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Posted: 18 years ago
abhimanyu is bad 😡 god face like an angel but devil in diguise, but what is he looking for in daksh and shylas room 😕
btw wonderful ff plz updte soon
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Edited by iqbal-pallavi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow!!

abhimanyu is bad...!! is he and josh together in this!!

loved it.. please do continue!!

👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
oh no
abhimanyu is bad 😡 . I wonder wat he will do 😕 Plz. cont it was nice.

P.S. u r an excellent FF writer
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ash9

thts call shooooooooort
thts the most shortest update u hv ever written i think

😆
yeah..kat might kill me...thts for later

nw im happy
abhi is BAD 🥳 🥳
tht mean tht kid belong to gauir n shiv for sure 😉
👏
my wish is coming true

i suppose kuku u r very busy..i cn c tht with the length of your update...
update whn u cn
😃


😆u will never give up!!!!!Y can't Abhi be a baddie and be karthi's dad???😉
So sorry!!!u know once I put up the index and start writting I get this feeling I wrote lots thts y😳!!!Will try to make longer updates!!!!

Originally posted by: fida-cute

well who is he reveal fast 😳 is he abhimanyu 😕nooooooooooooooooo 😭 😭 mayabecame good 😃 something fishy 😉


yup it is Abhimanyu!!!he he he y r u ppl not believing whtever I write in my fanfic😭??I told u all that karthi is Abhi'a son but no1 believes me!!!Now I am saying Maya is good and u r not believeing me😭😭😭!!!

Originally posted by: Catwoman

OYE she asked me the names for lord Shivji kids i told her!!...😳

My kids have cute names not mispelt name like someone i know who has 19 or more letter when filling out a form!!😆😆

Right kuku what happened to the long updates!! dreaming about robbies or Samar this time??? !!😳😳....

OK i said we have a twist!! good!! please continue!😉


19😲!!!is tht a name or an address???Karthikeya is shorter😳!!!
Like Samar said, Robbie and Samar playing Kabadi inside my head, and Jatin is the referee there with IQ, Manoj, Shabbir, Gaurav and Rajeev as spectators and they keep shouting it is distracting me!!!


thank you😛

Originally posted by: iqbal-pallavi

abhimanyu is bad 😡 god face like an angel but devil in diguise, but what is he looking for in daksh and shylas room 😕
btw wonderful ff plz updte soon
😊


Yeah even I like Abhmianyu😳!!!!Hope he remains good!!!1 Thank you so much😛

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

wow!!

abhimanyu is bad...!! is he and josh together in this!!

loved it.. please do continue!!

👏


Maybe I shud get them together😈!!!!
Thank you so much😛

Originally posted by: natasha kumar

oh no
abhimanyu is bad 😡 . I wonder wat he will do 😕 Plz. cont it was nice.

P.S. u r an excellent FF writer


thank you so much😛!!!!will try to update soon

kuku

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Posted: 18 years ago
Everyone please congrate KUKU aka ShivGauri as she has been nominated for her FF Saving Grace!! 👏 ..... in the fan fiction section of IF

Keep up the good work Kuku 😃

Love Kat!! 😉

btw i don't think she has read the FF sticky topic on the Kaa Forum....
Edited by Catwoman - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
congratulations kuku, i love that ff, its such a cute story and has an amazin name too 👏
xxxx
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 1 on Page 1
Part 2 on Page 3
Part 3 on Page 6
Part 4 on Page 8
Part 5 on Page 9
Part 6 on Page 12
Part 7 on Page 14
Part 8 on Page 17
Part 9 on Page 18
Part 10 on Page 19
Part 11 on Page 21
Part 12 on Page 22
Part 13 on Page 24
Part 14 on Page 25
Part 15 on Page 26
Part 16 on Page 27
Part 17 on Page 28
Part 18 on Page 29
Part 19 on Page 30
Part 20 on Page 31
Part 21 on Page 33
Part 22 on Page 34
Part 23 on Page 35
Part 24 on Page 36
Part 25 on Page 37
Part 26 on Page 39
Part 27 on Page 40
Part 28 on Page 41
Part 29 on Page 42
Part 30 on Page 44

ShivGauri Part 31

Abhimanyu is sitting in his room and thinking.
Abhimanyu: I didn't find anything here, I think now I shud try looking in the office. But for that I will have to get into the office... but how???

