New FF... 'Shiddat' (Devotion)Part 5,p.19 - Page 8

Sorry for the massive delay guys and *blow kiss* for ur tolerance levels, and patience of course 😳 I kinda took an extended break. Sorry if I bored ya'll, its late and I'm beat. I tried...

Cheers,
dc

congratz dc..u knw y?? for making me feel confused again...
how come when ever i read your FF i get very confused??? 😛 😛 😛

i hv no idea whts going on in this story 😆
ut im sure u r going to put me out of this misery soon 😆

yeah im confused too... 😕 explain whats happening please.
but seriously you have a way with words. 😃

neetu di

this is really confusing all i got is that shiv and gauri LOVED each other and now are seprate and ipshita know all about them except the except u left
these dark secrets of their lives are not letting both of them to move ahead in thier lives...di kuch karo na
shiv was drunk...majnu ki aulaad...i tell u di...guys are useless...devdas
this part had so much depth in it...it was jus awsome...i m out of words now and soory again

love u

Ash, ixi-shaj, and Amnu...

Thanks for the sweet commentos guys!
Ok since all of you are confused, let the biggest confused soul help ya out here a bit.
Indeed, Shiv and Gauri share a past; a past of obviously deep affection however something went wrong one day. The first half of this update is trying to convey Shiv's sense of helplessness as he is struggling with "life" without Gauri. He is very much love-lorn and distraught.I've included a small flashback of where Gauri comes to Shiv and she stunned by something and really upset so she takes some steps away from him and watches helplessly. The latter half is Gauri's pathetic state. She's in a love-hate relationship with her memories, memories plauged by Shiv. Lets just say Shiv made a wrong move and she cannot seem to forgive it, but also cannot forgive him, hence "shiddat" she is devoted to him. *ahem* Ipshitta knows only what Gauri does. Currently, Ipshitta is trying coax Gauri into going out as she is always hidden away in thoughts. But Gauri has turned kinda hallow after her passionate encounter with Shiv. The flashback is just a moment in the past she had shared with Shiv uknowingly, but later finds out it was him. I hope this helps!

Anything else?

Cheers,
dc

Originally posted by: ixi-shaj

yeah im confused too... 😕 explain whats happening please.
but seriously you have a way with words. 😃

Thanks yaar! I wrote a lil blob at the end of page 10 to help clear confusion. Hope it helps!

Cheers,

dc

such a big mystery going on...gauri and shiv had a past and something happened and now they aren't together anymore...this suspense is killing me what actually happened which caused this
very detailed update i could imagine the whole happening...amazing work 👏 👏 update soon

great part!!!
continue soon plz!!!
😊