ff: pyar to hona hi tha (NOTE! pg78)

hey i'm writing a new fanfiction...this is my very first fanfiction so plse bear wit me n i really hope tat all of u enjoy it. i'm writing this fic wit iqbal as shiv and pallavi as gauri in mind. 😳 the story is gonna be kinda the same wit twists n truns...its basically how i wanted the story to turn out to be like.

storyline: all the characters r mostly the same. shashank n gauri wer gonna get married n gauri luvd him like crazy, but shahshank didnt want to get married at this age. on the day of the wedding he ditched her b/c shiv's frnd did tat whole drama n insulted gauri. shahshank thought this was a perfect time to stop the wedding n so he left. mahen thought tat shiv was at fault n made him marry gauri. nikila is good in this story n ther is no kudali dosh. ippishita is a close frnd of shiv's but they r not havin an affair. infact she is quite fond of gauri n helps her out when shiv is being rude.

so tell me shood i continue?

plz continue....it looks very interesting... can't wait to read it

The shiv/gauri wedding is over and this is their suhag raat.

Gauri is sitting in the bedroom thinking about how her life just did a 360 turn.
Gauri thinking: 'why did shashank leave? Everything was so perfect between us…I thought he loved me?' tears slowly started to from in her beautiful dark eyes…. 'And shiv?....he doesn't even like me and now we are married. What am I going to do?'

Just then she heard the door open and shiv walked in. she stood up from the bed she was sitting on and waited for shiv to yell at her. Shiv was known for his anger, but he was also known for his good looks, charm, style, and passion. A frown formed on her forehead indicating confusion when shiv didn't say a word. Shiv slowly locked the door and starting walking towards her. Her breath caught in her throat as he got closer and closer.
Gauri thinking: 'is that anger I see in his eyes?

Shiv, who was expressionless, slowly backed her to the wall. She tried to move passed him towards the right but his hand came up…blocking her path. She tried the left side but his other hand came up caging her in. he slowly started leaning his head closer to hers.

Gauri tightly closed her eyes, afraid of what was going to happen…then shiv finally spoke…
Shiv: "kya hua? Sharma gayi?" then his expression suddenly turned into hatred. "don't worry…I will never touch you. You know why? Because I hate you with everything I got. You ruined my life!" he hit his fist on the wall and gauri turned her head away from his in fear. Shiv violently took her chin in his hand and turned her face toward his.

Shiv: "look at me when I'm talking to you….i HATE you..u get that…I HATE you. U will regret marrying me. I am going to make your life hell. You are messing with shiv kapoor and shiv kapoor always gets want he wants. Just wait and watch…sweetheart."

Shiv moved back from her and left the room. Gauri slowly leaned back on the wall for support. The tears started to come faster and faster with each passing moment….

wat do you think guys? good? bad? horrible? suggestions r always welcome...jus pm me wit them n i'll see wat i can do.

awesome part 👏 👏
shiv is so mean to gauri 😭

shiv hates gauri just like in the serial 😭 😭 😭
gud start continue soon 👏

hey......plzz du continue.....its nice 2 hear that shiv doesnt like ipshita n Nikhila is gud......nnnnn yaaa theirs nooo kundli dosh............lol....wunderful starting plzzzzz update fast...cant wait ny longer.... 😳

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Originally posted by: kaira

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nice ff 👏 👏 especially his suhaag raat 😆 update soon 😉

aww thanx guys...i was so scared tat no1 was gonna like it.btw plse excuse my hindi....its not my first language. yea shiv is really mean to her, but seeing him fall for gauri will be all the mor satisfying. 😉

this is PART TWO

Shiv is driving to the bar for a few drinks.

He's thinking: 'what hell is going on. I can't believe I'm married to that gauri….oh how she is gonna regret marrying me.' His eyes flared up in anger just thinking about her. He enters the parkinglot and dangerously swerves his car in a parking spot. He walks into the bar and spots his friend machan. Shiv sits next to him and tells the bartender to get him a whiskey on the rocks.

Machan: whats up man? Enjoying life?
Shiv: kya kaak enjoy kar raha hoon….uss gauri ne to meri zindigi barbaad kardi.
Machan: I still can't believe you married her….i always thought you would marry a sexy girl, but you ended up with a girl who reminds me of art films. Aacha ek baat baata….tum dono kya ek hi bed pe so ge….bechari gauri…usse kya paata ke humare shiv kapoor bed par ladkiyo ke saath kya kya karta hai.

Machans laughs when shiv playfully punches his arm.
Machan: ok ok I'm sorry, ab yeh baata ke tu gauri ke saath kya karne waala hai.
Shiv: usse to mein itni duk doonga ke woh khud mujhe chor kar chali jaye gi. Woh nahi jaanthi ke mein kaun hoon.
Shiv looks at Machan and gives him an evil smirk.

Back at the kapoor mansion in shiv and gauri's room.

Gauri is still crying when she hears a knock on the door. She quickly wipes her tears and goes and opens the door. It is none other than ippishita.

Ippi: hi gauri I just came to check if you are comfortable.
Gauri smiles: I'm fine thanks, just a little tired.
Ippi notices that gauri's eyes are red from crying.
Ippi: I can tell how fine you are….what did shiv do?
Gauri: woh…kuch nahi..i'm just….i'm just missing home.
Ippi walks in the room and makes gauri sit down.

Ippi: dekho gauri….i know on what conditions you and shiv got married. I also know shiv very well since I'm his childhood friend. But let me tell you something….shiv is a very stubborn man….he may seem rude on top but he is a nice guy at heart. You need to have patience with him and sooner or later he'll accept you. Plus I am always here to help you.

Gauri smiles: I have a feeling that we'll be great friends….tum bohut achi ho.
Ippi: who to mein hoon. (They both laugh.) ok go to sleep now and I'll see you tomorrow. Good night.
Ippishita leaves the room thinking:'mujhe iss bare mein shiv's se baat karni hogi'

Shiv was driving back home when a thought suddenly came to his mind: 'how am I going to sleep in the same bed as gauri?' that thought made him very uncomfortable as he entered his room. To his surprise he didn't see gauri sleeping on his bed, a look of confusion appeared on his handsome face. He walked further in to the room when he spotted her sleeping on the floor. Without realizing it shiv's eyes softened at the sight. But that look disappeared just as suddenly as it had appeared. He quickly changed into his night clothes and went to bed planning on how to get gauri out of his room, this house, and his life.

hope u enjoyed...again suggestions r always welcome. 😊