Khamoshiyon Ki Zubaan ff...END p.86 - Page 4

Lordy!!! U do it everytime!!! Such confidence, such passion... It can only be Shiv and no one else... And when someone calls out to you with sooo much feeling, how can Gauri not respond...

Neetuji, aapka mai kya kahu, aap sach much bemisaal hai... 👏 But it seemed kinda short, I want more 😔

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i'm spellbound......
awesome......
waitin for lots more to come....

Originally posted by: desi chic

😆😆 isbaar toh bach gayi lekin...😆 waise tumhaari aankhein toh humesha mere Mirchi par tiki hoti hai... good keep them away!😳😆

Salaam kabool hazur... aapko humara *blows kiss*😆

Cheers,

dc

mirchi, mere mirchi cub se hogaya jaanu😆😳

speechless. 👏 ....... 😳 dc u sure know how to end it. ekta ki lessons... 😆

Hey Neetu,

Great Update, Shiv is feeling so guilty and helpless, even if she was gonna survive he most certainly will kill her now, Man oh man, what r u thinking Intensive care se uttha kar le aye, god help her, but she did wake up at the end didn't she, so something sure is working for her, keep writing, I love the way shiv is all emotional over her 😳 😳,

well done 👏

aaaaaaaaaaa....this was so much better than wht i suggested..hehehe.....awesome awesome awesome....how do u write all this....im envious...shiv is soo sooo sooo awesome...bas..now i want a guy like this..mil gaya toh bol dena...

my fav part....
Taking her hand in his, he brings it to his heart… "Sun rahi ho na… Sab tumhaari wajase… mein pagal hoye ja raha hoon…Tum mere saath aisa nahin kar sakti, mein tumhe karne nahin doonga."


dil ko chooh gaya....it gave me goose pimples....shivers down my spine....aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....th ts me shouting btw....cos im not in my senses....damn i sound pathetic....agar im in a state to write somethin better...i;ll come back and edit my post...hehehe....great job

hai.. dii...

amazing part, i loved it all... and onli iqbal and pallavi's chemistry did
justice to your part......!!

i loved especially the part where he says to her lifeless body... because of
you, i am becoming insane!!

wow!! even though i am absolutely speechless at the fact you can always
out do yourself... and still prewarn us that the part was awful..!!

dii.. please do continue soon..!
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Originally posted by: JCluvs srk

yaar tum update kab karoge? yahaan meri halat karab ho rahi hai intezaar mein.

I did last night hun... Oh no!! Yaar, apni tabeeyat ka khayal rakha karo... Warna mera kya hoga?

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: nyzbabigyal

sooo blue 😳 i love it 😉 😆 😆

ur updating in half an hour right?? it'll be wednesday in half an hour 🤔

i try to be funny😆

waise HAPPY VALENTINES DAY!!!!!!!!!!! 🤗

Lolz... I knew you'd like it for that reason if not anything else!😆

Haha... funny shunny... you always crack me up!😆 thanks yaar!! same to you!! 🤗

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: racho8

neetuuuuuuu HAPPY VALENTINES DAYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ❤️

*mwuaaah!!!!!*

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Cheers,

dc