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Posted: 18 years ago
here we go again, another twist 😉
can't wait for you to solve the mystery, pls. update soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg...kill tht man soooooooon 😡
nw i hv never seen kaya in action.... n palak...
did they jsu take over gauri's detective agency??? 😆 😆 😆

n no if my husband plan to name his kid Karthikeya..i will divoce him...jst give im divoce pprs like in KAA...he will come bck to me crying.... so no prob 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Catwoman

Oh no...kuku shiv is going to loose the project!!...


looks like he is gonna loose his project...lets see wht happens???

Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

oh man!!!!!
one problem after another.....


yeah i know.... and very soon i will run out of problems😳

Originally posted by: sum2005

👏 never ending problems like in kaa.


in this it will end soon, as i am running out of problems😳

Originally posted by: Rock_Star

oh no i hope palak and kaya do something before its too late...excellent part 👏 👏


thank you so much!!!yeah lets see wht they do!!!

Originally posted by: tweetylicious

darn another problem, that pallavi and abhi... 😡


will try to solve it soon😃

Originally posted by: Jenna Dutt

here we go again, another twist 😉
can't wait for you to solve the mystery, pls. update soon.


he he he will try to solve it soon..... maybe i will reveal something in the next part... i don;t know😕.... will try to update soon

Originally posted by: ash9

omg...kill tht man soooooooon 😡
nw i hv never seen kaya in action.... n palak...
did they jsu take over gauri's detective agency??? 😆 😆 😆

n no if my husband plan to name his kid Karthikeya..i will divoce him...jst give im divoce pprs like in KAA...he will come bck to me crying.... so no prob 😆


how can I kill off Shabhir??he was so hot in KTH as Rishi😳!!!used to love him in it😳!!!!
😆yeah, after the pregnancy and delivery Gauri has taken a back seat😆
wht if he refuse to divorce u and is determined to name the baby Karthikeya???lets make it more bigger, add a n to it and an extra two 'a's.
KAARTHIKEYAAN

kuku😃


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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 3 on Page 6
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Part 5 on Page 9
Part 6 on Page 12
Part 7 on Page 14
Part 8 on Page 17
Part 9 on Page 18
Part 10 on Page 19
Part 11 on Page 21
Part 12 on Page 22
Part 13 on Page 24
Part 14 on Page 25
Part 15 on Page 26
Part 16 on Page 27
Part 17 on Page 28
Part 18 on Page 29
Part 19 on Page 30
Part 20 on Page 31
Part 21 on Page 33
Part 22 on Page 34
Part 23 on Page 35
Part 24 on Page 36
Part 25 on Page 37
Part 26 on Page 39
Part 27 on Page 40
Part 28 on Page 41
Part 29 on Page 42
Part 30 on Page 44
Part 31 on Page 45
Part 32 on Page 46

ShivGauri Part 33


Kapoor Mansion

ShivGauri walks in, and Anupam, Ipshitha, Kaya and Palak were sitting there.
Shiv: Hey everyone.
Anupam immediately gets up.
Anupam: Thank God u r here.
Shiv: Why r u all tensed?
Anupam: Where were u?? We have been trying to reach u for so long.
Shiv: We were at the hospital, and I had switched off my cell. What is it?
Gauri: What happened?IS every thing okay?
Anupam: No, everything is ruined Shiv.
ShivGauri starts getting tensed.
Shiv: What happened?
Anupam: Abhimanyu....
Shiv: What happened to him?
Anupam: He is Alpana Sehgal's son.
Shiv:What??That is not possible. U might be mistaken.
Anupam: No Palak and Kaya saw him with Pallavi.
Anupam proceeds to tell Shiv everything.
ShivGauri were just too shocked to react.
Anupam: U told me tht u were gonna show Abhimanyu the project ri8, to get his opinion??Did u do?
Shiv's face goes all pale: Yeah I did.
Anupam: Shit!!!! I called up ur office, to ask them not to submit the proposal, but ur manager told me tht he submitted it.
Shiv justs sits down, Gauri sits next to him and he looks at Gauri.
Shiv: I trusted him. I started considering him as my brother. Why did he do this to me?
Suddenly Gauri bursts out crying, everyone looks at her.
Gauri: This is all my fault. I shudn't have switched off ur phone, then at least we cud have...
Shiv stops Gauri: No, Gauri, this is not ur fault. This was meant to happen.
Shiv just hugs Gauri and tries to console her.
Ipshitha: U r forgetting something even more important.
ShivGauri looks up.
Anupam: What?
Ipshitha: Karthi........... if Abhimanyu was not married, then Karthi might not be his son. Then who is Karthi's father??
Shiv looks at Gauri, and sees her holding Karthi more tightly.
Gauri: He is my son. I won't give him to anyone else.
Shiv: Yes, Karthi is our son and we won't give him to anyone else.
After some time.
Shiv gets a call and it is Abhimanyu.
Abhimanyu: Shiv, where r u??I need to talk to u.
Shiv: Come home.
Abhimanyu: Alrite.
Shiv looks at Gauri: Call Alpana Sehgal and invite her home.

