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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sorry, Guy's for the front color 😭 . Relly sorry for that 😭 😭 😭 .
Part:11
The man also said," Mai uparwalose dua karta hoon ke woh aap logo ki jodi hamesha aisehi bana rakhe" Then Shiv & Gaury thanked the person & leave the place. They went to their car & shiv stared the car. In the car both where thinking about the words which the man said. Siddenly the rain stanted. It was very havy rain, Like cats & dogs rain. Shiv was driving his car slowly. Suddenly they reach in a crowded place. There was a big traffic jam. So, Shiv called a person & asked him what the problem was? The man said," Sir, Agge ek per gir gaya hai. To sare rord block kar di hai. Isiliye yeh jam hai or tej barish ke wajase yeh thik hone mai subah tak ka waqt lag jayega" So, Shiv decided to back the car. He was driving & said," Yahaan to puri raat nehi beth sakta. Koi cottege ya hotle mil jaye to raat kata sakti hooon" Gaury was quit all the time. Suddenly gaury spoke," Shiv dekho wohaan pe ek light jal rahi hai. Shayeed wohaan pe rehne kijaga mil jaye".
Sorry , Jaans!!! I've my exam today.Issiliye short update hope u don't mind. I'll continue soon.
Luv Raisa
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Posted: 18 years ago
#52
lol omg u incorporated both the beach and cottage lol U ROCK!! lol its okay u study! continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#53
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u r way too gooood!!!
i wonder what will happen next????? 😳

well good luck on ur exams !!!! πŸ˜ƒ
and please cont sooooooon πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago
#54
thanks for color change...u don't need to sorry....u r awsome........ πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part: 12
Shiv parked his car by the side of the road.But they didn't alighted from the car as they have no umbrella. Suddenly a mam knocked in the window. Shiv opened the window & asked the man if he can help them to pass a night. The man told shiv that there is a house near where they can pass the night but they have to walk a little. Shiv told the man that he have no umbrella. The man said that he can give him one umbrella as he have two. So, Shiv thanked him & tell gaury to get down. The man told them to come with him. The man was walking infront of them & they were walking slowly. Shiv told the man to walk slow. But as he was very old he didn't hear anything. He was walking very fast. Suddenly a strong wind came & the umbrella of Gaury & shiv's broke into pices. So They run fast & took shelter under a tree. Suddenly shiv looked at gaury & saw that she was complealy wet. Her sari was warping her whole body & as she was wearing a jorjet sari some parts of her body was being showed.when gaury realize that shiv was looking at her. She pull her pallu & try to wrap her body with it.but shiv couldn't controle himself to look at guri as she was looking very beautiful. A passion was working in his body. he came closer to gaury.....closer .....& closer to her. gauri took her step her back...he came more closer...she steped back...suddenly shiv catch her sholder....gaury close her eyes... shiv opens his coat & wraped it on gury's body. gaury opens her eyes & looked in shivs deep black eyes.... shiv told her,"I don't want that anyone should see u like this. afterwall You are my wife" My wife.... shiv's wife.... his wife.... these words sourrened gaury's ear. suddenly a man spoke & both looked back.
Edited by Jai & Bani - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part: 12
Shiv parked his car by the side of the road.But they didn't alighted from the car as they have no umbrella. Suddenly a mam knocked in the window. Shiv opened the window & asked the man if he can help them to pass a night. The man told shiv that there is a house near where they can pass the night but they have to walk a little. Shiv told the man that he have no umbrella. The man said that he can give him one umbrella as he have two. So, Shiv thanked him & tell gaury to get down. The man told them to come with him. The man was walking infront of them & they were walking slowly. Shiv told the man to walk slow. But as he was very old he didn't hear anything. He was walking very fast. Suddenly a strong wind came & the umbrella of Gaury & shiv's broke into pices. So They run fast & took shelter under a tree. Suddenly shiv looked at gaury & saw that she was complealy wet. Her sari was warping her whole body & as she was wearing a jorjet sari some parts of her body was being showed.when gaury realize that shiv was looking at her. She pull her pallu & try to wrap her body with it.but shiv couldn't controle himself to look at guri as she was looking very beautiful. A passion was working in his body. he came closer to gaury.....closer .....& closer to her. gauri took her step her back...he came more closer...she steped back...suddenly shiv catch her sholder....gaury close her eyes... shiv opens his coat & wraped it on gury's body. gaury opens her eyes & looked in shivs b=deep black eyes.... shiv told her,"I don't want that anyone should see u like this. afterwall You are my wife" My wife.... shiv's wife.... his wife.... these words sourrened gaury's ear. suddenly a man spoke & both looked back.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#57
how romantic plz cont soon 😳 πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago
#58
thnx πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
plz cont..soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#59
whose the kabab mein hadi?????????????? πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
anyways really cute scene πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
cant wait for the next part!!!!

please cont soon!!!!!! πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 18 years ago
#60
cool ff!! πŸ‘ πŸ‘
keep it up yaar!!! πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

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