New FF... 'Shiddat' (Devotion)Part 5,p.19 - Page 10

Originally posted by: Catwoman

DC wot go on here!!! love what u put down...now give us the code to unlock it!!*shake head* erm... memory lapse?😳😆 lemme assure u... I'll bring it out soon... not too big though...

I have to read it again just to understand it ...dame a contract is easy to crack?? 😕 😆 😆 really? I'm doing mighty FINE than!😃

Thanks Billo Raaniye...

Cheers,

dc

Kat 😳

Originally posted by: JCluvs srk

hai meri jaan!.....omg this is soooo good....u describe both their sorrows sooo well....man i wonder wat cood hav happened....

JC meri jaan!... u're a gem baby... *mwuaaah*

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: amneet89

Originally posted by: apapap

heylooo.... that was beautiful...only i dont know what the "that" it is ? 😆 ....both are seperated....awww ! aisa kyun.. ur makin gauri shed uske keemti diamonds... poor thing..

uff... maine kya keeya yaar... its her karam😆 as for "that", it shall reveal soon enough...

i love the way u described shiv ( i presume ) playing the piano and gauri unknowinly giving into the rhythm....sab kuch bhula ke....apne hi dhun mein... 👏 👏 👏 ...do continue soon

aww... pri, I love u yaar! u make me feel so much better, cause I actually didn't like how I wrote the scene... thanks yaar!😳

and btw....pls rest thoda also....u sound itna tired...i dont want u falling sick again. take care babes[

meri amma... *big japphi*... tere liye apun apne ka khayal rakhenga😉 don't worry, I don't get sick often... rab di mehrbaani...

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: crystalclear

dc how come they are separated. what happened between them. i love the way you conveyed emotions. i love to read more so plz cont soon. 👏

Maria,

They're separated... due to something... which will unfold soon enough, gimmie a lil time. Thanks for your commentos dah'lin, appreciate them!

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: Jenna Dutt

so they are either in luv or were in luv, but not together anymore, and are miserable without each other and longing for each other, DC darling this one is like a tangled web, can't wait for your creative imagination to unfold the story.

Jenna ki bachi, where the heck are u? haven't seen u around much... yes, you're right... and creative is not very creative this time😳 don't hold high expectations... thanks yaara...

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: Saregama_fan

I haven't read all of it, but I still wanted to come and comment... read the intro and bit of the first part..and it is awesome 👏. I really want to enjoy it, hence will be saving the rest for later... when I am in position where my window size can be bigger than that of a small 'post it' note... reading one word at a time and having to scroll takes the fun out of it... hehehe... don't ask 😳...I don't like to admit that on fridays I slack off and secretly read fics 😳... anyways want to let you know, you are just great with words...just great ...Great....GREAT...GREAT ...GREAT...GREAT 👏

Well... well... well... Bless me... Mohtarma, aap yahan? I won't ask but... U know, I do something similar with urs... relish the words... 😳😆 and that's not because my window is tiny either😳 u're a slacker as well eh? works for moi~ I'm a bit of that myself sometimes hehe... waise, I'll update tomorrow, fri...

"great"? woh toh main hoon, kuch naya batao yaar *waves fan*😆 JK!! U guys are too much... I try... and "great" is too noble... not me yaar...

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: Catwoman

Ok Dc where the update??? ... no excues!

Quick girl bang at them keys harder!! 😆 😆 😆 jk
billo
😉

erm... I'm in a tough spot... damn, I know what to write, but then don't... if u know what I mean argh... how about july 6th😳 my bechare fingers are sore from banging on for another ff... u watch KGGK? waise, u made a request a lil while ago... I've been thinking😳

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: apapap

okay its aaj in my time also....ab toh update kar !!!

aaj? kal u mean!😳

Cheers,

dc