Much later, Abhimanyu walks in, and he sees everyone sitting there along with Alpana Sehgal.
Abhimanyu(tensed) : Shiv, I need to talk to u. Its really urgent.
Shiv: What is it tht u want to talk abt?
Abhimanyu: It is really personal.
Shiv: Whtever it is, u can tell me in front of my family.
Abhimanyu starts getting confused: But Shiv...
Shiv cuts him off: Oh u have problem with Alpana Sehgal...but tht shudn't be a problem since she is YOUR MOTHER!!!!
Abhimanyu and Alpana starts getting tensed.
Abhimanyu: Shiv, listen to me first.
Shiv angry:I don't want to hear anything. Why did u do this to me? I trusted u so much!!!
Abhimanyu: Shiv, pls
Shiv pulls on Abhimanyu's collar: Agar mein apne ankhoin se woh sab dekh thi, tab bhi mein vishwas nahi kar patha, kyun ki mein tum par apne ankhon se zyada vishwas karthi hoon.
Suddenly, Abhimanyu's eyes starts filling with tears.
Abhimayu:Shiv, pls mere baath tho sunno.
Shiv: KUCH NAHI SUNNA HAI MUJHE!!!!
Shiv starts hitting Abhimanyu, but Abhimanyu doesn't do anything.
Alpna:Shiv, chodo usse.
Gauri: Shiv, pls leave him
Everyone tries to pull Shiv away, but Shiv continues to hit him.
Suddenly Alpana, comes and stands in front of Shiv.
Alpana: Stop it Shiv!!!YEH TUMHARA BEDA BHAI HAI!!!
Shiv suddenly stops and everyone looks at each other in shock.
Shiv: No, this is not true!!!
Alpana: Yeh such hai!!! Abhimanyu is Mahen and my son.
Mahen looks at her shock.
Abhimanyu: Mom, pls chup rahi ye.
Shiv: U r lying.
Abhimanyu: No this is true!!! Ur dad cheated my mother!!!
Shiv in shock: No my dad wud never do that!!! (Shiv goes to Mahen) Dad y r u silent, say something.
Abhimanyu: What will he say? Usne mere mom ke saath pyar ke joote natak kar raha tha.
Shiv: Dad, pls say something!!!
Nikhila: Woh kya kahein.......us waqt Mahen ke pyar mein na Alpana ko barosa tha, nahe uske sachayi par!!! Alpana ko Mahen ke pyar se zyada Maya ke joot par vishwas tha.
Shiv: Mom???
Nikhila: yeh sach hai, Mahen aur Alpana ek doosre ko bohut pyar kartha tha, lekin such mano na Mahen, na mein Abhimanyu ke bare mein kuch nahi jantha tha.
Maya: Bhabhi such kehra hi hai.... meine joot...
Abhimanyu: Bas!!! Ab koi kuch nahi kahe ga!!! Meine sachayi jaanthi hoon, aur woh yeh hai ki tum logone mere maa ko dokha diya!!! Aur mein tum sab ko barbad karoongi!!!
Shiv: Tumne apne badle keliye yeh sab kiya??? Tumne ek chote se bache ki zindagi ke saath keli???
Abhimanyu: Haan!!! Tum logon ki barbadi keliye mein kuch bhi kardetha.
Shiv: Ab tum kuch nahi karoongi. Dada
Anupam walks in with police.
Anupam: Yeh hai inspector.
Inspector: U r under arrest.
Inspector takes Abhimanyu and Alpana.

I know it is a very confusing update.Will try to clear it in the next part!!! Sorry if it was boring. Pls comment guys.

-kuku


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Posted: 18 years ago
hmmm..... kahani main naya twist.....

nice.....wats happenin next?????

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Posted: 18 years ago
KUKU ....what a drama 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
WOW! now another mystery around the baby Shiv-Gauri adopted 😉
Keep it up darling, jhatke pe jhatka. 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
ahhh...i cant wait, plz update soon... 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
great part!!!
continue soon plz!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: shivgauri


wht if he refuse to divorce u and is determined to name the baby Karthikeya???lets make it more bigger, add a n to it and an extra two 'a's.
KAARTHIKEYAAN



well kuku..nw u knw who is nt going to get the invitation card for my wedding😛
im soo nt going to introduce u to my hubby...😉😛😛

thts his bade bhai yaar..leave him alone...but u forgot to talk abt 1 issue
abt Karthikeya????? he is suppose to confess tht he stole their baby...u forgot tht😕 hw could u??😛

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