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natasha kumar thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#81
plz hurry up yaar, i wont to read the next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
#82
Part-24....omkar:then Tia?
Ranveer:she is innocent.
O:who r u?u r the rockstar
Ranveer.rite?why shud u kill
shashank cant u liv with music?I
think u don't need 2
kill a rich man 4the money 2
liv.then why did u kill?do
u no tia & shashank personally?
R:yes.i'm shashank uncle's
friend's son.
O:ok,who is Tia 2 u?
R:I luv her
O:1 way luv or she too loves
u?
R:we both luvd each other
O:does'nt it mean that u r
lying 2 me 2 save ur beloved
?
R:no,I'm telling the truth.i
only killed him.
O:ok,now u go.we'l decide who
the killer is
R:plz sir,put me in jail
O shouts:but u just go,man
R goes.

Another police:sir,according 2
the postmortam report,the
murder happened at 1am.but tia
says it happened at 12.it
can mean that ranveer had cum
at 1 to kill shashank
O:but why? He:shashank is
supposed 2b stubborn.he
might've stood against their
marrIAGE.SO HE KILLED
HIM.in this age,which lover is
going 2 take such a big
blame on him 4 his gf?
O:ya,but can a stubborn young
killer admit his crime so
easily?

Ranveer's dad meets
Tia:Ranveer is mad about u.bcoz of
that he told the police that
he is the real killer.i no
that he's not the killer.he
lied 2 save u.plz don't put
him in the jail.i beg u
He cries.Tia weeps:I did'nt no
about it uncle.
Tia calls up Ranveer:why did u
lie 2 the police that u
killed dad.is it 4 me?why
don't u think about ur dad who
loves u so much.what'l b his
condition if u go 2 jail?
R becomes upset & he cuts the
ph.

Omkar Nath gets a spectacles
from shashank's house.O calls
Abhay 2 the police station 2
no whether its his'.Kusum
cries bcoz that shows that the
police suspects him.
A:its not mine.
O:but I doubt whether u killed
shashank as he has
insulted u many times 4 seeing
tia.
A:noooooo

Tia tells Gauri:why don't we
go 2 see shiv papa?
G:no,u go.
T:don't u feel like seeing
him?
G:but I cant face him
T:but papa wants 2 meet u
eagerly.i no that
G's eyes r full of tears.
Tia-G go 2 s's
house.Tia enters the house.Esha
cums:who r u?
T:dadi,I'm tia E is
surprised:tia? &nbs p; E hugs her.
T:there is another person too
with me.
G cums. E looks
carefully.she's surprised:Gauri?
E hugs G. T:where is papa?
E cries.

WHY IS ESHA CRYING?
natasha kumar thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#83
oh no, wat happened to Shiv, hope that he is ok 😭 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
#84
Part-25...Esha:Shiv fainted last week.since 1 week,he
is
unconcious.charu is there in
the hospital.i came here 2
take certain things 2 the
hospital.
Gauri-Tia r shocked.they
cry.they go 2 the hospital.G
sees charu.C smiles:gauri….
Dr cums:there is a happy
news,shiv is out of danger
All r happy.Esha:when gauri
came,shiv became ok.that's
the effect of true luv
G's eyes rose.T smiles.
T:Dr,can we see him?
Dr:only 1 person now.
T:mama,u go
G:no,u go T:this time,u
must go E:tia is
true.gauri has 2 go now
G goes.G sits near S who is
sleeping.G looks at him.She
remembers their earlier
days.song:dil ne{dhadkan}.G 's
tears fall on S.G wipes her
tears & go out.
G:Tia,we'll go
Charu:gauri,bcoz of my presense u
shud'nt go.after akshat went
shiv showed mercy by giving me
shelter. Nothing else.ur
position in shiv's heart is the
same.i've never tried 2 get
it.i'm going 2 another
place.not bcoz of ur
arrival.i'ad decided it earlier.i
waited till now,bcoz of
shiv's health.now he's ok.i can
go.my son wil b waiting 4 me.
T smiles. G's eyes r full of
tears.she goes.T goes after
her.