Dinning room

Everyone were sitting and eating breakfast,when Abhimanyu comes there.
Dadiji: Come beta. Have breakfast.
Abhimanyu: No dadi, I have to go now.
Shiv: Where are you going Abhi?
Abhimanyu; I have a job interview.
Shiv gets up from the table and goes towards him: What do u mean job interview?
Abhimanyu: I need job ri8? For that I need to give an interview.
Shiv: If u wanted a job, u cud have told me.
Abhimanyu: No Shiv, u have done lots for me already not anymore.
Shiv: It is nothing compared to what u have given us..... Pls Abhi.
Abhimanyu: Okay.
Shiv smiles.
Gauri: Now both of u come and eat.
Abhimanyu: Actually u guys eat, I am leaving.
Gauri firmly: No first eat.
Abhimanyu: No Gauri, I am already late
Gauri: Its okay. Even if u r late, ur boss won't say anything, (She smiles)I am ur boss's boss, so juts tell him I didn;t let u go!!!
Shiv smiles: Whatever the boss says. Come Abhi.
Abhimanyu quietly to Shiv: U r so lucky that u got Gauri as ur wife.
Shiv smiles: Thanx.
After sometime, everyone leaves the table except for Shiv who was still eating, while Gauri was sitting there with Karthi.
Gauri: Shiv, eat fast!!!
Shiv making puppy faces: Do I have to go for work?
Gauri smiles: YES!!!
Shiv makes sad face: U don't love me like the way u used to.
Gauri: Right I don't love u!!
Shiv: I knew it!!!I know only Karthi loves me!!!
Shiv picks up Karthi and starts playing with him.
Gauri; Shiv, u r getting late.
Shiv irritated; Alrite!!!I am leaving.
Shiv gets up and kisses Karthi and gives him back to Gauri, and without saying anything to Gauri he turns to leave, suddenly Gauri pulls on his tie and pull him closer.
Gauri: Aren't u forgetting something husband?
Shiv arrogantly: What?
Gauri smiles: My kiss,
Shiv: U don't love me anymore ri8??So y shud I kiss u.
Gauri: Yeah true!!!But u still love me ri8???So my kiss?
Shiv:Hmmmmmmmm...alrite but tell me u love me!!!
Gauri smiles: I love u!!
Shiv: I love u too!!!
Shiv kisses her and starts to leave.
Gauri: Come back early.
Shiv:Why?
Gauri gives him a look which says he is impossible: Pata nahi, aaj kal iska dimag kaha rahtha hai.
Shiv comes closer: Mere biwi aur mere betein par.
Gauri smiles.
Shiv: So why early?
Gauri: Today is valentines day.
Shiv: And I gave u ur gift in the morning.
Gauri: I know!!! Did u forget???Today dada and Ipshitha are coming back and we are having a party for welcoming them and also a valentines party.
Shiv: Oh!!!I forgot!!! Sorry!!(Makes puppy) Its just that I have been busy with this contract all these day.
Gauri: I know, love!!!
Shiv: Okay bye!!!
Gauri: Bye!!
Shiv starts walking and suddenly turns back.
Shiv: Do u think Ipshitha will have mood swings like u did when u were pregnant?(yeah ppl she is pregnant!!!But I didn't tell u guys 'coz I wanted to surprise u all😉😆)
Gauri starts laughing: Yeah I guess!!!
Shiv mutters: God save us men!!!!

Evening at the party.

ShivGauri and Vivan were standing together, and welcoming all when Ipshitha and Anupam comes. Gauri goes and hugs a very pregnant Ipshitha and Anupam hugs Shiv.
Shiv: Does she have any mood swings??
Anupam: Seriosuly Shiv when I was making fun of u and Gauri 'coz of her mood swings I didn't know God was sitting up there and laughing at me saying lets see wht u do when it is ur turn!!!
Shiv starts grinning: As bad as Gauri?(Suddenly Gauri looks at Shiv) I meant as cute as Gauri?
Anupam looking all helpless and his back turned towards Gauri and Ipshitha who were listening to their conversation: She is worser than Gauri!!!
Ipshtiha: Really?
Anupam turns back and sees Ipshitha: I meant cuter than Gauri!!!!
Ipshitha pissed: U will never change!!!
Saying that Ipshtiha walks off and Anupam runs behind saying sorry. ShivGauri starts laughing, and Vivan also starts laughing seeing this. Shiv to Vivan.
Shiv: Next is u in line!!!
Vivan immediately stops laughing.

