Kismat Ka Khel ff updated pt33 pg91 - Page 31

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: amneet89

that was awsome update.plz cont soon 😳 😳


thank you😉😉😉
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!! 👏


thanks for your huge applause😉😉😉
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

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wonderful update!!!!!
i jus cant wait for the next part!!!!
Shiv is brilliant!!!!


thank you so much. i know he is😉😉😉
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: desi chic

humaara haal bhi kuch aisa hi hai jaaneman... unke hote hue, humaari kya majal ke hum saans len😳

Cheers,

dc


i know mera bhi haal kuch aisa hi hai. 😉😉😉
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sum2005

so shiv want to settle scores with nikila but after gauri was recovered from illness........

shiv saw gauri half naked ,will he spare gauri now 😉 .

perfect plan kiya patni ki operation keliye.........wow shiv kapoor in the role of perfect husband.......

dadaji wants to see fashion tv....to learn tips of fashion so that woh ladikiyon ko patanekeleye 😆

nice update maria...... 👏


thanks sure he will. he had to get her for the things that she had done to him. hmm i doubt it lets see what he does he is surely interested in him. i know why id dada ji always funny😉😉😉
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: shivgauri

great part!!!! 👏 👏 👏 pls continue soon!!!


thanks 😉😉😉
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: pritig

plz cont soon!!! 👏


sure😉😉😉
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Iqbaladdict

Hooray Maria, brilliant update hun, Busy yesterday could not read it, read two just now, it wad so sweet, shiv has changed so much and really like the way machaan is , he is a good friend, I think shiv is in love with Gauri already 😳 😳 but don't wanna mention it. keep it up.👏 👏 👏


thank you honey. hey i was busy too. that is why i never updated it yesterday i know he had become a good boy. i wil surely miss the bad side of him😭😭. yeah he is but have not realised it yet. 😉😉😉
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: jiya imdad

awesome part Maria!! 😳 😳 😳
continue soon 😃
p.s sorry for not commenting earlier as i m really busy , hence u r spared from my super long comments 😆


thanks jiya. hey i was expecting a long comment. you have spoiled me with your long comments. 😉😉😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
part19

