Mannat Har Khushi Paane Ki: Episode Discussion Thread - 24
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hey last time u said 1 wk n v didnt c your face for 2 months after tht..this time 1 or 2 days.... so this time hw many years???? š
Ashu ki bachi!!šš This time only a few hours *ahem*š³
yeah..go n write Tanhayee......after a long time u r updating tht FF š Oye, I updated that yesterday... š
mayb... finally i'll get to c the ending abhi toh shuru hui hai baazi, aur tum khatam karna chahti ho... what nek vichar!šCheers,
dc
Originally posted by: prab_rockinn
note pe note,note pe note....
mujhe insaaf chahiye....
ek update.....
aur notes nahi......
insaaf... *slaps hand on forehead* itna galat hua aapke saath mohtarma... where's ur lawyer?!š remember, the lady of justice has a blindfoldš
Cheers,
dc
Originally posted by: Catwoman
Now honey...are we getting an update??.... š³ š³
itni bhi kya jaldi di... give the girl a break! I'm trying to write some mirchi masala... waqt toh lagega na!š uff... this is gonna be so shitty!! Lemme get some food!
until then... listen to this... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gm740cp1Hfo *sighs* amazing... š
Cheers,
dc
Originally posted by: desi chic
itni bhi kya jaldi di... give the girl a break! I'm trying to write some mirchi masala... waqt toh lagega na!š uff... this is gonna be so shitty!! Lemme get some food!
until then... listen to this... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gm740cp1Hfo *sighs* amazing... š
Cheers,
dc
Wow i heard that last week ago wicked song!!šš...
Ok here the deal!! Update this on Friday same day i update Honey...btw that Shiv is Yours...u have offical claim to him!!šš...
RD pinched the mask one.....Ash9 has fanna....Kuku has I hate u....sum has shades...as for pillowtalk thats prabhu.....šš...as for my shiv finger cross u will see him soonš
Originally posted by: Catwoman
Wow i heard that last week ago wicked song!!šš... I know, its rocking!
Ok here the deal!! Update this on Friday same day i update Honey...btw that Shiv is Yours...u have offical claim to him!!šš... Hai, mera sher punjabi!š He's always been mine!š³ As for my update, I'm posting today for sure... and Friday is too far off to wait for your update I'm almost done here, so will post.
RD pinched the mask one.....Ash9 has fanna....Kuku has I hate u....sum has shades...as for pillowtalk thats prabhu.....šš...as for my shiv finger cross u will see him soonš
SubhanAllah... Mirchi ne dil vich tandh paa ditti!! Fingers, toes all crossed!š
Cheers,
dc
Part 2
A taxed moan escaped his slightly parted lips as consciousness gradually came back to him. Squinting his eyes, he lifted his head whilst bringing a hand through his hair for support. Slowly, as his eyes opened, the surroundings sunk inā¦ yet provoked no reaction. It was as though unimportantā¦ what happenedā¦ Slightly aware of it, his hand fumbled for the switch on the boardā¦ A soft tune rang throughā¦ his senses numbedā¦ Sighing, his head rolled back on the headrest desperately trying to escape the overwhelming painā¦ of sorrowā¦
The soft lips twitched slightly upwards, allowing presence of the endearing dent to the sideā¦. The lipsā¦ which had forever tempted himā¦ dared to evoke thatā¦ which he had no knowing he containedā¦ The eyesā¦ a soft innocence beheld within themā¦ yet they seemed to possess the capability no other hadā¦ They dug through his exteriorā¦ piercing his existenceā¦ He felt his own lips match her expressionā¦ His eyes grazed the heavenly sight beneath his lidsā¦
Have I told you how good it feels to be meā¦ when I'm in youā¦
I can only stay cleanā¦ when you are around, don't let me fallā¦
Suddenly the lips lost their curveā¦ fading into a lost dreamā¦ They quivered gentlyā¦ vehementlyā¦ The eyes that were twinkling in content but a minute agoā¦ now hallowedā¦ stoic, yet aliveā¦ with questionsā¦ He squinted his eyes fervently, while a shot of pain swept through his veinsā¦ At some point, his hands found his faceā¦ As his agonizing voice pierced the silenceā¦ his soulā¦ "Gaureeā¦" The sound vibrated back at him as he desperately rubbed his faceā¦ still squinting his eyesā¦ searching for solace in her lost smileā¦
If I close my eyes foreverā¦ would it ease the painā¦
Could I breathe againā¦
As his fists obliviously pounded against the steering, the acute wailing of the honk attempted futilely to overtake the still echoing name he had breathedā¦ "Gaureeā¦"
****
The cool breeze stung his face with ferocity as his hand enveloped the clutchā¦ bringing a shaky hand through his hairā¦ The eyes void of expressionā¦ the lips stale of a smileā¦ flashed relentlessly before his faceā¦ Blurring his visionā¦ his lifeā¦ or whatever remained of it soā¦ His foot pressed hard against the gasā¦
