literally jese hi time milta hai mn update kr deti hon...😳
Will update ASAP...😳
Hehhehehee...itni achi thi serious mn???...😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#69
Wow...rbkkk n kittuuu❤️ wondeerrfulll update hayu ...just loved it ...n that line "will steal you from ur fate" wowww ...n precap 😳 update sonnn soon mtlb soon bahut wait karwati hai 😡
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Posted: 6 years ago
#70
Haya what an update yar. Actually every day waiting for your update. Loved ranbir attitude .the last line that he said stole my heart. Pls update soon my dear. Once again love u dear

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