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@angel_tia

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Posted: 19 years ago

#21

its good
continue ASAP 👏

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Raisa

@Raisa25

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Posted: 19 years ago

#22

Part:6
Gaury opened the door & see a packet in the bed. She sit in the bed & open the packet & she was amazed to to see a beautiful pink sari with a gorgeous silver embroidery. She thought who can keep it here cuz it is the same sari which she chose one day in market when shiv & she goes there togather. But she left the sari cuz it was too costly. She was remembering the incident then her eye falled on a paper. She took the paper in hand & see that it was shiv who brought it for her. He wrote,"Gaury, aaj mehendi mai tum yehi sari pehenna. Tum pink mai acchi lagti ho". Gaury thought what happened to shiv? he was never like that. She took the sari & go for change.
Gaury comes out dressed in sari. She sit infront the mirror. She finished her make up & other neccesary things. When she wear the necless she couldn't tie it. She tried very hard but couln't tie it. Just then shiv entered wering Black Sherwani. he was looking very very sexy & handsome. Gaury looked in his eyes through the mirror. Shiv came closer to her & put his hand in her back. He tried to tie it but the hook was very tight so he couldn't do it as well. Then he put the hook in the mouth & now he can tie it. When he was putting the hook in mouth his lip softly touches gaury's back. A cold wind go through her back bone. She felt like siver goes through her whole body. She felt she cant stand any more, her whole body was dozing. She was feeling like she is no more on the earth now. Her thought break when shiv spoke,"Ho gaya!" Gaury couldn't look through the mirror. Very hardly she said thank you to shiv.She was about to leave the place when Shiv caught her hand. She didn't look back, she just stand there where she was. Shiv came infort of her & said,"Tum kuch bhool to nahi gayi". Gaury now looked in shiv's eye & see a smiling face. So she again down her face. Shiv Open the virmillon box, took a little bit & applied it in gaury's head. Shiv said," Ab kuch kami nahin hai". Gaury was about to say something when Ipshita came & call gaury for mehendi. She leaved with her.As soon as she leave shiv thought to himself,"How beautiful gaury was looking tonight. She is so simple even though she looked very beautyful. Her simplycity can never be compared to anybody" Then suddenly shiv thought "Why i am thinking about gaury all the time? What is happening to me?"

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Snigdha

@BengaliChica92

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+ 2

Posted: 19 years ago

#23

Great part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rockin!!!!!!! Plz go on!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏

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Sanjana

@basket

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Posted: 19 years ago

#24

OMG That was very cute!!!! 👏
PLEASE CONT sooooooooon 😃

~Basket

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Aakriti Mehta

@lil_desi_goddes

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+ 4

Posted: 19 years ago

#25

that was adorable.. shiv filled gauri's maang happily!! wow!

please do continue!!

👏

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racho8

@racho8

Voyager

Posted: 19 years ago

#26

black n pink...is my favoriteeeeee 😳 😳

awsome parttt!!!!!!!!

continue soon.. 👏

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hafsa

@hafsa17

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Posted: 19 years ago

#27

tht was sooo gud
keep up da gud work

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static_chaos23

@static_chaos23

Explorer

Posted: 19 years ago

#28

lovely ff. plz cont...soon 👏 👏 👏

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Raisa

@Raisa25

Dazzler

Posted: 19 years ago

#29

Part:7
Gaury goes downstairs where the mehendi ceremoni is going on. She sit with other woman. A women complement gaury for her beautiful sari. Gaury told her that shiv has gift it to her. Then Nikhila said," Dekha mera beta tomere haath se gaya. Apni ma ko ab tak kuch nehi diya aur dekho biwi ke liye sari leke aya hai." Everybody bust into laughter & they started teasing Gaury. Gaury was about to leave but Ipshita told her not to leave. Then the mehendi of Naina's hand completed,Dadi told Ipshita & gaury to have mehendi in their hand too. So they also sit for mehendi. When all the ceremony is completed gaury went to her room. When she goes for change she realize that her mehendi is not yet dry so she can't change. She stand by the window where a beautiful moon was shining brightly. She looked to her mehendi & thougt the word of the women in the ceremony today. She said," Jiski mehendi sabse laal hogi uska pati usse sabse jeyada pyer karta hai". She became a little upset cuz she surely knows that word is not for her. then she thought if the words are not true for her why should she will wait to see the colour of the mehendi. When she was about to remove it with tissu paper shiv catch her hand 😳 😳 & said," tum apni haton ki mehendi kyuon pochrahiho"

Edited by Jai & Bani - 19 years ago

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Sanjana

@basket

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#30

OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
This was simply beautifully!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳 😳 😳
i cant believe how sweet shiv is acting towards Gauri! 😳
by the way i think that this is the 7th part not the sixth

anyways PLEASE cont soooooon!!!

Sincerly,
~Basket (Sunju)

Edited by basket - 19 years ago

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