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Posted: 18 years ago
#51
gauri in mental hospita y???????????? tia shud have killed shashank 😡 😡 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
#52
Part-17....AGAIN BACK 2 PAST

Shashank:I'll get Tia back.she's
my daughter & I'll get
it at any cost.4 that I'll do
anything.
Gauri screams:no
Shiv:Tia is not ur
daughter.she's my daughter.
Sha:its very easy 2 tell
that.but u can't 4get blood.
G:one cant simply become a
father thru blood relation.
Sha:do u think I'll not luv Tia?

Gstares at him. Sha:I can luv
her more than ur hubby
shiv.
G: shut up.I'm Tia's mom.i'l
decide who her father is.
Sha:gauri,u r in a
dreamworld.i assure u that I'l luv U &
Tia more than shiv.
S is stunned.
G:its very easy 4 u 2 tell.no
1 can luv easily.u cant
beat shiv in luv.u r nothing
b4 shiv in case of luv.
Sha controls his anger:now I'm
going.but I'll take my
daughter,also u.
S-G-Esha r shocked.Sha goes.G
cries & runs 2 her room.S
goes there.He sees G kissing
Tia.
G throws away the doll given
by Sha with anger.It falls
on S's feet.
T:what did u do mama?my sweet
doll..
Tia is about 2 cry. G:sweet
doll?its an ugly doll.don't
accept anything given by that
devil.i'l destory that
doll.
T starts crying.
Feels sad & gives that doll 2
Tia:u play with this doll
T smiles:thanku papa
T runs away with the doll.
G:shiv,what did u do?
S:gauri,ur anger shud'nt b
with that doll.it'll hurt our
innocent child.
G keeps silent.
S:gauri,don't u feel like going back 2
shashank?
G is shocked:shiv?
S:I mean…shashank is ur child's
dad.so…
G loses her control:what DID U
SAY?TELL shiv.how dare u
talk like this?
S becomes upset. G:don't u
think I & tia r a burden 2 u?

S:what r u saying gauri?I
can't liv without u both.but I
was tensed whether I'l lose u
both.
G:I can't liv without u &
tia..
G hugs S.she cries:plz don't
leave us shiv.plz …
S weeps.

Sha files 2 get Tia
back.S-G r shocked.
S consoles her:don't
worry,we'll win.we won't lose tia.

Sha meets psyciatrist Swayam;his
friend who came from
US. Sha:I need ur help,I want
gauri too along with
Tia.u shud make shiv believe
that gauri is abnormal.shiv
wil desert gauri & I'll get
her.
S smiles:ok. Sha laughs.

SHiv is alone at home as G &
E hav gone 2 Tia's
school.Calling bell rings.S
opens the door.it was
Swayam with a smiling face.
Swa:if I'm not wrong,u r
shiv.gauri's hubby.rite?
S was wondered:how du u no
me?u no gauri?
Sw:u r rite.i no gauri.
S:ok,cum inside.
SW gets inside:where is
gauri?
S:she has gone out.
Sw thinks:I no that.that's why
I came here.
S:u were gauri's classmate
in US?
Sw:no,I'm gauri's doctor.she
was under my psyciatrist
treatment.
S is shocked.

DO U THINK SWAYAM IS LYING?
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Posted: 18 years ago
#53
evil Shanks, why does he want to ruin Gauri's life and worse than him is Swayam, how cud he compromise his profession like that 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
#54
He is lying. I know that Shiv and Gauri will win 👍🏼 U r doing great so far. Plz cont. coon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#55
He is lying. I know that Shiv and Gauri will win 👍🏼 U r doing great so far. Plz cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#56
He is lying. I know that Shiv and Gauri will win 👍🏼 U r doing great so far. Plz cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#57
Part-18....Swayam:u no..gauri had 2 go thru severe
sufferings in life & thus she
was gling out of track.she
even used 2 become violent.
Shiv:no Sw:I understand ur
feelings.every husband is
lyk this.
S:if so,gauri wud've told
me.
Sw:4 that gauri does'nt no
about this.bcoz she was not
normal at that time.she may
not b ABLE 2 remember
anything
Gauri,esha & tia cum.G
stares at Sw.
S:this is….
S does'nt no how 2 introduce
Sw.
Sw:I'm Dr.Swayam;Shiv's
friend.
S smiles. G keeps staring at
sw. S:gauri,go & giv tia sum
food.mama..u too.
E:ok G keeps looking at Sw
while going.
Sw:shiv..is gauri having
any particular tension now?
S thinks:how can I tell that
gauri is tensed about
shashank,case & tia
Sw:I feel so,as I can see
gauri becoming like b4
S:what do u mean?
Sw:yes shiv.i'm a Dr.i can recognize patients.
S:u r going 2 say that gauri
is…?
Sw:relax.u see,gauri was an
interesting patient.i mean I
used 2 giv a special attention
2 gauri.bcoz she was very
special & diff from other
patients.that's why I came 2
see her.otherwise why shud a
DR care about a patient who
has already gone.i want
gauri 2 b ok.
S:so? Sw:u plz bring
gauri 2 my hospital.let me
check.let me see how her
condition is
S becomes angry:enuf Dr
Sw:I'm not forcing u.but u
miust understand that it's a
disease that shud b treated in
the beginning
itself.otherwise u can guess
what wil happen.u might
even lose ur wife.can u think
about a life without ur
life?
It touches S's mind.Sw goes.

Sw observes G.G was talking
alone in the room:no,I won't
allow
S goes out with tears:oh
god,whats this?
G tells herself:no,I shud'nt
allow him 2 take my
daughter
S goes near her:gauri,u r
tensed & tired.we'l see a dr.
G:4 such a silly thing?
S:yes,u'l b fresh
G:no shiv S:no
gauri,u'v 2
G:ok.shiv,is that swayam ur
friend itself?
S becomes dull:why?
G:bcoz u'vent told me about
him
S:I 4got.i'm going 2 take u 2
him G:ok,ur wish

G thinks:why do I feel that
I've seen swayam b4?no
chance.but still…
SW thinks:gauri was staring
at me.but I think she
does'nt remember me.once she
has seen me with
shashank.that's all.

Shiv-G enter swayam's
room. SW:hi,whats the problem?
natasha kumar thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#58
wow 😕 that was great. I hope Gauri will find out who that guy really is. Great 👏 cont. soon
gujibabe thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#59
great part!!!
continue soon plz
😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#60
thats y she is there in mental asylum

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