Maybe I'm addictedā¦ I'm out of controlā¦
But you're the drug that keeps me from dyingā¦
He placed his hand on the clutch once moreā¦ gripping it with unknown ferocityā¦ His knuckles paledā¦ As did the colour drain from his face as he recollected the abhorred momentā¦
Flashbackā¦
The shriek of glass hitting the hard ground pierced the momentā¦ echoing in the excruciating silenceā¦ His eyes looked to the cemented earth, each shard pointing accusingly at himā¦ piercing his soulā¦ Looking up, he perceived the dent in her face disappearā¦ without a trace. Her eyes emptied of all emotionā¦ as though in disbeliefā¦ He watched helplessly as her feet retraced their steps backwardsā¦ the jovial anklets made music as alwaysā¦ but they did not soothe his essence like alwaysā¦ They danced to some unknown tunesā¦ reeking of unbearable sorrowā¦
End Flashbackā¦
I'm wasted awayā¦ I made a million mistakesā¦ Am I too lateā¦
Parking the battered vehicle into some unmarked space, he slammed the door shut after stepping into the cool night's air. Looking at the beer can in hand, a sudden rage gripped himā¦ The sound of the feeble metal hitting the ground afar lingered momentarily in the atmosphereā¦ as he walked unstably towards his apartmentā¦
As he approached the glass doors to the building entranceā¦ the reflection off it became clearerā¦ A worn out man stared back at him with hallow eyesā¦ His heart ached as hers flashed before him againā¦ Cursesā¦ He pushed his hand against the cool surfaceā¦
There's a storm in my headā¦ it rains on my bedā¦when you're not hereā¦
I am not afraid of dyingā¦ but I am afraid of losing youā¦
He stared flatly at the blank ceilingā¦ his body lay motionless on the soft surface, providing him no comfortā¦ In sudden instinct, his arm outstretched, his fist leaving an indent in the foamy surfaceā¦
His gaze shifts to the opening doorā¦ and immediately he sits uprightā¦ Seeing her divine figure float towards him in the pristine white outfitā¦ He felt his muscles relax as the white fabric fell over his faceā¦ Squinting his eyelids, he lingered on the luxurious momentā¦ Before opening it to her laying across from himā¦ An endearing smile playing upon her luscious lipsā¦ Gathering some unknown strength, he found his arm extend towards herā¦ nothingā¦
When you're lying next to meā¦ love is going through meā¦
Oh it's beautifulā¦
Everything is clear to meā¦'till I hit realityā¦ and lose it allā¦
Taken aback by the broken reverie, his eyes dart around the roomā¦ finally closing in helplessnessā¦ As his knees go weakā¦ rendering him a heap on the floor.
***
Desperate drops of water cling at his skinā¦ all in vainā¦ as another gush from the shower misplaces themā¦ He stands beneath the open cascade of clear liquid, oblivious to it's feelā¦ As the eyes stare passionately into nothingnessā¦ Raking a hand through the silky layers, his gaze shifts to the ceilingā¦ closing the eyesā¦ Allowing the waters soak his open skinā¦
Maybe I'm addictedā¦ I'm out of controlā¦
But you're the drug that keeps me from dyingā¦
***
"Gauri!!" She turned to see a sleek figure wrapped in a mauve sari take brisk strides towards her. The figure's long tresses swayed gently with the wind as her feet moved quicker in excitement. As the feet stopped before her, she turned an expressionless face towards her best friend, Ipshittaā¦ Ipshitta Das Gupta. She had always been thereā¦ even on that dayā¦ exceptā¦ "Gauriā¦ !!" She looked at the beady eyes questioning her and she shook her headā¦ "Kya hua?" (What happened?), she wondered aloud. Ipshitta shook her head, whilst dramatically smacking a hand on her forehead. Turning her big brown eyes back at her, she settled her hands onto her hips demandingly. "Hey bhagwaan, main iss ladki ka kya karoon?ā¦ Maine bola tah na, aaj Saanwari ki mehendi ki rasam hai, aur hume wahan jaana hai," (Oh God, what am I to do with this girl?ā¦ I told you na, today is Saanwari's mehendi ritual and we are going there.) she stated with emphasis on the latter half. Immediately, her soft features curled in apprehension and she gently shook her head. "Ipshittaā¦ tum jaanti hoā¦" (Ipshittaā¦ you knowā¦) "Main jaanti hoon ke tumhe ye sab acha nahin lagtaā¦ Ye ronakā¦ Ye shor sharabaā¦ Ye naachnaā¦" (I know you don't like all thisā¦ These celebrationsā¦ This rowdinessā¦ This dancingā¦) She looked up, narrowing her eyes at her honest friend who stared back at her challengingly. A gently film began to blur her vision and she looked away furiouslyā¦ determined to disallow the past to plague the momentā¦ "Gauriā¦ tum kab taq kal mein jeeti rahogi?ā¦ Bhool ja usseā¦" (Gauriā¦ for how long shall you live in the past?