Kismat Ka Khel ff updated pt33 pg91

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Shagufta

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Posted: 18 years ago

#311

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!! 👏

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Iqbaladdict

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Posted: 18 years ago

#312

brilliant update Maria, Again its sweet how all the family is on Gauri's side but nikki the devil is planning to chuck her out I love shiv Gauir sweet moments, keep it up, u r doin great. 👏 👏 👏

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Amnu

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Posted: 18 years ago

#313

changing shiv 😳 wow vivan is also gonna help shiv,shiv will feed gauri food .plz cont soon and this was a brilliant update 😳 😳

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snehal1

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Posted: 18 years ago

#314

really very interesting...
daily waiting for your update eagerly

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suni

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Posted: 18 years ago

#315

nice update maria 👏

gauri so comcern how shiv manages varni without her.....or she too is missing him and the way shiv consoles her telling they have to some how pass this phase wow so adorable relly they care each other.

🤣 dadaji waching fashion tv and dadiji wants to watch shahrukh movie wow what a couple............

uff yeh nikki why she always finds a way to insult gauri.....hope shiv teaches alesson to nikki but he is more concern about gauris health and he confessed viva he is not going to divorce gauri ...... shiv wants gauri in his life .i think he is in love ......vivan was so nice so concern for her bhabhi .

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prab_rockinn

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Posted: 18 years ago

#316

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wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111
this nikki is so annoyin 😡 😡 😡
waitin for more..... i'm jus hooked...

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zainab

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Posted: 18 years ago

#317

waiting 4 more of scenes btw dem 😉 but u know wat is wale ff tumhare eik bhi pink comments nahi the so bad see im crying 😭 shiv teased gauri abt her figure was so 😳 i think dats how we say i remember 4 a talent show i was making my frnd dressed up in a saree as she is lil plumpy i told in a just a casual way as shiv said n her reaction was same as gauri 😆 omg ur dressing me up or commenting on me 😆 😆
varni was trying to act like shiv so sweet n cute 😃

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desi chic

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Posted: 18 years ago

#318

Excellente Seniorita~
👏👏
Nikki ji... Hell's gates are open with wide arms for your graceful arrival 😉
Gauri ji... sambhalna unhe hota hai, joh sambhalne ke kabil hon, jinke hosh udhe hote hain... woh kissi ke kabil nahin rehte.
Shivvy babe... bekhabar deewaane, pardah gir gaya hai... ab khud ko khone ki tayari kar le.
Varni hunni... Keep it up sweetie, mumma aur papa ko aise hi keechti lah.
Dadaji... Uff!! kuch nahin ho sakta! *laughs*

Cont ASAP!

Cheers,
dc

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jiya imdad

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Posted: 18 years ago

#319

so now we got to see shiv's naughty yet adorable sight something different from his emotional sight, love the way he teases her.wow!! he kissed her to seal his promise another excuse to flirt i guess 😉
damn! he's going to terribly miss her 😳 . The funniest thing would be how he manages varni without gauri 😆

