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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: JCluvs srk

hey guys i'm soooooooo sorry i havnt been able 2 update.........my midterms r this week n i'm just not getting the time. plse pray for me tat i pass all my midterms with good grades n i promise that the next update will be one that you'll never forget.

hey wish u best of luck 4 ur exams!!👍🏼

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Posted: 18 years ago
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man you guys are too kind to me.....i never thought in my wildest dreams that i wood get such great feedback.....thankyou soo much! i luv you all

recap: shiv lures gauri to a house and she sees shashank

PART 7

gauri whispered: shahshank.....
shashank gave an evil smile : hi gauri....kaisi ho
gauri: beech shaadi mein tumne mujhe chor diya tha....mein kaisi ho sakti hoon shahshank?
shahshank: oh common gauri....don't tell me you are still sour over that incident.
gauri: sour?....you broke my heart! i think i'm feeling a little more than sour...

gauri didnt realize that shiv was still on the cell phone line she forgot to cut off when
she saw shahshank. shiv was hearing their whole conversation.

shahshank started walking closer to gauri
gauri: stop right there shashank
shahshank: relax darling, i just want a closer look at you.....wow gauri....you look good.
gauri felt shahshank's lustfilled eyes look at her from top to bottom. she felt disgusted
just by being in the same room as him.

gauri: why did you leave shahshank....i thought you were happy?
her eyes started to fill with tears.
shahshank: oh please gauri.....i was never serious about you....i found you beautiful....
but i never wanted to marry you. mein tumhe sirf hasil karna chata tha.

shiv stopped the car when he heard this. shiv thinking: 'is he serious?!'

gauri felt a sharp pain in her heart when she heard shahshank.
gauri: i'm seeing what kind of a person you are for the first time....i don't know how i
loved you so much....
shahshank: no hard feelings gauri....look on the bright side...it turned out better for
you didnt it? you married the famous shiv kapoor..and became very very rich.
gauri: shiv's life is destroyed because you ran away...do you have any idea how hard this
marriage has been on him?

shiv heard this and his eyes softened.He felt touched that gauri would overlook her pain
and worry about him.

shahshank: oooo didn't know you cared for shiv so much....anyways theres a reason why
i'm here.
he walks closer to gauri and trails a finger over her cheek.

gauri slaps his hand away: don't you dare touch me!
shahshank's eyes suddenly flares up in anger and he grabs both of gauri's shoulders.
shahshank: darling...i've wanted to touch you since the first day i laid eyes on you....
but your such a boring typicle indian girl that you wanted to get married first.

gauri started to struggle: shahshank mujhe chodo!

shiv couldn't take it anymore. He swerved his car and made a U-turn, driving as fast as he
could back to the house. His jaw clenched tight at the thought of shahshank touching gauri.

shahshank slaps gauri and she falls to the ground, hurting her knee.
she cries out in pain and looks up at shahshank.
shahshank: i'll have you today gauri...no one can stop me from having you.
he grabbed her ankle when she tried to crawl away.
gauri screamed: SHAHSHANK LET GO OF ME! someone help me!

shahshank gets ontop of her and locks both her hands above her head. she struggles even
harder, but he just to strong for her.

shahshank: shouting isn't gonna help darling.....there is no one here but you and me.
gauri starts crying when she feels shahshanks hand tear the shoulder of her blouse.
gauri: shahshank chodo mujhe!
shahshank: shut up!
he hits her. gauri feels his fingers digging into her skin.....leaving scratch marks.

gauri kept on struggling while only wishing for shiv to somehow come and save her.....

sorry for the long delay....but my mid-terms are over! now hopefully i did good on them. well....i was really depressed writing this part because i kept on thinking about 2days episode.....man that last scene with gauri dying n shiv crying really broke me heart. oh well....hope you enjoyed this update!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#63
thanks for the update.....hate shashank 😡 😡 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
#64
gr8 update ,pls send shiv to help her
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Posted: 18 years ago
#65
wow that was a great update...cont soon... 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#66
ohh god !! shashank is a real jerk !!c'mon shiv come fast n save ur gauri 😉 😉 😉 !!!great part 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#67
nw make shiv beat up shshank till he turn blue
continue sooooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#68
plzz let Shiv beat shashank black and blue
good update
continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh grt there is goin to be loads of action the next time......
continue soon.....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh god pls let shiv get there in time!!! 😕

shiv should squish shashank like a bug! not to c another day!!!

what woz shiv thinking!! i guess he weren't doing too much of that when this plan of his came into effect.

pls continue soon
gr8 ff 👏

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