ShivGauri(Fanfic) End updated on Pg 51 - Page 28

i wonder if they will adopt him 😊 , that was a nice update 😳 . Plz cont soon

great part, now shiv and gauri can have a child that they can call their own, i mean she fed him and so she is already like a mother to the baby 😃 i loved it plz update soon, im waiting to see if they say yes or not 😳

Originally posted by: Jenna Dutt

great update Kuku, it was no nice of Abhimanyu to ask Shiv-Gauri to adopt his child, pls. continue soon.

Thank you so much😃!!!u will find out the reason in my next part!!!will try to update soon

Originally posted by: ash9

kuku..y cnt u say its their own son.....
hospital made a mistake 😃

😆😆😆U r still adamant on the baby being their son huh???Maybe it is theirs only or maybe it is Abhimanyu's

Originally posted by: gujibabe

great part!!!
continue soon plz!!!

thank you so much😃....will try to update it soon

Originally posted by: Catwoman

great part!! 👏 👏 ...it that there son?

Kat when did u start reading my fanfic??didn't know u used to read it!!!
Well maybe or maybe not!!!thts all I will say!!!😳

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

wow!! brilliant story........ i loved how you brought them to adopt the son.

thank you so much😛

Originally posted by: natasha kumar

i wonder if they will adopt him 😊 , that was a nice update 😳 . Plz cont soon

u will find out soon!!!thank you so much!!!

Originally posted by: tweetylicious

great part, now shiv and gauri can have a child that they can call their own, i mean she fed him and so she is already like a mother to the baby 😃 i loved it plz update soon, im waiting to see if they say yes or not 😳

thank you so much!!! Yeah Gauri is already in love with the baby!!!will try to update soon!!!

Originally posted by: sadsunzarsum

omg

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Part 1 on Page 1
Part 2 on Page 3
Part 3 on Page 6
Part 4 on Page 8
Part 5 on Page 9
Part 6 on Page 12
Part 7 on Page 14
Part 8 on Page 17
Part 9 on Page 18
Part 10 on Page 19
Part 11 on Page 21
Part 12 on Page 22
Part 13 on Page 24
Part 14 on Page 25
Part 15 on Page 26
Part 16 on Page 27
Part 17 on Page 28
Part 18 on Page 29
Part 19 on Page 30
Part 20 on Page 31
Part 21 on Page 33
Part 22 on Page 34
Part 23 on Page 35
Part 24 on Page 36
Part 25 on Page 37
Part 26 on Page 39
Part 27 on Page 40
Part 28 on Page 41


ShivGauri looks at Abhimanyu in shock.
Shiv: What are you saying?
Abhimanyu: Just listen to what I have to say first.
When ShivGauri doesn't say anything, Abhimanyu continues.
Abhimanyu: I am dying.
ShivGauri: What?
Abhimanyu: Yes, I have blood cancer, and I am in my final stage. I didn't want to send my son to an orphanage, as I have no one else to look after him, so I was about to contact an adoption agency, when doctor told me about Gauri....(he looks at Gauri, and then stops wht he was about to say). And Gauri already considers him as her son, so if u ask me there is no better mother for my son other than her(Abhimanyu's eyes starts welling up with tears.) Pls think about it before giving me an answer.
Abhimanyu walks off and ShivGauri looks at each other.

Everyone had come, and ShivGauri had told them about Abhimanyu and everyone among themselves were talking about it.
Ayush: I don't think you shud adopt this baby, tomorrow if u have a baby then this baby might become a burden to u.
Shiv: U know there will be a lot of risk if Gauri gets pregnant, and I will never risk her life for a baby.
Mahen: Shiv what is it that u both want to do? Whatever u two decide we will be with u.
Shiv holds Gauri's hand and looks at everyone: We want to adopt this baby.
Mahen just smiles at them.

After sometime Abhimanyu comes there with the baby. Dadi comes and takes the baby,and everyone starts playing with the baby.
Dadi to Abhimanyu: Beta tumne iska naam kya rekha?
Abhimanyu: Mujhe koi acha naam nahi milra ha hai....agar aap log kuch acha naam jaate ho tho......
Dadi: Gauri... tum hain koi naam pasand hai?
Gauri looks at Shiv, then at Abhimanyu: Actually, I had decided on a name when I was pregnant.
Abhimanyu: What is it?
Gauri: If u don't mind can we call him Karthikeya?
Abhimanyu smiles and looks at Shiv: Karthikeya as in Shiv's son?
Everyone smiles and Gauri starts blushing.
Abhimanyu: I like that name, we will surely call him Karthikeya. y don't u call him first?
Dadi takes the baby to Gauri, and gives her the baby, Gauri looks at the baby, then at Shiv.
Gauri: Shiv....
Shiv goes near Gauri, and ShivGauri together calls the baby: "Karthikeya."

As if he liked the name, Karthikeya responds to it by making som sounds. Then everyone starts calling Karthikeya Karthikeya , till karthikeya had enough and started crying.

Later, Shiv and Nikhila were packing Gauri's bag, and Abhimanyu comes there.
Shiv: Hey Abhimanyu come in.
Abhimanyu: Shiv, I just wanted to know if it is okay with u if I come and visit karthikeya once in a while.
Shiv: What are u saying? He is your son, u don't need my permission to meet him.
Abhimanyu: Thank you...... its just that I wud miss him so much.
Suddenly Mahen comes from behind.
Mahen: Beta, tum humare ghar mein hi rehlo na? Iss tara tum bhi Rudra ke pass hongi.
Abhimanyu: Nahi sir, mein aap log par ek bog nahi bansakti.
Shiv: Tum humareliya kabhi bog nahi bansakti Abhimanyu.
Nikhila: Tumhare wajesai humare ghar mein kushiyaan lot rahi hai. Pls mana math karna.
Abhimanyu: Okay.

pls comment guys!!!I know my updates r becoming shorter than my index😳

Hi

It is short and sweet.

a very sweet part!!!
continue soon plz!!!

Karthikeya??????????????
any idea wht kind of tough time this kid going to have???
no 1 cn spell his name properly
even i cnt
so abhi is dying.. ru sure its his son?? cos it sum times nurse get mixed up 😃
btw kuku..i never give up 😛

wow!!

it was a sweet part.. no doubt....!!

but the name was whoa......!! i have never even heard it.. let alone spell it!!

lol!

please do continue!!

👏

"Kat when did u start reading my fanfic??didn't know u used to read it!!!
Well maybe or maybe not!!!thts all I will say!!! "

Kuku of course i read ur stuff time dear did not let me comment sorry!! 😳 😳 ....

Ok so u used the name then!! 😉 😉 ...brill update now i would like longer update please!! 😳

kat

Originally posted by: ash9

Karthikeya??????????????
any idea wht kind of tough time this kid going to have???
no 1 cn spell his name properly
even i cnt
so abhi is dying.. ru sure its his son?? cos it sum times nurse get mixed up 😃
btw kuku..i never give up 😛

u and the spelling of names!! 😆😆...

btw twist coming i can see it right kuku??