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maria

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Posted: 18 years ago

#320

part20

shiv came out of viavn's room thinking of gauri. he did not know about his mum behaving bad with gauri. otherwise he himself would have gone to take gauri and made sure she had her dinner. now he knew why she was crying in her room. and he thought she was crying because she was going to miss varni. she did not even complain to him. not even a word. she should have told. may be she still did not trust him. wel he knew it was not going to be that easy. he had hurt her so much she was n ot going to give her self away taht easily. he had sesertedd her today is well. he should have stopped nikhila. man why is he always late. shiv thought that he had to make this marriage work for them "i will have to for varni's sake for gauri's sake. kyhun ke jab tak me isse nahi apnaon ga. mom will keep trying toi humiliate her. sheon't let her live in peace. but how can i do that when i stil love ipshita. how could i. is zindagi me sirf or sirf ipshita se pyar karta hon me us ki jaga gauri ko kais de sakta hon. hey bhagwan app ne mujhe kis dorahe pe la kahara kya hai. eik taraf gauri hai or doosri taraf ipshita ke liye mera pyar. me ipshita ko nahi chor sakta agar chor bhi don to kis moo se gauri ke pass jaon or kahon ke gauri me tumhe apnanay ke liye tayar hon. is tarhan to me us ki beizzati karon ga me usse sirf varni ke liye apna raha hon she deserve better than that. things which he cannot give. promises which he cannot fufill. because he had made those promises to someone else. he had loved someone else. par me gauri ko chor bhi to nahi sakta she is my wife an can't live with out varni. i have to protect her. i wil not spare anyone who insults her. not from now on. even if that means mom. i wilnot spare her. because of her i had left gauri one day. but now if she cross her limit he wil leave with gauri. ang this is final. yeh mera wada hai apne app se."
shiv enters his room and saw gauri arranging varni's cupboard. she was sitting down and all the clothes were around her. she saw shiv entering the door and smiled. she then kept sorting out the clothes. shiv looked at gauri guilty. she was so week because of her illness stil she was worrying for varni. gauri looked at shiv sorting out the last piece of clothing. she put them all in the cupboard. she closed it then walked towards shiv. "li jiye me varni ki cupboard theek kar di hai. abb app ko koi problem nahi hon gi. chaliye one less thing to worry about." "humesha sab ki fikar karti ho khud ko dekha hai kaise weak ho gayi ho. tumne khana khaya ke nahi" gauri was surprised by this question. she wondered why did shiv asked her that. shiv could see her confused face. she does not answer him instead walks upto the table and took a diary. she walked back to him and handed him the diary. "yeh lien is diary me sab kuch likha hai varni ke liye. kab is ko dhodh dena hai kab baby food. or agr koi chez samujh na aye to yeh dekh lena me ne sab kuch likh diya hai." shiv could not take it she did not even answer his question which he knew tha answer of. he thrown the diary on the table. he forcely held gauri's hand. "me ne tum se kuch poocha hai jawab do tum ne khana khaya." "hann me ne kha liya" she looked down not wanting to see into his eyes. shiv took hold of her face making her face him "to phir meri ankhon me dekh ke kyun nahi boli. kyu jhoot bol rahi ho gauri. kyun nahi bata tum ne mujeh ke meri ma ne phir se tumhari beizzati ki. gauri tumhe yeh baat mujhe batani chahiye thi kyun chupati ho mujhe se cheezien. i know you don't want to tell me anything gauri but now we share a relation so you have to tell me things." shiv was about to tell gauri about their realtion when someone knocked and vivan entered. gauri was surprised to se him more surprised to se a tray of food in his hands. shiv then took both of gauri's hand and made her sit on the bed. vivan put the tray on the bed and both shiv and vivan sat down. vivan took a spoon full of rice and told gauri to eat it. "yeh li jiya babhi. kasam seaj bohot maze ki bane hain me ne jo banaye hai" "to ne" "kya bhaiya itna to mazak chalta hai." "nahi vivan mujeh bhook nahi hai" "bhabhi plz" "nahi vivan" shiv too held a spoon. "yeh lo gauri " "shiv mujeh bhook nahi hai" "pata hai tumhari sari bhook mama ki dant se khatam ho gayi lakin tumhe khane ki zaroorat hai" "bhaiya theek keh rahe hain bhabhi dekhiye kitni weak ho gayi hain app" gauri kept saying no and they kept giving her. shiv got angry. he held by her jaw. "moo kholo." gauri did not say anything "me ne kaha moo kholo" gauri got scared and opened her mouth. she ate the rice tears whelming up in her eyes. both shiv and vivan started laughing. they laughed out loud. vivan went back trying to stop laughing but instead fell backward on the floor. gauri too burst out laughing at this one. shiv laughed more. vivan still could not control his laughter. "god bhabhi. app ko bhi na bachon ki tarahan khilana parta hai. kitni zidi hai app. lakin bhaiya ne app ko danta to foran mo khol diya. is tarhan to bache zid karte hain." all trying to vcalm their laughter. shiv then looked a gauri. "gauri ajj se me or tum akathe khana kaye ge. is liye tumhe kisi se darne ki zaroorat nahi hai." "yes bhabhi he is right. app ko kisi se darne ki koi zaroorat nahi. app wohi kariye jo app ke pati dev kahe ge" gauri nodded and smiled tears coming out of her eyes. shiv wiped those tears. "abb tum royi na to mar khao gi" "sahi kaha bhabhi bhaiya ne app hasti raha karien app haste hoe ziyada achi lagti hai" "acha gauri kal dopahe vivan tumhe le jaye ga. yeh sab ko kahe ga ke tumhe station chorne ja raha hai or machan ke ghar drop kar de ga. or vivan me sham ko varni ko park le jane ke bahane nikon ga lakin tumhe dada ji ko sambhalna hoga kyun ke dadaji larkiyon se flirt karne ke liye mere saath jana chahe ge." "dont worry bhai app unki fikar na kare me unhe dekh lon ga." then he leaves saying goodnight.
