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fida-cute thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#71
sorry 4 not answering as i had some problem
ok thats y tia will kill her dad but which one 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

where r my posts disapearing?


Wat do u mean, is there sumthing wrong? is everything okay? we can wait if we have to.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#73
Part-22...Judge:since Tia's mom Gauri is not mentally
well,2 see tia's security &
protection,the court orders
that tia shud with shashank.
Shiv-tia r shocked.Sh
jumps with joy.
S is shattered. Sh smiles with
victory:now where is ur
challenge shiv?
S is speechless.Tia cries
coming 2 s:papa
S hugs & kisses her.Sh takes
her away from S:now how
dare u touch my daughter.
Tears flow from S's eyes.

S cries at the beach:I lost
gauri & tia.
Sum1 calls him from
back:Shiv! &n bsp;S turns back.
She:u'l b wondering who
I'm.i'm shashank's mom.Saakshi.
S:u got ur grandchild.u want
anything else?
Sak:I'm not happy bcoz of my
spoilt son.icant see a sweet
cuple suffering bcoz of
him.shiv...gauri is not mad as u
think.
S:what? Sak's eyes r full
of tears:shashank wanted u &
gauri 2 get separated.so he
sent his wicked friend
swayam 2 make u misunderstand
that gauri is mad as he
believed that u'l desert her
if she's mad.
S is shocked. Sak:the
medicines swayam gave gauri was
not 2 cure her.it was heavy
drugs.
S:Oh!shashank made my gauri
mad by making swayam giv
wrong medicines.
Sa:no,still gauri is
normal.she's pretending 2 b mad e
escape from shashank.
S is shocked.Sak:if I won't
reveal this,god wil punish us
S is happy:my gauri does'nt
hav any problem.o mistook
her.i'l bring her back now
itself.
S runs & get inside the car.S
thinks:b4 that I've 2
inform gauri a sweet
news.her enemy shashank's death.i'l
finish him.

Sh was drving a bike on
the road.S chases him 2
cause an accident 2 make Sh
die.but Sh' bike goes thru
another way.A lorry hits S's
car.The car is destroyed.


Again after 11yrs leap.Tia got
bail thru abhay-kusum.
T:we hav 2 bring back mom.bcoz
she's perfectly
alright.she was never mad.bcoz
of shashank dad,she was
forced 2 act like a mad woman.

A-K r surprised.they bring
G back.A-K feel
difficulty 2 face G.Ku:I
cud'nt no that my daughter
does'nt hav any problem.
G:past is gone.lets avoid it.

G-T in a room. T:I'm so happy
2 get my mom back
G:I'm also happy 2 get u
back.did u really kill shashank?

T weeps:yes. G:I thot u
did'nt kill him. T:no,my
circumstance made me do that
Kusum cums. G:mama,is he
fine? Kusum:w hom u r
talking about?
G:mom is talking about Shiv
papa.right?

WHAT MUST B SHIV'S CONDITION
AFTER THE LEAP?
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Posted: 18 years ago
#74
don't tell me he is paralized or something it was good tia killed shashank 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
#75
again d posts r disappearing


Part-22...Judge:since Tia's mom Gauri is not
mentally

well,2 see tia's security &
protection,the court
orders

that tia shud with shashank.

Shiv-tia r shocked.Sh
jumps with joy.

S is shattered. Sh smiles with
victory:now where is ur

challenge shiv?

S is speechless.Tia cries
coming 2 s:papa

S hugs & kisses her.Sh takes
her away from S:now how

dare u touch my daughter.

Tears flow from S's eyes.


S cries at the beach:I lost
gauri & tia.

Sum1 calls him from
back:Shiv! &n bsp;S
turns back.

She:u'l b wondering who
I'm.i'm shashank's
mom.Saakshi.

S:u got ur grandchild.u want
anything else?

Sak:I'm not happy bcoz of my
spoilt son.icant see a
sweet

cuple suffering bcoz of
him.shiv...gauri is not
mad as u

think.

S:what? Sak's eyes r full
of tears:shashank wanted
u &

gauri 2 get separated.so he
sent his wicked friend

swayam 2 make u misunderstand
that gauri is mad as he

believed that u'l desert her
if she's mad.

S is shocked. Sak:the
medicines swayam gave
gauri was

not 2 cure her.it was heavy
drugs.

S:Oh!shashank made my gauri
mad by making swayam giv


wrong medicines.

Sa:no,still gauri is
normal.she's pretending
2 b mad e

escape from shashank.

S is shocked.Sak:if I won't
reveal this,god wil
punish us

S is happy:my gauri does'nt
hav any problem.o
mistook

her.i'l bring her back now
itself.

S runs & get inside the car.S
thinks:b4 that I've 2

inform gauri a sweet
news.her enemy
shashank's death.i'l

finish him.


