FF : Pyer Ki Rahoon Main(pt17:pg21 )

Part 1&2 in PG 1

Part 3 In PG 2

Part 4 In PG 4

Part 5 In pg 5

Part 6 In Pg 6

Part 7 In pg 8

Part 8 In Pg 10

Part 9 In pg 10

Part 10 In pg 9

Part 11 In pg1o

Part 12 In pg 11

Part 13 In pg 12

Hi Guy's,

Hope you all r fine.By reading The wonderful FF of this forum I thougt to start my 1st fansic. This is my first attem so plz overlook the mistake & bear with it. I hope I can give some pleasure to you.

Part 1:

ALL The FAMILY MEMBER ARE SITTING IN THE HALL. AFTER SOME TIME GAURY & SHIV ALSO JOIN THEM. WHEN NIKHILA SAW GAURY & SHIV TOGATHER SHE SAID," Aary beta kha reh gaye the tum log! Aao hamare saath betho". Gaury Said," Ji bari ma". then she & shiv take their seat. Nikhila said," Aary mai to tum logo ko ek baat batana bhul hi gayi. Shiv, tumahare masi ki beti ki shadi hai or hum sub ko bulaya hai us shadi ko attend karne. To hum sub kaal subhahi pune ke nikal jayenge. It's ok with you na?" Shiv said, "yes we will all start at 7am." Dadi said," to chalo chalo sab packing bhi baki hai, na?" So everybody leave.
The next morning everybody join in the parking ground. three car are ready to leave. when Nikhila saw Gaury she said," Tum hamare saath nehi aa rehi ho. tum to shiv ke saath uske gari mai jaogi". Gaury said," or aap log?" Nikhila said, " hum sub us do gari mai chalenge." So gaury goes near to shiv's car & shiv open the door for her. They all started their journey.

Gauri & shiv Both were silent in the car. suddenly Gaury keep her hand in the radio button & realize that shivs hand is also on her hand. So, their Eye locked. Gury suddenly saw that a car was coming from the opposite direction. So she Shouted, Shiv Samhalo. Shiv came back to her sense & try to stop the car. When the car stop Shiv saw that Gaury had a pain in her head. So shiv told," Kya hua Gauri? Mujhe dikhon" Gauri replied, " Kuch nahi . Mai thek hoon." Shiv took gauris face in his plam & said," I am sory Gauri. Tumhe meri wajha se chot lagi hai." Gauri Said,"mai thek hoon. Aap pareshan maat houyen.Hum chalte hai wese bhi bohot deer ho gayi, sub pareshan honge." So shiv start the car.

Here goes part:2

In pune everybody is anxios for shiv & gauri's late coming. Then suddenly Shiv's car entered. So everybody gathered. Nikhila asked shiv," Kaha reh gaye the tum log, Hum log kitne pareshan ho gaye the. Tum log thik to hona?" Shiv said, " Actually....." then gaury said, " sib kuch theek hai, Barima." Dadi replied, " to tum log jao aur freash ho jao" Gaury & shiv leave.

It's night now. Shiv is Lying on the bed now, he is preparing to sleep. Suddenly gaury Spoke, " Suniye" Shiv gets irriteted, he riplied, " kya problem hai? Ab tum mujhe sone bhi nehi dogi?"
Will continue later if you guy's want. Aaghe aage dekhiye kya hota hai 😉 😉 😉
Luv
Raisa 😛

continue the next part soon 😊 😊 😊
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awwwwwwwww tht was cute...cntinu sn

a gr8 start. plz continue soon... 👏 👏 👏

Thank's for the coments Guy's. 😛

continue soon it was greattt 😉

Recap:
They reached pune safely. Now they are going to sleep.
Part 3:
Gaury said," shiv, Yahan to koi extra chaddar ya takiya nehi hai. to mai kaha sougi?" Shiv riplied, " Mere saar pe." Gaury said ," Aap ne kuch kaha?" Shiv said," nothing. Tum ek kaam karo tum bed pe so jao mai dusre kamre mai chala jata hoon." Shiv was just procceding toward the door when Gaury speak," Rukiye!" shiv looked back & said," Ab kya hua?" Gaury said," Agar ap dusre kamre mai jayenge to gharwalo ko pata chal jayengi ki hamare beach........." Shiv slowly sit in the bed & Gaury also sit in the opposite side of the bed. After some time they were in deep sleep.

It's morning now. The sun rays are fallling over shiv & gaury's face. Shiv slowly open his eyes & saw that gaury was sleeping over his cheast😳😳 He try to move but as gauri was sleeping very peacefully he thought not to disturb her. Suddenly a fresh wind comes from the window & covered the whole face of gaury by her hair. She tried to remove the hair but she was in deep sleep. So shiv procced his hard to remove hair from gaury's face but as she was not comfortable in her sleep shiv takes his hand & slowly came closer to gauri's face. He blow through his mouth & suddenly realized that he was very close to gauri. He saw her very closely & thought that," Gauri, is looking like a sleeping beauty in sleep. She is looking soo beautiful & innocent". Then suddenly gaury woke up & saw that shiv is very close to her. She feel very shy. Shiv was so close to her that she can even feel his breath near her cheast. Their eye locked. Suddenly their was a knock in the door😡 😡. So gaury & shiv care back to the reality & Gaury hardly pushed shiv. They got up from the bed & suddenly saw that The belt of gauri's night suit has stuck on the watch of shiv's hand. They tryed very hard to remove it but they failed. In the mean time the knock on the door is becoming louder.

wow...
Please continue...
and please make it longer the next time!!!

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yyar kaun hai yeh kabab mein hadi 😡
plz cont soon gr8 part 😃

very well written...yeh kisi ko usi waqt hi room main ana tha..
well cont soon..