gauri was about to go when shiv held her hand and stopped her. "thori dair ke liye rok jao na" gauri was surprise not by what he said. by the tone he said it in. it was more like requesting then telling her to do it. "mujeh tumse kuch baat karnii hai" gauri sat back down. "acha gauri mujhe apna ceel number dedo." "par shiv mere pass to cell hi nahi hai number kaha se don gi" shiv was surprised she did not have a cellphone. how does she manage o live now a days cell phone have become an necessity. "ok koi baat nahi me tumhe cell phone le don ga take jab tum machan ki taraf ho to hum contact me rahien." "nahi shiv is ki kya zaroorat hai. me thek hon aise hi" "gauri tume jo kaha hai wo karo. me jo karta hon karne do. mujeh argue pasand nahi hai. so don't argue." he then took money and handed them to gauri. "nah shiv mujeh nahi chahiye. mere pass hain" "me ne kaha na rakho. tum har baat me inkar kyun karti ho" "me tumhare pe kharch kyun nahi kar sakta. abb se tum apni allownce mujhe se logi. mujeh acha nahilage ga agar meri biwi ke pass eik photi kori na ho" gauri looked at him in surprise. not taking the money. "gauri plz le lo" he was now pleading as well as angry. he wanted her take it from him. it was her right. gauri took them with hesitation then asked. "why shiv why are you doing all this." "mujeh galat mat samujhna. yeh ma samujhna me tumhari insult kar raha hon. gauri yeh tumhara haq hai. or waisebhi tum 2 week ke liye bahir ja rahi ho. me tumhare pass nahi honga. tum meri biwi ho. me nahi chahta ke meri biwi kissi ki mohtaj ho." "shiv kapoor khabhi bhi apni biwi ko is halat me nahi dekh sakta. tum jitni jaldi samujh jao acha hai." gauri was scared as shiv said all this in husky voice. she nodded and got upto leave shiv got up and held her hand he pulled her towards him and hugged her. gauri was surprised. "darne ki koi baat nahi gauri sab theek ho jaye ga. me tumhare saath ho har pal. me tumhe kcuh nahi hone doon ga. me operation ke time tumhare sath rahon ga." he parted. "kal pata nahi time mile na mile. kyun ke kal subha jaldi office ke liye nikal jaon ga take me jaldi akay varni to tum se milane le aon." gauri blushes as shiv was standing so near. so close that they could hug again. "guri kal subha mera nashta tayar kar do gi" "ji" and leaves.
gauri wakes up early morning.she takes a shower. then comes downstairs. she goes to the kitchen and makes varni bottle. she was going towrds shiv's room when mahen stopped her. he seemed serious. "gauri me ne suna hai ke tum aaj training ke liye ja rahi ho" gauri felt guilty and scared as mahen might try and stop her. "acha hai. chalo abb hi sahi tum apne liye to ji rahi ho. me tumhari decision se bohot khush hon." he puts a hand on her head gauri hugs him "khush raho" she wiped her tears and walked towards shiv's room.she wiped her tears and walked towards shiv's room. she walked in. shiv and varni just woke up they were still in bed. "good morning" "good morning" saying this hiv left for the bathroom. gauri fed varni and then took her downstairs with her as she had to prepare breakfast for hsiv. vivan and dada ji were arguing about something. "app log bad me lar lena. vivan yeh lo varni ko sambhalo." she gave varni to him and walked towards the kitchen. "bhabhi me ne suna hai app ajj dopaher training ke liye ja rahihai" "haan vivan tum ne theek suna hai" "ok bhabhi me app ko drop kar don ga" "thanks vivan" "you wellcome" "vivan me bhi tumhare sath cahlon ga" "par dada ji app" "kyun me nahi ja sakta" vivan was confused. but then decided "ok" gauri started making the breakfast. shiv came downstairs. gauri served him breakfast. he whispered to gauri "me nahi honga jab tum jao gi. lakin sham ki me or varni tum se milne zaoor aye ge" gauri smiles. which was noticed by dada ji. "gauri tum ajj bohot ahci lag rahi ho" gauri blushed. "to dekhne do me kya karon tum meri biwi ho or me apni biwi se is tarhan baat bhi nahi kas sakta. or tum humesha doosron ki parwa kyun karti ho" "acha app kahe agar me bahir gayi to ap mujhe miss karien ge" "jaan tumhe miss na karon aisa ho sakta hai." that is what dada ji imagined.
in the after noon gauri took blessing of the elders. "chachi plz varni ka khayal rakhna or plz usse change kar diya karna shiv ko nahi ata." "han wo to me dekh chuki ho us din koshish kar raha tha lakin nahi hoa" "tum fikar na karo me khayal rakhon gi tum bas apna khayal rakho or udher ja ke phone karti rehna." "haan gauri beta caal kari rehna" "yeh bhi koi kehna ki baat hai dadi." and she holds her bags.

