New FF... 'Shiddat' (Devotion)Part 5,p.19

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KAT

@Catwoman

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Posted: 18 years ago

#81

DC wot go on here!!! love what u put down...now give us the code to unlock it!!*shake head*

I have to read it again just to understand it ...dame a contract is easy to crack?? 😕 😆 😆

Kat 😳

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JCluvs srk

@JCluvs srk

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Posted: 18 years ago

#82

hai meri jaan!.....omg this is soooo good....u describe both their sorrows sooo well....man i wonder wat cood hav happened....

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Amnu

@Eternized_Blues

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Posted: 18 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: desi chic

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Priya_128

@Priya_128

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Posted: 18 years ago

#84

heylooo.... that was beautiful...only i dont know what the "that" it is ? 😆 ....both are seperated....awww ! aisa kyun.. ur makin gauri shed uske keemti diamonds... poor thing..

i love the way u described shiv ( i presume ) playing the piano and gauri unknowinly giving into the rhythm....sab kuch bhula ke....apne hi dhun mein... 👏 👏 👏 ...do continue soon

and btw....pls rest thoda also....u sound itna tired...i dont want u falling sick again. take care babes

Edited by apapap - 18 years ago

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maria

@crystalclear

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Posted: 18 years ago

#85

dc how come they are separated. what happened between them. i love the way you conveyed emotions. i love to read more so plz cont soon. 👏

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Jenna Dutt

@Jenna Dutt

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Posted: 18 years ago

#86

so they are either in luv or were in luv, but not together anymore, and are miserable without each other and longing for each other, DC darling this one is like a tangled web, can't wait for your creative imagination to unfold the story.

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Saregama_fan

@Saregama_fan

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Posted: 18 years ago

#87

I haven't read all of it, but I still wanted to come and comment... read the intro and bit of the first part..and it is awesome 👏. I really want to enjoy it, hence will be saving the rest for later... when I am in position where my window size can be bigger than that of a small 'post it' note... reading one word at a time and having to scroll takes the fun out of it... hehehe... don't ask 😳...I don't like to admit that on fridays I slack off and secretly read fics 😳... anyways want to let you know, you are just great with words...just great ...Great....GREAT...GREAT ...GREAT...GREAT 👏

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KAT

@Catwoman

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Posted: 18 years ago

#88

Ok Dc where the update??? ... no excues!

Quick girl bang at them keys harder!! 😆 😆 😆 jk
billo
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desi chic

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Posted: 18 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Rock_Star
such a big mystery going on...gauri and shiv had a past and something happened and now they aren't together anymore...this suspense is killing me what actually happened which caused this
very detailed update i could imagine the whole happening...amazing work 👏 👏 update soon

Thanks Roopster... glad u had pateince... and don't worry, I'll reveal the pathetic raaz soon... its not really a "bomb" I guess.

Cheers,