Tere Sath Sath Chal Diya Mn [KriBir SS] [Chapter 15 Page 20] - Page 9

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Posted: 6 years ago
#81
Wo word to all of u...
Wo word 4 liking and supporting this story...
Dil nhi chahta indiviually reply krne ka coz IF pe bar bar captcha code ata hai...😆😆
But i read every single comment...
Love u all...❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago
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iska update kab karegi😡🤣
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Posted: 6 years ago
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[Chapter 7]
[IRRITATING GUY EVER]

Sun rised so brightly...
She woke up...
And the incidents of yesterday came in her mind...

"Ufff ab isko or kitne din tolerate krna parega..."

She said almost crying...

"Huh!!! Chal Kittu uth ja...u have to face a monster..."

She said to herself stood up and got ready...

Coming to dining table she found everyone sitting there...
She came and sat on the dining table...

"How r u now beta??? "

Said Mahima...

"Aunty now i m fine...thank u..."

Kittu said...

Everyone started eating there food...
Kritika looked here and there hitting the plate with spoon...
Her sight fell on the guy staring at her...

"Now what???"

She said loudly and then bit her tongue...
Everyone looked at her ...

"Heee nothing..."

She said showing fake laugh...

And the guests gave awkward expressions...
While the one smirked...

*--------*---------*---------*

Dinner was finished ...
She went to her room...
And Ranbir came behind her...
As her room is upstairs and the guest room in which Ranbir is staying is also upstairs...

As she entered her room...
He came in from behind and locked the door...

"Hey!! What are u doing???"

She shouted...

"Ssshhh!!!!"

And he placed his finger on her lips...
Which she removed immidiately showing the anger...

"I wanna talk to u..."

He said...

"U can talk outside...there is no need to lock the door...open it up..."

She said folding her hands on her chest...

"No!!! Its like...i wanna say...that...i love u..."

He said...
And her arms unfolded...
She just look at him in disbelief...

"What??? What the hell are u saying???"

She said bursting in laugh...

"Dont make fun of me...i m serious..."

He said first time making a pout but not the smirk...

And now she became serious as she understood he isnt joking...

"But sorry i dont..."

She said...

"But why???"

He said coming closer...

"Hey!!!! Dont come closer...stay away..."

She said showing her finger..

"Ok ok!!"

He said nd stopped in his way...

"Coz i dont like guys like u...goons.."

She said sternly...

"But i promise i wont kill u..."

He said now with a smirk...

"Oh God!!! This smirk..."

She said annoyingly...

"BTW i m serious..."

He said...

"Leave such things first then talk to me.."

She said...

"Sorry i cant..."

He said coldly..

"I knew...Then forget me..."

She said...

"Sorry i cant..."

He said still coldly...

"Ok then just get lost..."

She said...

"Sorry i cant..."

He said still coldly...

"What the hell???"

She said...

"Nothing is hell its just love...love at first sight..."

He said...

"But i dont...leave me aloneee!!!"

She yelled...

"Baby u r mine...u had seen my innocent side...now u will see my real side..."

He said with a smirk winking at her...

And left the place...
She watched him leaving...

*---------*---------*--------*

Precap:working time...

Hope u guys like it...
Do comment nd hit like... 😳
Edited by HayaZehra313 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#84
itna bara update 😡 .Kya foxi itna wait karaya aur itu sa .Dil thor diya.
but jo bhi dhamka tha.Rbk 😆 update sooner
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Posted: 6 years ago
#85
Haya pls update soon can't wait .Pls pls pls .
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Posted: 6 years ago
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[Chapter 8]
[WORKING TIME]

It was dinner time...
Everyone gathered in the lounge..
Kritika and Ranbir were also present there...
Gossips were on the peak...

"I think Ranbir and Kritika should work together..."

Mr. Kapoor said...

"Yes nice idea..is bahane Kritika bhi kuch seekh legi..."

Kritika's father said...

"Hmmm...chalo phr kl se dono sath kaam krna..."

Mr. Kapoor said...

And Kritika stood there like a statue...
Coz she know what is Ranbir's work...

"Kritika beta tmhe koi prob to nhi hai na???"

Said Mr. Kapoor...

"Mujhe...nhi...to.."

Said kritika with trembling words...
And gulping...