1.(bhaiyon or behnon. app shoro ka paragraph pariye. par ke dekhiye. ke kahan to shiv seconds me gauri ke kamre me yaan apne kamre me pohench jata tha. or ajj janab ko itni dair lagi ke ke uss ne itna kuch soch liya. daad deni pare gi kafi ziyada or jaldi soch leta hai. yaan he must bhi really lazy to move. that he though of the things which would take approximatley 15 to 20 mins.")
2. "me ipshita ko nahi chor sakta agar chor bhi don to kis moo se gauri ke pass jaon or kahon ke gauri me tumhe apnanay ke liye tayar hon. " (aray bhai rona band karo. tumhechorne ki zaroorat nahi hai usne hi tumhe chor diya hai. kyun us bechari ko tang karte ho. bola tha us ne ke mujeh chain nahi mile ga agar tum is tarhan pareshan raho ge. abhi to dawa kar rahe the or abhi. haqha. kuch nahi pata chalta tumhara)
3. "gauri ajj se me or tum akathe khana kaye ge. is liye tumhe kisi se darne ki zaroorat nahi hai." "yes bhabhi he is right. app ko kisi se darne ki koi zaroorat nahi. app wohi kariye jo app ke pati dev kahe ge" gauri nodded and smiled tears coming out of her eyes. shiv wiped those tears. "abb tum royi na to mar khao gi" "sahi kaha bhabhi bhaiya ne app hasti raha karien app haste hoe ziyada achi lagti hai" (vivan bhai jan app ne kya kasam khayi hai ke dosron ke words ko reapeat karna hai. sahi chamche ho bhai ke us ki han me han milaye ja rahe ho. or shiv gar tum saath hoge to dono ki bhok nahi mite gi. eik dosre ko dekho ge to khana kahan kaho ge. )
4.". tum meri biwi ho." (bhai pata chal gaya tumhari biwi hai har update me dhindhora pitna lazmi hai. hum ne kab bola hai ke parosiyonki hai. ho sakta hai us ne tumhe bol diya ho. aray abb itna gusa to kar sakti hai na)
5. . "to dekhne do me kya karon tum meri biwi ho or me apni biwi se is tarhan baat bhi nahi kas sakta. or tum humesha doosron ki parwa kyun karti ho" "acha app kahe agar me bahir gayi to ap mujhe miss karien ge" "jaan tumhe miss na karon aisa ho sakta hai." that is what dada ji imagined. (sharam dada ji sharam. bhudhe ho gaye ho lakin romance abhi tak chalo hai. sab ko apne jaisa samujh rakha hai, wo sab ke samne romance thori na karein k shareef bache hain. shiv to itna sharmata hai ke koi isse tang kare to koi pata nahi bol de meri behen hai)

ok one thing i want to ask everyne.
how would a gora pernounce madhuri dixit.

Edited by crystalclear - 18 years ago

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