gauri entered the room and saw shiv and varni playing and laughing. gauri was surprised. shiv said that she was crying and hungry. but she was playing and smiling. she went near the bed. "shiv app ne to kaha th ake varni ro rahi hai lakin yeh to khush hai." "haan varni ro nahi rahi. is liye me ne tumhe bolaya. kyun ke tum pareshan thi. tumhe me ne kaha tha ke mere kamre me ana lakin tum nahi ayi. shayad tum ne suna nahi. chalo choro batao tumhe kya baat pareshan kar rahi hai" gauri had tears in her eyes. "gauri kya hoa tumhe kya cheez pareshan kar rahi hai" he held her hand and made her sit on the bed beside him. "shiv varni mere baghair nahi reh sakti. me jab ghar ayi to yeh ro rahi thi. meri shakal dekh ke hi chuo hoi. jab me nahi hongi to jab kya kare gi yeh. shiv me is ke baghair nahi reh sakti. or varni mere baghair mere bad yeh app ko bhi bohot tang kare gi." shiv too was sad and worried about the fct that varni will mis gauri a lot. and he knew gauri wil miss her too. "gauri me janta ho yeh mushkil hai lakin tumhari treatment bhi to zaroori hai. agar tum theek naho hogi to varni ka khayal kaise rakho gi. hosla karo. jaise taise kar ke hume yeh din guzarne honge. hume dil pe pathar rakhna hoga 😭 😭" he wipes her tears. and then holds her hand tightly. "i promise you it won't be long. or waise bhi me varni ko rozana tum se milane ke liye laon ga." gauri smiles. they both play with varni for a while. both laughing looking at varni' attempt to get angry like shiv. she was trying ti mimic him. gauri could nto control her laughter she held shiv's hand tightly to stop her laughter going high. shiv stopped laughing. gauri had not realised how she held shivs hand. tehn shiv to forgot it and started laughing. then varni started crying. gauri fed her baby food then she gave took her to give her a bath. while all was watched by shiv. gauri sat there her sari tucked in tight against her stomach. he remebered gauri state in the scanning room this afternoon. he smiled naughtly. and came near gauri and sat beside her. "waise gauri tum apna figure maintain karne ke liye kya karti ho. you looked wonderfull today. i just could not take my eyes off of you. you should have been in modelling." gauri looked at shiv. it was one thingshe never had expected. she was so embarssed this aftrenoon. she looked at shiv to see if he is serious. she saw the naughtiness in his eyes. "godshiv how could you. jabhi me kahon doctor kuch or dikha rahe hain or yeh itne khoye hoe hain. abb pata chala ke kahan khoe hain." shiv looked at him and let out a little laugh. "waise tum dikh bohot achi rahi thi. seriuosly" "tease" "yeah am i good at it" "the worse teaser ever" they smiled at eachother which varni did not like. because just then she started splashing water moving her legs making them wet. shiv helped gauri. once she puts varni in to her night suit. shiv looks at her making a puppy face. "omg abb yehsab mujhe karna pare ga 2 weeks tak. me yeh kaise karon ga" gauri smiles. "hmmm seekh li jiye nahi to mushkil ho jaye gi. dadi hai shyla chachi hai wo kar dein gi. kash yeh sab na hota to me kahin na jati varni ko chor ke" shiv smiles and assures her everything wil be fine.
dadaji happily switched to fashion tv and was busy watching it. when dadi ji came. "haan dekh li jiye. koi or kaam nahi hai app ko siwaye larkiyon ke dekhne ka. chaliye change kariye mujhe wo shah rukh khan ki movie dekhni hai" "me nahi kar rah movie bhi koi dekhne ki chez hai" "aray me ne kaha na band ki jiya. agar itna shok hai dekhne ka to living room eme chale jaiye yahan fashion tv nahi lage ga." after dadi ji finish her scolding dada ji had no choice but to leave. se he left for the living room. he was watching fashion tv there. it was dinner time. and nikhila was really angry with shiv's behaviour. she could not believe her own son did that to her. all this was happening because of that gauri. she saw gauri coming down the stair. she thought of teaching her a lesson. son she will have everyone on her side before that she had to do something. gauri came down and was about to go past nikhila when she grabbed her from her arm and pulled her to face. making gauri fall but managed to saty on her foot. gauri just came from shiv's room. she changed varni and gave her t shiv "li jiye ajj ap solaiye. waise bhi jab tak me yahan nahi hongi to ap hi kairien ge so better get used to it while i am here." shiv had no other choice. but now she was in front of nikhila who might have seen her coming out from shiv's room. nikhila scolds gauri. "jab se tum ayi ho. sab ghar wale badal gaye hai. har waqt ghar me kuch na kuch galat hota hai. acha bhala shiv bhi tumhare chakar me gaya. varni ko hathyar bana ke shiv tak pohenchna chahti ho. me tumhe keh rahihon gauyri shiv ki zindagi se door raho. kyun shiv ki zindagi me dakhal de rahi hon. kyun nahi chor deti uska or is ghar ka peecha. tum to keh rahi thi ke tum doosre city transfer ho rahi ho. kab jao gi. tum jao to sara gand saaf ho." gauri was so hurt by nikhila's words. "me kal training ke liye ja rahi hon" she very gently said the words. she could not speak loudly in frnof her elders no matter what kind they are. "shukar hai finally you are leaving us. thia calles for a party. i have to celebrate this one. chalo bala tali" saying this she left while dad ji who was watching