FF : Pyer Ki Rahoon Main(pt17:pg21 ) - Page 2

Part 4:

They tried & tried but couldn't move a little bit from one another. At last gauri open her night gown & quickly rushed to the bathroom(don't think me wrong. she was wering a sleveless gown under it). Shiv was amazed to see gauri like this. He couldn't see her well but the memory of little time covered shivs mind & body profoundly. He came back to reality by hering the noise on the door. He opened it & saw it was Dadi. Dadi told to Shiv,"Kya kar rahe the tum log? Kitni deer se darwaje per khari hoon.'" Shiv riplied,"Woh mai................." Dadi suddenly looked in the bed & saw the night gown there. She smiled a little & said," Ab mai samjhi kyun tum log itni der laga rahe the." Then Gauri came back from the bathroom dressed in sari. She hear the words of Dadi & gets shy. Dadi saw her smiling & said," Agar tum logo ka pyear khatam ho gaya ho to niche cale? Wise bhi sub neche intezaar kar rahe hai naste per" As soon as dadi leave Gaury runs from the room leaving shiv in thought "what is happening to me? Am i falling in love with gaury?" Shiv thought & thought what happen in the morning & his thought break by Anipams voice. He said," Kya baat hai shiv as kya kuch jeada hi doz mil gaya biwi se, jo tum nastee pe bhi nahi ayee?" Shiv said, "what are u saying?" Anupam riplied,"Mai kaha kya bol raha hoon neche to sub ke zuban per yehi baat chal rahi hai." Shiv riplied," yeh Dadi bhi na! "

oh what a graet writer you are. Thanks a lot. I think Ekta should see this and combined your story then kaa will be much more interesting. please please continue.

a very cute ff 😳 😳 😳 ......continue ASAP 😊

wow excellent
im hooked 😆

thats FUNNY!! 😆
u r a gr8 writer! please cont. soon 👏

😆 😆 I liked it A LOT!! Please continue soon! I can't wait 👏

awesome work.. please do continue!!

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👏 AWESOME PART 👏
PLZZZZ CONT SOON

Thank's a lot, Jaans for ur supurb & encoureging comments.
Part 5:
Shiv joined everybody in breakfast. Gaury was also there she was standing in one corner & was serving the food. Suddenly Naina(The girl who's marriege will be held) said, Bhaiya aaj ap itni der se kyun uthe, aap to kabhi itni deer se nahi sote the. ye hamari bhabi ka asar hai ya kuch aur?" Shiv said, Naina tumhe yeh sab kisne kaha? Naina riplied, " Aaj subhe ki drama to subko pata hai. It is today's burnning news. Hai na Bhabi?" Shiv looked at gaury with a mix expression. Everybody bust out into laughter, So gaury rushed from that place. Shiv also quit his breakfast & said," Mujhe ek kaam yaad a geya mai abhi aata hoon." When shiv leave eveybody again laugh.
In the room gaury is stading alone by the window & thinking what happed today's morning. & what happened in the breakfast table. She felt very shy & smiled a little bit. then shiv entered the room & saw gaury smiling alone. he said," Gaury" Gaury looked back & controle herself. shiv said," Tum gaarwalo ke baaton ka bura maat man na. Woh sab aisehi ..................." Gaury said," Mai jaanti hoon ,shiv. Mujhe bilkul bura nahi laga." Shiv smiled at gaury & said, "Gaury tumhe neche mom bula rahi hai, Kuch kam hoga." Gaury said I am going. & gaury leave the place.

Everybody is busy in the arrangements of shadi. Today is mehendi. So, the whole house is beautifully decorated. The shadi songs are going on. There everywhere a festive look. Gaury is giving the final touches to all the unfinished work & shiv is also very busy with the ceatering work. suddenly Nikhila come & said to Gaury,"Arry tum abhi tak tyaar nahi huyi. Sub mehmaar atte hi hoge. Jao jao jaldi de tyaar ho jao." Gaury said," Barima, Woh mai bas yeh kaam........" Nikhila interupted,"nahi mai kuch sunna nahin chahti. Tum jao yeh kaar ke liye nokaar hai na." So, Gaury goes to upstair to get ready.

oh wow! how cute! shiv trying to explain to gauri.. that the family were just
joking! lol!

please do continue with longer parts!

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