Suddenly Shiv sees Alpana Sehgal(remember Shilpa Agnihothri??she was there couple of parts be4.) comes there.
Alpana: Hello Shiv, Hello Gauri.
ShivGauri; Hello Aunt!!!
Alpna: U haven't met my husband ri8?
Shiv: No aunt.
She turns and a man with a girl enters.
Alpana: There he is.
(they are Sandeep Baswana,Sahil from KSBKBT and Pallavi Kulkarni,Vadehi from Vadehi)
Alpana: This is my husband Arjun Sehgal, and Pallavi my daughter.
ShivGauri: Hello.
Shiv: u know, I thought AS industries stands for Alpana Sehgal but now ....(and he grins)
Pallavi: No, it is actually my fiance's company.
Alpana immediately: Yeah yeah her fiance, he is in US. So we r just managing his busines till he can take over.
Pallavi suddenly starts tensing up: Yeah thats right
Suddenly Vivan comes there.
Vivan: Bhai look at that.
ShivGauri turns and sees Ipshitha dancing and Anupam trying to make her stop saying she should be resting now,and they start laughing. Meanwhile Alpana turns and Arjun looks at Pallavi and glares at her and she says a silent sorry.
Pallavi:Actually I have to go now.
Gauri: But y so suddenly?
Pallavi; I have some urgent work...sorry.
Gauri: Then have dinner and leave.
Pallavi: No I have to go now...sorry...bye
Saying that she leaves.

Pallavi walks into the hotel, and she is taken to the restaurant,and she walks in and sees it decorated, and she walks in when suddenly someone closes her eyes from behind.
Whispers: Happy Valentines day love!!!
Pallavi turns and looks at him and then hugs him: Happy Valentines day Abhi!!!
Abhimanyu: Heres ur gift.
Pallavi opens the gift and sees a beautiful diamond necklace.
Pallavi: Thanx Abhi!!!
Abhimanyu very seriously: Now what did u tell Shiv??? That AS is ur fiancee's company?
Pallavi pulls her ears:Sorry!!
Abhimanyu: Hmmm its okay.... but be careful now onwards. If Shiv starts getting suspicious, then....
Pallavi: I know... I will be careful from now onwards..... By the way did u find.....
Abhimanyu disappointed; No.... But I have got into his office... I am sure I will get it from there.

Pls comment guys, I tried to make longer update!!!Sorry if it was boring

-kuku




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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Catwoman

Everyone please congrate KUKU aka ShivGauri as she has been nominated for her FF Saving Grace!! 👏 ..... in the fan fiction section of IF

Keep up the good work Kuku 😃

Love Kat!! 😉

btw i don't think she has read the FF sticky topic on the Kaa Forum....


thank you so much kat😳!!!
Just checked it out and congrats to u too!!!U got like some 5 million nominnations😆!!!!

Originally posted by: Raihena

congratulations kuku, i love that ff, its such a cute story and has an amazin name too 👏
xxxx


Thank you so much😳

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: shivgauri




19😲!!!is tht a name or an address???Karthikeya is shorter😳!!! kuku....u too😡 it is soo nt funny when u hv 34 characters in your name.. n no karthikeya is nt short..thts also very very long.... my kids going to hv max 5 letters in their name....😉
make sure u name your kids properly if nt at the end they'll come after u



i like wht he said to vivan..poor guy...nw he is never going to go anywhere near his wife😆😆😆
hw i wish to c anipum n ipshita like this.... but in real ipshita tried to kill him😭

nw frm where did u find these 3???😡 more trouble on the way
c he got a fiancee...nt a wife😛 tht mean tht kid belong to shiv n gauri for sure😉 u better do tht......
Edited by ash9 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
great update Kuku and congratulations.

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