ā¦ Forget itā¦) She stared blankly into Ipshitta's eyes as the latter knelt before her with loving concern. Her eyes closed as a single tear escaped, rolling down her cheekā¦ feeling her friend's hand softly wipe away the gem, she opened them slowlyā¦ "Bas Gauriā¦ In anmol heeron ko aise kyun zaya karti hoā¦" (Enough Gauriā¦ Why are you wasting these precious gems like thisā¦), Ipshitta whispered softlyā¦ For a moment, even the latter gave into the sorrowing shadow seeing her friend in such a pathetic stateā¦ Days had turned to monthsā¦ Yet Gauri had remained unaffectedā¦ A cursed devotion it wasā¦ To something perhaps never meant to beā¦ Quickly wiping away the forgotten tears, Ipshitta got up in a hurry and pulled her friend up. "Mujhe koi bahana nahin sun na, chalo abhi chalke tayar hoā¦" (I don't want to hear any excuses, come and get ready right nowā¦) She parted her lips in silent protestā¦ But as she had been accustomed to now, her protests went in vainā¦
***
The muscial notes flew through the night's air... finding their way to her... Sighing apprehensively, her hand fumbled for the switch to her side. Soon enough, the glass came rolling down, allowing the cool breeze soothe her chaotic state. Leaning back in her seat, she closed her eyes... Her mind wandering to moments she had so long been haunted by...
Flashback...
Curses... Gently she smacked the side of her head for being so forgetful, leaving parts of her art portfolio in the gym. As always, her feet and the captivating music had taken her awayā¦ and all else had been forgottenā¦ until she reached half-way home and realized the rough draft was due tomorrow! Carefully, she tiptoed into the corridor, breathing a sigh of relief that campus had been open late nights for renovations. Her feet calculatedly approached the far end of the buildingā¦ when suddenly ceasing mid-step. The soft notes of a melodious tune hummed through the halls, beckoning herā¦ Obediently, her feet retraced their course to the auditoriumā¦ The melody suddenly seemed to have gained momentum, and she found it tingling her solesā¦ Curtains draped loosely from the high ceilingā¦ Their transparency allowed her eyes to graze upon a silhouetted figure hunched over a large objectā¦ the pianoā¦ The room was dimly lit, illuminated only by certain moonbeams extending large shadows of various dimensions across the wooden floor. As she tiptoed closer to the translucent veil, her heart rang thunderously against her chestā¦ The bewitching harmony stirred through her, invigorating her previously exhausted body. It was so soothing yet ferventā¦ like a cry from a devoted soulā¦ immersed in the rhythmā¦. Gently pulling a little corner of the drape aside, she rested her eyes upon a sturdy figure sitting on the black stool. Even in the dimmed lighting, she couldn't miss the firm features from the side of his face. Her eyes outlined the strong jaw line downā¦ The rhythm abruptly touched a higher pitch and she found the veil fall over as she took a few steps backā¦ Unable to stop the pervasive music from appeasing the chords of her spirit, her feet began to join the melody in their passionate endeavour. Her each step defiantly matched each note, engrossing into the soothing chaosā¦ So caught up she became in the moment, her senses numbed to the present silenceā¦ The invigorating beat still echoed profoundly in her earsā¦ As she twirled confidently into the mysterious shades of the room, her petite figure met with another lost in her charismaā¦ Momentarily, her eyes met with the strangersā¦ The endearing manly musk emoted generously from the sturdy figure, as the eyesā¦ They searched her soulā¦ Faintly aware of the stranger's arms holding her firmly by the waist, she continued to match the intensive gaze, unable to perceive anything butā¦ Blinking, reality suddenly appeared to seep through once more and she found herself quickly avert her gazeā¦ A pause in time allowed her to gather her shame and she found her eyes search the dark floorsā¦ when the world began to go aroundā¦ As her body moved to the same intensive beatā¦ Her muscles seemed to loosen with each step as the stranger led her body to the same rhythmā¦ As her petite frame singled against his bulk she found her eyes still closedā¦ still living the danceā¦ Her chest heaved slightly as it all sunk inā¦ Gradually opening her eyes, she quickly stepped forward. Picking up her precariously draped dupatta, she ranā¦ without a look at her devoted companionā¦
End Flashback
"Gauriā¦ Gauri uthoā¦" Startled, she opened her eyes to see Ipshitta give her a concerned look. "Haaā¦ Haanā¦" she stuttered. "Gauri, tum teekh ho na?" (Gauri, are you alright?)ā¦ Taking a longing look up at the broad skies she sighed deeplyā¦ as though gathering the remnants of a lost energyā¦ and turned to look at Ipshitta with a smile and a nodā¦
Cheers,
dc
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