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Posted: 18 years ago
#61
Please cont soon, i want to know wat happens next 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part-19....Shiv:gauri feels tired.
Swayam:ok,shiv,u plz go
out.let me check
G feels weird:why cant
shiv sit here
S:gauri,I'l sit
outside.don't worry
S goes out.Sw smiles.
Sw:don't worry gauri.i'l giv u a
medicine.u'l b fresh.
Sw takes a picture of a
flower.Sw:how is it? G:very
beautiful flower
Sw smiles:ya,u can go.call
shiv inside
G goes out. G:shiv,nothing
was there.he showed me a
picture of flower.
S smiles.

S goes inside.S:is she ok?
Sw:sorry shiv,like I
doubted,gauri's condition is
going worse. S was
shocked. Sw shows the picture
of a camel:seeing this
picture she says it's a
flower.
S remembers G telling him
about the picture of the
flower.S becomes upset.
Sw:I'l giv u a medicine.lets
see
Sw gives him medicine.S-G go.
SW has an evil medicine:this
medicine wil slowly make
gauri half crack.

S:hav this medicine gauri
G:but I don't like medicines
S:but u've 2.u r tired.
S feeds her medicine.G was so
tired that she goes 2
sleep.she was talking unclear
words 2 herself.S becomes
upset:gauri is becoming
worse than b4.oh god!

Shashank goes 2 see Tia in the
school:don't u remember
me?
T:ya,the uncle u gav a pretty
doll
Sh:I'm not uncle,I'm ur dad.
Tia is shocked:dad? Sh:yes
S who cums there 2 pick up
her sees this & goes
angry:Tia,don't talk 2
strangers.
Sh:I'm not a stranger,I'm her
dad
S:that court wil decide.only
after that u'l b her dad.
Sh:ok,but thT DAY wil surely
cum.it's a challege
S:it'l remain as a dream

S-T in the car. T:is it true
that he's my dad?then why r
u not allowing me 2 b close 2
him?he is lovable no
S was shocked.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#63
swayam shud be killed by tia not only shashank 😡 😡 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
#64
oh no, stupid swayam 😡. that medicine is going to make gauri crazy 😭 that is not good. Thta Shashank has to put all the bad truth in Tia's brain ugh 😭 plz cont soon, it was very good
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Posted: 18 years ago
#65
Part-20...Shiv:so,4 u he's more imp?
Tia:no papa.u r more imp 4
me.but still how cant I luv
my dad?
S weeps:tia…u feel like going
with him? T:never papa.i
want 2 b with u all.but still
I can b close 2 my dad too
no
S becomes upset.

Gauri was really sleepy &
always talk 2 herself.Esha is
shocked 2 see G's condition.S
is really upset 2 see
this.
E:whats wrong with gauri?
S:mama,gauri is not well
E:means? S bursts into
tears:without ur knowledge I'm
giving my friend &
psychiatrist swayam's medicine.he
was her DR in Us.
E is shocked.

Swayam cums there.He sees
G.that time,G is almost
out of the sleep stage.But Sw
says:gauri in a dangerous
situation.u've 2 admit her in
the mental hospital.
S-E r shocked. S:mental
hospital?
G overhears it.she
screams:nooooooooo
Sw:see her becoming
overemotional.it's the result of her
disease.
G catches his shirt's collar &
shouts:how cud u lie like
this?I'm not mad.
Sw whispers:u've 2 b mad b4 ur
hubby shiv.he'l desert u &
only shashank wil b there with u

G shouts:u cheat! G slaps
him.
S-E r shocked. Sw:see,she's
becoming vilent.she has 2 b
taken 2 the hospital
immediately.
S:ok. G was
shocked:shiv,u….u want me 2 b in the
hospital?I'm a mad?
S weeps:no gauri.but u hav
2 b like b4.i want my old
gauri back.
S looks at t:that's the only
reason 4 which I hav agreed
2 get her hospitalized.bcoz I
need my gauri back.
Sw:I promise u that she'l b ok

G thinks:shiv loves me like
crazy.that's why he even
agreed this.
G cries.she stood like a doll
with no reaction when she
was taken 2 the hospital.
S feels upset seeing her like
this.

SWayam phones shashank:u r
successful.gauri is mad in
the eyes of shiv.he'l b fed
up pf her & he'l lose
interest in her.gauri is
going 2 b urs.
Sh is happy:thanku so much
Sh is thrilled 2 visit
G in the hospital.G
behaves like a mad woman b4
him.
Sh-Sw feel weird. Sh:gauri…
G:gauri?who is that?I'm
koyal.ok…who r u?
Sh:what? G:ya,I no u.u r
famous filmstar Salman
Khan.right?
G laughs like crazy.Sh-Sw r
shocked.

DID GAURI REALLY BECOME MAD
OR IS SHE PRETENDING?
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Posted: 18 years ago
#66
Lets hope that she is pretending 😆 Very good. plz cont soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#67
I hope she is pretending to be crazy
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Posted: 18 years ago
#68
Part-21...Shashank:nonsense!
Sh:whats this swayam?ur play
became true?u gave her
false medicines & it really
made her mad?
Sw is speechless. Sh:anyways,I
don't care.i'l b satisfied
with Tia.i don't want gauri
G
smiles.
Sw:so my doubt was true.u were
pretending 2 b mad.
G smiles:yes. Otherwise thru
any dirty play,shashank wil
carry me with him.Sita cud
never liv with RAVAN.like
that i'l never liv with
shashank.shiv is like Ram 2 me.i
need only shiv.
Sw:u cant play this drama 4 a
long time.
SW orders her 2 b given shock
treatment.G cries loudly.Sw
smiles.after the shock,Sw
cums;how was ur experience
gauri?now do u feel like
continuing ur drama?I no u cant

G laughs:u r so
foolish.however u try,I'l keep behaving
like a mad woman.
Sw:then u'l b living here till
the end of ur life
G:I don't care.bcoz its far
better than 2 liv with
shashank.
Sw is shocked.

Shiv cums 2 see G.
S:gauri,actually I need 2 confess
too.i came 2 no about ur 1st
pregnancy from
Dr.Tashu.that time I
misunderstood u as a cheat & so I
wanted 2 take revenge on u.but
wen I realized how sweet
u r at heart I felt really
guilty.
G is shocked.Tears flow from
her eyes.
S:I decided 2 correct my
mistake.i made myself promise
not u make u cry in this
life.so I'll get Tia 4 u at any
cost.so no need 2 b tensed
about it
G:what nonsense r u
talking?who r u?who is Tia?
S is shocked:Tia is ur
daughter.i'm ur husband
G:4 that I don't hav a
daughter.i've only a son.i'm not
ur wife.u r mistaken
S cud'nt tolerate:my gauri
cant even recognize me?
S bursts into tears.G controls
herself.
S thinks:gauri started
having problems with shashank-tia
problem.when we get
tia,gauri wil b ok.

Court….Advocate asks Tia:do u
no that shashank is ur real
dad?
Tia:yes ;A:whom do u want
2 go with?with shashank dad
shiv papa & …
T:I want 2 go with shiv papa
& gauri mama
Sh is shattered.S is
happy. Advocate gives the
certificates that proves
G is mad.S is
tensed.finally the court order
cums.

WHO WIL GET TIA?
natasha kumar thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#69
Lets hope Shiv, so Gauri is mad. That doctor really needs to move on with his life and live Gauri alone. Plz continue 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#70
👏 👏 👏 good job luv ur ff please keep writin 👏

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