Khamoshiyon Ki Zubaan ff...END p.86 - Page 2

Originally posted by: just4coll

Okie... Know its been ages since I commented... And Happy Valentine's day!!! And I have to say the part rocked even more than usual. 👏It was Shiv's through and through. The anguish he's going thru... very eloquently put... But where does he think he's carrying her off to like that? Dude, aisehi ICU se kisi ko uthate nahi hai .... 😆

Originally posted by: yamulya1

dc ki bachi ki magic sab karthi hi😳

"Chale jaise hawayien sanna sanna... udey jaise parinde gagan gagan... Jayein titliyan jaise magan magan... Mein deewani dil ki rani, gham se anjaani... Kab darti hoon, woh karti hoon, joh hai thaani"😆

Amu you just know me too well for my own good!😆

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: desi chic

"Chale jaise hawayien sanna sanna... udey jaise parinde gagan gagan... Jayein titliyan jaise magan magan... Mein deewani dil ki rani, gham se anjaani... Kab darti hoon, woh karti hoon, joh hai thaani"😆

Amu you just know me too well for my own good!😆

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: maragathm

I know I have not replied in a long time. Its ok.😛 Sorry. But I do read your fan fic. Thank you!😉 Of course it is my favourite. Lol, are you serious? Sooooo sweet jaanu!! Thank you!!😳 Love has surely blossomed between Shiv and Gauri. Haan, par dono bewakoof khud nahin samajhte. 😆But hopefully that portrait girl doesnt come in the middle and does not ruin anything. Haha… Don't worry, I'm surprised no one else mentioned that. Anyways, mujhpe bharosa rakho jaan.😉 Hopefully she is just a figment of Shiv's imagination. I'll ask him. 😉Why do I get the feeling that Shashank did not fire that bullet. Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. Yeah, that's what I was thinking "Ummmmmm…"😕Anyways wednesday update. Yep, that happens to be today right? Looking forward to some passionate dialogues that Shiv will tell Gauri, while he is carrying her and she is unconscious. Haha… its "Khamoshiyon Ki Zubaan" baby, I do all the bak bak here, ask Amu even! 😆Ahhhhhhhhhhhh such a filmy scene. LMAO… my style!😉The heroine in the arms of the hero, at the brink of death, only brought back to life by the tears and pleas of the hero to his beloved. Whoa whoa… hold that thought… actually, its not a bad idea… dekhte hai Shiv kya karta hai.😳 Okkkkkk

Thanks for the wonderful comments hun… Loved them!

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: shiv-gauri=4eva

Shiv is in luv wid gauri....tht is so shweett...she better get well soon!!

Thanks hun!!😉 Yeah… usse samjhao na, wohe duffer abhi taq confused hai!… don't worry about Mrs. Gauri Kapoor, the docs will have to worry about their health if something happens to her… Mr.Shiv Kapoor joh wahan khare hai! 😳

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: racho8

OH MY GODDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Kya hua?!!😕

where the hell is he taking her??????????????? 😆I don't know… khud hi poochlo na....i cant believe this what?😕....neetu ki bacchi oh gawd… that tone of voice… mein toh chali… yikes!!...phir se suspense??? Um.. wohe mein.. um…😕😳...tujhe to main chodungi nahi .. hai meri maa, agar chodegi nahin, toh mein update kaise karoongi?😕😆… waise agar yehi baat mujhe my mirchi kehde, kasamh se… chodoon toh kya, kuch aur dekhoongi bhi nahin * sighs *☺️

well thanks for the clues kaise clues??😕....now im 99%sure tht he loves her... really? Hahah.. usse bhi toh samjha na!😆 What happened to the .1?😕 are yaar i kno wt u mean but i have to keep 1% for my self...till he tells gauri... oh achaa!! Haha… you're insane!!😆

oh i loved tht image scene with the mirror?😕 Haha… to be honest, I had that scene in mind way back when I started this😛… just didn't know how or when to use it, and then it just flew in!😆....omg tht was amazingggggg it was?… gushes😳...i jus kept on sayin omg awwwwww...omg awwwwwwwww....omg awwwwwwww... haha… hassate hassate maar dalegi kya?!😆

anyway....where is he takin??? Told u… I'll ask him and let u know😆.....i hope they confess their feelings since its valentines day .. um… about that… hehe… okie… no comments…😳

continue soon.. ji hazur!

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: mirchy

Ohh didi! Yes love…Kya kehke aape ff ko bulawoge? Um… joh tum jaho?😕............
jo sabse 'marvalous' hay!!!!!!Ohh didi!!! hai mein marjavan😳… you're so cute… thanku!
Didi................at last i followed ur ff!!!(Wen i left,i missed all the ffs!!! But 2-day nw i'm following ur ff!!! (I read all the missed parts yesterday!- at night!) Craziness!! Was wondering where you disappeared… I was gonna pm you too, but now that you're here, I'm not letting you hide!😃

Thanks jaan!

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: Addz

really gud one

Thanks a bunch hun!!😉

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

tooooooooooooooo good...... merci😉

its wonderful.............. shukriya😳
his love,passion and care are depicted brilliantly.... dhanwaad😳😳
waiting for more.... haha… don't have to wait long! 😉Promise!

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: rajeev_eijaz

awesum gng 👏 thanks Saraa😉.......neetu diii yes ji😊....UR THE BEST Hai Rabba!! Cho sweet darling. Thank you so much!🤗...with shair-o-shayiri and with FANFICS toooo WOW😆.😆 shair-o-shayari is Sareeta Di's domain... hum toh bas...........mindblasting job haha, you are too cute!!😆....keep the gr8 work up!!waiting for more to come 😳 Thanks sweetiepie!!

Cheers,

dc


JR DON

Originally posted by: racho8

neetuuuuuuuu wherez my valentine special update?? 😉 😳

I don't know about "special", but I'm working on one... almost done😉 Will be up soon.

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: desi chic

I don't know about "special", but I'm working on one... almost done😉 Will be up soon.

Cheers,

dc