Sh was drving a bike on
the road.S chases him 2

cause an accident 2 make Sh
die.but Sh' bike goes
thru

another way.A lorry hits S's
car.The car is
destroyed.



Again after 11yrs leap.Tia got
bail thru abhay-kusum.

T:we hav 2 bring back mom.bcoz
she's perfectly

alright.she was never mad.bcoz
of shashank dad,she was

forced 2 act like a mad woman.


A-K r surprised.they bring
G back.A-K feel

difficulty 2 face G.Ku:I
cud'nt no that my
daughter

does'nt hav any problem.

G:past is gone.lets avoid it.


G-T in a room. T:I'm so happy
2 get my mom back

G:I'm also happy 2 get u
back.did u really kill
shashank?


T weeps:yes. G:I thot u
did'nt kill him.
T:no,my

circumstance made me do that

Kusum cums. G:mama,is he
fine? Kusum:w hom u r


talking about?

G:mom is talking about Shiv
papa.right?


WHAT MUST B SHIV'S CONDITION
AFTER THE LEAP?

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Posted: 18 years ago
#76
First of all, im sorry for not replying to this wonderful story. It is good that shiv knew the truth about gauri. I wonder at condition shiv will be in. Very good and sad. Plz continue and want to know wat happens next. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#77
np, i really want to know wat happens next 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#78

Part-23...Kusum:Gauri looks down. Kusum:shiv had a
severe accident after we lost
Tia.He was paralysed 4
many yrs.
G is shocked:then?now?
Ku:now he has recovered from
it.
G is relieved. Ku:his friend's
wife…1 widow is living
there 2 look after him.charu
G is shocked:charu?
G remembers meeting
akshat-charu in the holi party.G
thinks:Akshat is dead?poor guy


G:why did u kill shashank?
Tia starts crying. G:was'nt he
loving?
T:yes.but his luv was
disgusting.he was too
possessive.he cud'nt even
stand me seeing dadi-dada.he
did'nt even tolerate saakshi
dadi's affection 2wards
me.he hated me having
friends.bcoz he thot that wil make
him lose me.so I did'nt hav
friends at all.i was always
alone.my only relief was shiv
papa.i did'nt hav any
connection with papa 4
yrs.later I got papa's letter.i
came 2 no about his
accident,paralyses & recovery. i
told him 2 send letters only 2
college.thus I was
relieved with his leters I got
once in a
while.later….dad's friend &
his son the rock star
Ranveer came 2 our house while
dad was'nt there.i was
seeing ranveer 4 the 1st
time.he sang.that time dad came
& shouted at them.he threw
them away.dad's friend
tolerated it as he respects
dad a lot & he had an
inferiority complex as he's
from a middleclass family.i
felt sad.so I went 2 ranveer's
house.

Tia tells Ranveer:sorry 4 my
dad's behaviour.
R:I tolerated ur dad's
behaviour only 4 my dad.
R was very angry..R:I pity u 4
living with such a
horrible dad.
T felt sad:plz tell that u
4gave us
R:ok,I 4giv u only bcoz u r a
nice girl.
T smiles.but R was
serious.later when T went,R smiles.

G:thus u both fell in
luv?
T:no,we came really gud
friends .later we started luving
each other.but as I scared dad
was against it.he even
sent ppl 2 kill
ranveer.luckily he got escaped.i cud'nt
tolerate it.later saakshi dadi
became really sick.b4
dying,she told me 2 truths….my
mom was forced 2 b in the
mental asylum bcoz of dad &
shiv papa paralyisis is
caused by the accident created
by the lorry driver who
was sent by dad.
G is shocked. Tia cries:I
cud'nt tolerate anymore.i felt
that I'm in a hell.i was
living there with heavy
fear.dad tried 2 lock me
inside a room 4 days.he did'nt
bother about my sufferings.he
was that selfish.i tried 2
escape from that house.but dad
caught me.

Tia:leave me dad.i hate u.i
luv only shiv papa who
adopted me.i'm going there
Shashank:I won't allow u 2 b with
shiv;who snatched my beloved
& daughter.
T:beloved?my mom was never
urs.she was always my papa's.


T:he tried forcefully 2 push
me inside a room.in that
struggle, I pushed him.his
head hit the wall & he fell
dead.
T keeps crying.G sheds
tears:that devil made my daughter
suffer so much..

The police officer who is in
charge of this case is
Omkar nath.Ranveer goes 2 see
him:sir,I want 2 reveal a
truth that I'm the killer of
Shashank.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#79
hoe sad, i almost cried. Its good that Tia told Gauri everything and Ranveer said he was the murderer but it was Tia. Very nice, plz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#80
aww nice.. but where is shiv now?? missing him !!

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