tv heard everything that happened. he was shocked that gauri was leaving. he was so depressed he cahnged the channal after two seconds he closed the tv. gauri goes to dadi's room. who was stil recovering. "dadi mujhe app se kuch kehna hai." "haan bolo beta" dadi mujeh 2 weeks ki training ke liye jana hoga kal.yeh bohot important hai or me isse avoid nahi kar sakti." "par gauri beta" "plz dadi abb mujeh jane de. app mujhe s promise kare ke app varni ka khayal rakhe gi. is ke bad me khabhi varni ro family ko chor ke nahi jaon gi khabhi bhi nahi plz dadi" "theek hai abb tum ne vada kya hai to theek hai" gauri left from there sayint thank you. she felt bad inside for lying to dadi. she had to hide the fact that she is getting operated from dadi. she did not want nikhila to find out. she just remebered her words which made her feel klike crying.
after taking dadi permission she went into the kitchen to get something to eat. se shiv can have his lunch. while she take cares of varni. she was putting food in her plate when nikhila came in and saw her filling up her plate. "aray waah gauri. bhook lagi hai kha lo. waise bhi tumhe muft ki khane ki adat hai. or phir tum kal ja bhi to rahi ho phir kahan aisi food kahne ki mile gi. tumhari salary itni jo nahi hai. na yeh aram de jaga or na yeh bariya khana. tum miss to bohot karo gi na gauri. kyun ke tum jaise logon ki niyat khabhi nahi bharti. tum logon bhoke hi raho ge chahe jitna marzi khilao. well gauri enjoy while it lasts." nikhila leaves. gauri was too upset that she puts the plate on teh table and comes to her room. she laid onthe bed crying. she then gets up stil crying and packs her things for two weeks. shiv was in his room. pacing up and down waiting for gauri to come so he can go for his dinner but she never came shiv opened the door and walked into gauri's room. he saw that she was crying. he got worried and at the same time angry. as it can effect her health. dcotor told her not to take much stress. he went near her. gauri who was unaware of shiv's presence was crying holding varni's toy. she could not take it anymore. he walks up to her and holds her by her shoulder making her face him. she was crying. "gauri tum itna worry kyun ho rahi ho me hon naphir kyun tum worry na ho." gauri could not control it so dhe hugged him while crying. shiv hugged her back making sure she was fine. no matter what he said she sould not stop crying. shiv made her face him. he hled her by her face "gauri kuch nahi hoga rona band karo. i promise very soon you will be tking care of varni." and he sealed that promise with a kiss. they sood there for a while kissing eachother. not realising what happening. the they brake the kiss. gauri all red. "me neeche ja rha hon varni so rahi hai tum us ke pass beth jao. mujeh bohot bhook lagi hai" "ji"
shiv was at dinning table. shiv came in and seated himself. "shiv gauri kahan hai" "dadaji vo varni ke pass hai" nikhila who was still angry with shiv ingnored him thinking that he will talk to he. but nothing happened shiv too ignored her. shiv was sitting next to vivan. "bhaiya mujeh app se kuch baat karni hai" he whispered in his ears "haan bolo vivan me sun raha hon" "yahan nahi bhaiya mere room me" they finished their dinner and went to vivans room. vivan after letting shiv in locked the door. "kya hoa hai vivan kuch khaas baat" "khas baat to hai bhaiya. me ne ajj ap ko or gauri bhabhi ko akathay ghar ke bahir dekha tha wo pehle ghar me ayi or app kuch dair ke bad." "han wo" "bhaiya kahin app dono lawyer ke pass to nahi gaye the divorce ke silsile me. agar aisahai to bhaiya yeh mat karna. ap bohot bari galati kare ge. gauri bhabhi bohot ahci hain. unho ne khabhi app ko bura nahi kaha. ap un ko chor gaye phir bhi nahi. maya bua or palak di ne unka bohot mazak uraya. un ko bohot bura bhala kaha jab bhi unho ne kuch nahi kaha. or niki aunty ne to had hi kar di. wo jab se le ke abb tak gauri bhabhi ko kuch na kuch kehti ayi hain. ajj bhi gauri bhabhi khana kahne lagi to niki aunty ne un ko beizzat kar diya or wo khana chor ke chali gayi kissi ne nahi poocha ke unhoo ne khana khaya ke nahi. sab apni life me busy hai. " shiv was so shocked he thought taht gauri had here dinner. he wanted to go to nkhila and fight her yell at her. but could not do anything right now. he had to control his anger. "vivan tum kahan le ke mere room me aao hum dono mil ke gauri to khana khilate hain. or rahi baat divorce ki me khabhi bhi gauri ki divorce nahi don ga. me ne us ke sath bohot galat kiya hai abb or nahi. mujeh tumhari madad chahiye" he then tells him everything about gauri's health and how he came to know. what his plan is. vivan was so shock and hurt. why was things hidden from him. he would never want anything hapen to gauri bhabhi. "par bhaiya yeh sab raaz kyun rakha hai" "vivan abhi kuch nahi kar skte. hume chup rehna ho ga. mama humari sab se bari rpoblem hain. wo khabhi nahi chahe gi ke gauri thek ho. wo us ki duniya nark se bhi badtar bana denigi is liye yeh sab kuch abhi tak to secret hi rakhna hai jab tak gauri recover nahi ho jati" "theek hai bhaiya me app ke saath ho app jaiye me khana lata hon phir hum dono us ko mil ke khilaye ge un ko bhi pata chalna chahiye ke un ki familyy in ke saath hai."
Edited by crystalclear - 18 years ago

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