She cant say the truth coz no one will believe her...
She knew Ranbir is master mind and he will make any other story..
She just accepted 4 good which was not good for her...

All had dinner and then went to their respective rooms...

Kritika was standing on the terrace...
Watching the moon...

Ranbir came from behind and admired her beauty in the light of moon...
She was glowing like a diamond...

He walked towards her slowly...
Kritika on realising someone's presence turned to see the person...

It was none other than Ranbir...
She just looked at him...
And somewhere lost her self in the dark brown eyes of the handsome guy standing in front of her...

Ranbir moves his hand slowly and tucked her hairs behind her ear...
He rub his thumb on her cheeks...

Due to which she closed her eyes...
He moved his face forward and bent a little...
But suddenly Kritika came into senses...

"Hey what are u doing???"

She yelled and pushed him back...
And an awkward silence prevailed...

They both just looked at the gorund..
Which was broken by Kritika..

"Tum q aye ho yahan..."

She said annoyingly...

"Nothing babes neend nhi arhi thi..."

He said moving his hand in his hairs...

"Dont call me babes...stupid..."

She said angrily...

"Doesnt matter kl to tum mere sath chalo gi na...working time.."

He said winking at her...

"Mn sab ko bata dongi k tum kya kaam krte ho...but tumhare sath nhi jaongi..."

She said folding her hands on her chest...

"Ahaannn!!! Ghlti bhi nhi krna...i will kill u..."

She said smirking...

"What??? U cant kill me..."

She said shocked...

"I can also kill my love if it comes between my work..."

He said smirking...

"What!!!! "

And he turned to go...
And his smirk vanished and a smile took its place...
But Kritika couldnt see it because his face was on other side...

"Mn khud ko mar skta hon pr tumhe kbhi nhi...tumhare liye to ye duniya bhi chor skta hon ..."

He said in heart...

"I love u...good ni8..."

He said now loudly to Kritika...
And went to his room...

*--------*-----------*----------*

The next morning came with too much stress for Kritika...

All had lunch together and then Kritika and Ranbir has to leave for work...
Or we can say so called work...

Kritika hesitately went with him...
They sat in car and drove away...

Ranbir drove recklessly...
And Kritika got affraid...

"Oyyeee!!! Ahista chalao car..."

She shouted...
But of no use...
Instead of slow driving Rabir turned on the volume...

And the whole journey passed like this...
Kritika continuously shouting and Ranbir ignoring her...

*-------*---------*---------*

Now they reached their working place which was Ranbir's old house...

Kritika hesitantly entered but stepped on something...
She looked on ground...
And found a mice tail under her foot...

"Ahhh!!!!! "

She shouted and jumped on Ranbir..
He suddenly catched her otherwise she would have broken her bone...

"Miceee!!!"

She again shouted...
On which Ranbir laughed out loud...

"Bs kro sirf ek mice se drti ho... or mere samne to tigress bani ghoomti ho..."

He said in between his laugh...

"Very funny...utaro mujhe neeche..."

She said annoyingly...

"Nhi utaronga..."

He winked...

"What the hell...utaro..."

She yelled...

"Ayi tum apni marzi se ho jaogi meri marzi se..."

He winked at her...

"Utarooo"

She yelled and started hitting him...
Due to which he lost his balance and both fell on sofa...

"Dekha tumne to or romantic atmosphere bana diya..."

Ranbir said smirking...

As Kritika was on top she stood up hastely...

"Arey yr abhi hi to maza arha tha...tum itni jldi uth gayi..."

He said smirking...

"Just shut up..."

She said...and started looking st the place...

*------*-------*--------*

Precap:not decided yet...

Hope u guys like it...
Aru ab khush?? Itna romantic dediya...😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
#87
Wo word Aru nd Paru...😳
Keep supporting...😳
And its updated...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow fixi dil kush kar dita 🥳love it so much .Its just super .🤪 wo word for update . Can't wait for next .
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Edited by arya1210 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Fabulous update foxi😳 .both update r awesome... N wo for late..Ranbir n kritika chemistry mind blowing yaar😉. Ranbir teasing kritika n kritika helpless situation😉😛 now I am waiting for next
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: arya1210

Wow fixi dil kush kar dita 🥳love it so much .Its just super .🤪 wo word for update . Can't wait for next .
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hayeee!!! Finally yara...😆
Its ok...😳
Abhi deing..😆

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