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Posted: 19 years ago
#31
I loved it! Please continue soon! Shiv is being such a sweety 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Sorry for the short updates ,Guy's. My mom didn't allow me to sit infornt of computer for many timez, The problem is that. She said, "If I use my these talents to study I'll be another socretis 😆 😆 "
But I'll try to continue soon.
Thanx
Raisa 😛 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 😆 wow i bet ur mom is right!!
u r an amazing writer!!!
but i hope that u will cont soon!!!! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
soooo cute
wht is shiv upto this time?? 😆
by the way your mom might b right
u do need to study
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Posted: 19 years ago
#35
shiv.. my hunnybunny.. he is soo cute! and soo sweeeeT!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
#36
cmon
its soo cut and good 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part:8
Gaury looked in shivs deep black eyes. She couldn't say anything. Shiv keep questioning her why she was removeing the mehendi.Atlast gaury spoke,"Jab mera pati hi mera nehi raha to mehendi laga ke kya karu?" Shiv looked pale at her ans. He suddenly realize that he was still holding Gaury's hand. He leave Gaury's hand & goes to bathroom for change. Gaury keep standing there some time & thought about her shadi. Then she move towards the mirror. She looked at her mehendi. It is quite dry now.So she tried to remove the flowers of her hair & her mangtika.But she couldn't do it as her mehendi was not compleately dry. But Gaury was trying her best to do it. Suddenly She realize a hand on her hand. She could easily recognize the hand cuz it is person whom she always desire to have closely in her life. She looked in the mirror & saw that it was him, Yes it was him. Shiv was standing there with no expression. When gaury stand Shiv procced to remove the clips of her hair. She stand there like a statue cuz whenever he touch her she can't see anything infornt of her.she feel a siver goes through her back bone which covered her whole body.She thought,"Is this is love? Which i feel for him.Which i feel for no one in my life execpt him." Shiv was also in thought,"Why i always want to be close with gaury.Why she attracts me so much. Kyun mai khudko ab rok nehi pata Gauri ke kareeb jane se? Kya isi ko pyer kehte hai?" Their thought break with a sound.So both looked back togather.

Edited by Jai & Bani - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
continue soon 😊
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who is there to disturb our love birds???? 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part:9
Gaury & shiv both looked back & saw that the window is creating the sound for the wind. So, Gauri goes to the window to close it.But a strong wind blows & gaury straightly goes to shiv cheast 😳 😳 😳 She tightly holds shiv & after some hesitation shiv also hold her back.They remembered all their sweet moments. As the wind was blowing strongly Gauri's hair covered shivs face. Shiv lost in the Gauri's hair.Suddenly gauri realize that she & shiv are hugging then shiv also realize it. So, Shiv leave her & stand back.Guari said,"I am sorry! Mai woh darwaja band kar rahi thi aur hawa......" Shiv said,"It's ok!" Then gaury was about to leave the place when shiv told her,"Chalo na kahi ghoom kar aate hai, Waise bhi yeh jaga nayi hai aur raat bhi kuch khaas nehi hua" Gauri's eye sparkel to hear this she quickly said ok. she told him that she will be ready in a moment. But shiv stop her & told,"Yehi pehenkar chalo, Tum isme achi lag rahi ho".So gaury goes to remove her mangtikka. Shiv then told her not to ramove it. So, they leave togather in their car.
Guy's give me some idea. Where should they go? Which place is suitable for the love birds???
Edited by Jai & Bani - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#40
awsomeeeeee

continue soon...

they can go to some ice-cream shop.. 😃 😳

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