ff: pyar to hona hi tha (NOTE! pg78) - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
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really really gud ,the way ipshita fight, was needed ,...U really did a very gud job... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was really gud 👏 ................but why did shiv gave a wicked smile??? i doubt he is planning something against gauri 😭
continue soon 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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very good update, so Ippy is actually fighting with shiv for gauri's sake.....
continue soon sweety......
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omgis he gonna do something mean nooooooooooooooooo 😡 . but good story line 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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waiting for the next episode please update it soon please! please !😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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shiv is upto something wicked 😡
but nice ff 👏 👏 👏 and cont. soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh no ,the wicked shiv is planning again , uummmm what is he up to now, i wonder. daal may kush kala hai. 😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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eagerly waiting for next part please post it soon 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg! u guys hav givin me sooo much luv.... 😃 😃
thank you sooooo much. i 'll post in like 1/2 an hour.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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here you go! i feel like this part is boring....but it was neccessary to build up to the next part.

PART 5

Gauri put the album back in her closet and turned around to see shiv standing at the door smirking at her. Shiv slowly walked towards her and stopped in front of her.
Shiv: that was shashank's picture wasn't it?
Gauri: woh…actually that was an old album of mine…I didn't even know I had it until now.
Shiv: but was that shashank's picture you were looking at?
Gauri: 'very quietly she said' shashank doesn't mean anything to me anymore.
Shiv: thinking to himself 'sure he doesn't' n gave an evil grin
Gauri: did you say something?
Shiv: no…no I didn't
Shiv then changed and walked out of the room without saying another word to gauri.
Gauri: ajeeb insaan hai.

Shiv was in a club partying with some friends when a random girl starts dancing with him. she started grinding in back of him when he soon felt a tap on his shoulder. He slowly turns around to see a guy with a very pissed off expression.
Guy: how dare you dance with my girlfriend.
Shiv takes off his sunglasses and raises an eyebrow at him.
Shiv: excuse me dude….she was dancing with me…but I don't blame her…'he said with an arrogant smile'
The guy started to throw a punch at shiv when shiv grabbed his hand. Then shiv looked behind the guy and saw a few of the guy's friends walk towards them.
Shiv looking surprised said: aww man 5 guys against me?….'then he gave a grin'…. even better.
Then a fight broke out in the club.

2 am at night.

Gauri was getting ready to go 2 bed when she heard the bedroom door open and shiv walk in. she took one glance at him and she ran to him.
Gauri: are you ok….what happened?
Before she realized what she was doing gauri placed both her hands on his face and took a close look at shiv. She saw that he wasn't bleeding that bad because only his lip was cut and his knuckles were bloody.
Shiv took her hands by the wrist and jerked away saying : chill out….the other guys look much worse than I do.
Gauri: please sit down…I'll get the first aid kit.
Shiv: there's no need for that.
But before he could say that gauri already went inside the bathroom to get the first aid kit. Few seconds later she came back out and started to clean his knuckles. But shiv being shiv wasn't cooperating.
Gauri: hold still
Shiv started to jerk his hand away: lay off gauri
But before he could remove his hand she put the alcohol rub on his scratched knuckles.
Shiv: OUCH! That hurt!
Gauri: well if you would hold still then it wouldn't hurt as much!
Shiv raised his eyebrows in shock at gauri's outburst.
Gauri sighs: now hold still 'and she started to clean his knuckles and then pressed a cotton ball to his lip'
Gauri felt shiv's gaze and she couldn't help but blush. Gauri thinking: 'why is he staring at me….God make him stop'
Its like his eyes can read her sadness, her thoughts, her soul….. Shiv himself was confused at her gentleness.
Shiv thinking: 'yeh ladki pagal to nahi hai? Why is she being nice to me?' A gust of wind blew into the room and a strand of gauri's hair fell over her right eye. Before she can remove it she felt shiv's finger come up and tuck the strand of hair behind her ear. Her eyes met his and she couldn't help but get lost in them.
Gauri thinking 'why does my heart race whenever I'm near him?'
Shiv thinking 'why did I just do that? Shiv you hate her remember. But God look at the sadness in her eyes…'

the rare moment was broken by the ring of shiv's phone. Gauri stood up from her sitting position in front of shiv and went back to the bathroom to put the first aid kit away.
The guy on the phone with shiv: yea shiv I got your message.
Shiv gave his wicked smile when he realized who it was: shashank….i'm glad you called back.


hope u liked it.....the credit for the club fight scene goes to the writer of KAA.....i'm sure you all figured out tat it was shiv's intro scene on the show....i luvd it so i borrowed it. 😊

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