ff: pyar to hona hi tha (NOTE! pg78) - Page 5

awesome part 👏 👏
abhi say staring😳.....ahhhh why did that shanky came back 😡 😡

very nice update, atleast he has started looking into her eyes and can see her sadness........
pls. continue soon.

y is that Shanks comming bakk 😡
anyways romantic part
continue soon!!!

tell u guys wat....if i get 10 replies for part 5 then i'll update part 6 2night. 😃

wow great it was great...good job...keep it up...cant wait for the next part 😊 😳

well it wasn't boring infact it was a cute n romantic 😳 part due to the starring session 😳 ................but the suspence of what is shiv upto is 😕 still there so please continue 2night

wow, nice one, The eye contact 😉 😉 n the heart racing, 😆 😉 he won't get away for too long, 😆 keep writing, u r wicked.

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good one 😳 plz cont......sooon

nice ff 👏 👏 gauri is right shiv is a ajeeb insaan 😆 kabhi acha kabhi bura😆

I just happened to be snooping around in the KAA Archive Mansion looking for nothing in particular when I spotted the "FFs section". A smile appeared on my face as I just randomly clicked on one... which happened to be yours.

As I read along, I found that I just couldn't stop... I read the whole thing, which is not very long in the first place, in one go!... Simply stated (my reaction I mean), was that my jaw was on the floor. It was superb in the truest sense... You've got quite the imagination hun, and I'm thankful for you sharing it with us!!

Awesome work, now jaldi karo and post!!

Cheers,
dc