Shiv opens his eyes.E smiles
with tears:shiv beta,u r ok
now?
S:yes.i dunno why I felt that
gauri is near me
E smiles:u r right
shiv.gauri had cum 2 see u
S is surprised:what?really?
E:yes,tia also came with her
S smiles. E:gauri escaped
from the mental asylum.Tia has
grown up & looks pretty.
S:tia had sent me her
photos.but gauri…I miss her a lot.

E:gauri wil b back 2 ur
life.
S smiles.

S is discharged.Charu goes
& stays in her son's
house.
S is sitting & dreaming.
E:what r u dreaming?
S:I'm thinking about our
future life with gauri &
tia.they'l b always with me
E becomes upset:gauri wil b
there with u.but tia…
S:but why?tell me mama. E's
eyes r full of tears:Tia
is going 2 get punishment from
the court.she killed her
dad shashank
S is shocked:no!

OMkar calls
Abhay,kusum,Gauri,Tia,Ranveer 2 the station.
O:sumhow we felt that Tia is
not the real killer eventho
she admitted that she's the
killer. Postmortam report
strengthened our belief. we
suspected many ppl
including Ranveer,abhay..now
I'm going 2 reveal the who
the killer is.
All r eager 2 no who the real
killer is.
natasha kumar thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#85
wow, very interesting. Im confused, who's Charu again, i forgot. Shiv fainted 😭 , but now he is okay 😃 I thought Tia killes Shashank, well cant wait who really killed him. Plz cont soon, i want to know wat happens next 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#86
charu is Shiv's friend Akshat's wife
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Posted: 18 years ago
#87
Part-26....OMkar:the real killer is…
Suddenly Shiv cums:I'm the
killer of shashank
Tia:no!papa is lying 2 save
me.i killed him.
Gauri-shiv see each
other.they r very emotional. S:the
specs got from shashank's house
is mine.
O:why did u kill shashank?
S:he's my enemy.he tortured my
gauri.he tried 2 make her
mad.he put my poor gauri in
mental hospital eventho she
was'nt mad.so I decided 2 kill
him.but I cud'nt kill
him.when I lost gauri &
tia,I was fed up of life.The
accident & its aftereffects
destroyed me completely.the
only relief was tia's
letters.Recently I got tia's
letter.
"Dear papa,I'm writing thi
letter 2 tell u a big truth
that I'm melting into nothing
bcoz of heavy pain.why did
u giv me 2 dad?u cud've
brought me up.bcoz of the devil
who came b4 me as my dad,I
can't liv peacefully.i'vent
felt happiness since I got
separated from my papa &
mama.My dad is killing me inch
by inch.i'vent felt
secure here.bcoz of dad only u
had a big accident that
made u paralysed.I realised
that he only put mama into
the mental asylum tho she was
perfectly alright.He is
torturing me like anything.i
cant breath in this hell.so
I've only option b4 me ie
suicide.u won't b able 2 see
me or my letter as I'm going 2
die.i'm fed up of this
life.Luv urs only daughter
Tia."

S:I cud'nt tolerate it.i went
there during nite.i saw
the doors open.i got inside &
saw shashank lying down.he
became conscious.he became so
angry that he came 2
attack me.

S escapes from his attack. S:u
destroyed gauri's & Tia's
life.i can't allow u 2 liv
anymore.otherwise,tIa won't
get a gud life at all.
S:I hit his head on the wall &
thus he died.i was very
happy with what I did as it
was 4 tia.i was planning 2
inform this 2 the police.but
b4 that I fainted.then I
became conscious only 2 days
back.I never new that bcoz
of my deed,my daughter was
getting punished.
G-tia cry. T hugs
S:papa,u did all these 4 me.

S gets arrested.
After 5yrs,he gets released from the
jail.He was surprised 2 see
Tia there with Ranveer & a
small baby. T:papa,we got
married.this is our baby.His
name is Shig.Shiv papa's Shi &
Gauri mama's G.Shig…this
is ur dada.
S smiles.S takes him &
hugs.They go near the car.S was
surprised 2 see G
there.G:shiv!
G falls on his chest.S hugs
her. S:how long I was
waiting 4 this moment
G:me too Ranveer:let
them hav a romantic moment
peacefully.we'll stand
sumwhere else.
Tia-Ranveer smile.They go.S-G
r alone & they share
romantic moments.

THE END


gujibabe thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#88
great story!!!
sad, ur finishing it so soon!!!
loved the story!!!

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