Ehsaas - a feeling - Pa 5 Pg 5 - 01/22/09

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Posted: 16 years ago
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My name is Ehsaas... I wanted to share a mini fan-fic with you guys... It's about the word "ehsaas" witch connects two opposite people under the bond of marriage... If you guys like the concept than i'll post the character sketch....?

Also this is my first fan fic I have wrote after reading many of them... so I don't know if its the best or not. I am not the best in these type of things but I wanted to try something new on the show I love the most.

Here I go...!

"Wish me luck friends!"



Ehsaas - A feeling

Concept: Ehsaas is a naturally feeling for anyone to have for anything in their life. Ehsaas can be positive or negative in the way you feel for something. Everyone in this world has Ehsaas inside them but hasn't learned how to express their feelings in front of each other. Sometimes your own Ehsaas plays game with your emotions anything... any moment in your life.

Love,
Ehsaas
PS: Please do leave your thought on the concept? Either if its good or bad but do reply...?

Index
Concept - Page 1
Character Sketch - Page 1
Juneja's intro/Kapoor's intro/cute confrontation between Shiv Gauri - Part 1 - Page 2
Shashank's mother wants marriage to happen early & Soccer match begins - Part 2 - Page 3
Few players in Panthers get hurt badly & Preet makes his entry - Part 3 - Page 3
Panthers win & Gauri Kidnap - Part 4 - Page 4
Search begins - Part 5 - Page 5






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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice concept dear plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv_pavi

nice concept dear plz continue soon

saba



Are are sure its good enough? Because its my first one.... and I am scared a-little!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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arey ehsaas yaar..... dont wry go ahead jaanu!! gr8 concept...sounds gud!! umm....xplain further ok?? nd giv da character sketch asap!! x muah x reeno
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wish me luck! Friends....!



Characters

Kapoor Family


Mahen Kapoor (Salil Ankola): Mahen is Nikhila's husband and father of three sons and one daughter who is a complete spoiled brat like her brothers.

Nikhila Kapoor (Achint Kaur): Nikhila is Mahen's wife and mother of three sons who are her life and one daughter who she loves the most in her life after her sons. Nikhila also is good friends with Priya from childhood but does not know that she also lives in Mumbai in same society she lives in... But they meet at a soccer game from there everything goes smooth in their friendship but their kids do get along except for Shiv and Gauri is some way because of their ego.


Samar Kapoor (Yash Tonk):
Eldest son of Mahen and Nikhila and eldest out of his siblings. He is less spoiled than his siblings but always bails them out of trouble in front of their parents. Samar is closer to his mother than father but loves them average. Samar completed his masters in business and now he is working with his father in his company.

Shiv Kapoor (Iqbal Khan):
Mahen and Nikhila's son, youngest sibling of Samar but older brother to Sharad and Ganga. Shiv is complete spoiled brat who doesn't believe in love but the Ehsaas is alive somewhere inside him, but haven't realized it. Also in his last year of college than planning to go for masters in business than join his father's company like his older brother Samar or focus on his singing talent witch he adores the most in his life. Also in every single class of Gauri but they are two opposites things that can not be one because their thoughts aren't the same but their passion for music is same. Also Shiv doesn't like any male figures around her other than him or her brothers because somewhere inside his heart Gauri made a place for herself but he hasn't realized it.

Sharad Kapoor (Amit Tandon): Sharad is Mahen and Nikhila's third son, youngest sibling of Samar and Shiv and older brother of Ganga. Also second year of college, best friends with Preet Juneja and less spoiled than Shiv and Ganga but loves his family a-lot.

Ganga Kapoor (Priya Bhatija):
Ganga is the youngest family of Kapoor family and complete spoiled brat like her brothers Samar, Shiv, and Sharad, but loves her entire family a-lot.

Juneja Family

Kshitij Juneja (Amit Sarin): Kshitij is Priya's husband and father of two sons and two daughters. Also his older brother's son lives with him after his death and his wife died after giving birth to Preet.

Priya Juneja (Shilpa Angihotri): Priya is Kshitij's wife and mother of two sons and two daughters. Also loves Preet much as her own kids. Priya also is good friends with Nikhila from childhood but does not know that she also lives in Mumbai in same society she lives in... But they meet at a soccer game from there everything goes smooth in their friendship but their kids do get along except for Shiv and Gauri is some way because of their ego.

Prem Juneja (Harshad Chopra): He is a son that every parent wants. He is respectful, hard-working and a successful businessman. He is also the type of brother that every youngster wants. He loves his brothers and sisters too much. His family means everything to him. People could say that he has everything, but what he does not have is what everybody does not know. He has always had the dream of meeting his true love. He is positive that there is somebody out there made only for him, a person who waits for him. How he finds his true love is in the story itself.

Gauri Juneja (Pallavi Subhash): Gauri gives Ehsaas the most important part of her life. She lives in that word because her feelings are natural for anyone in her life. She is happily engaged to Shashank and considers him everything in her life because her Mummy Papa are happy but sometimes Gauri doesn't like being around Shashank because of his insecurity of Shiv who is her classmate she doesn't like that much. She, shares every small things with Kunal her best friend and Heer's older brother. Also she has Shiv in every single class of hers. She doesn't get along with Shiv that much because their thoughts are so different from one another but yet they share the same passion for music.

Pushkar Juneja (Naman Shaw): Simply adores all his siblings, loves them a-lot and gives his family the most value in his life. Pushkar studies in same college as his sisters and Preet.

Prachi Juneja (Panchi Bora): A very docile, vulnerable, person Prachi cannot see anyone in pain; she always tries to help out. As a child she had once got lost in a very crowded place, that incident left a permanent scar on her mind, she still avoids going to crowded places. Her pillar of strength is her father and her childhood best friend Neev.

Preet Juneja (Sushant Rajput): After his father's death his Uncle's family became everything to him. He is very versatile. He is a Happy-go-lucky guy who loves to play jokes, hang around but at the same time, is very caring towards his family especially Prem. Preet is fun loving, heart of the family and a lawyer and a rebel by profession (after he completes his college year). Preet shares every thing with Prem and Sharad his best friend.

Other Characters

Heer Shergil (Additi Gupta): Heer is Neev's older sister and a mother figure after their parent's death. A lawyer by profession, Heer is a very shy and quite girl. Her family means everything to her, and she loves Prem since childhood. Her wedding was fixed with Prem when they were children and since then, Heer considers Prem her love and her life.

Neev Shergil (Jay Bhanushali): Neev is Heer's younger brother who loves her a-lot and she is his mother figure sister. He is a very practical, straight forward and spontaneous boy. A Casanova at heart Neev lives each day as it comes. He is very possessive about his family and friends. He treasures his friendship with Prachi. Neev does not know what love is and cannot understand how Prachi can believe in it so strongly. However as the story goes, Neev realizes that he is in love with Prachi. They share some romantic moments, but their happiness doesn't last for long!

Shashank (Sumeet Sachdeva): Shashank is Gauri's fianc who gives money much value than anything in his life. Ehsaas for him is meaningless and he is only marrying Gauri for her property. Also Ipshita's non-blood brother but their families were so close that he considers her as a sister. He mostly shares everything with his sister Ipshita and she shares everything with him.

Ipshita (Shriya Bisht): Ipshita is Shiv's girlfriend for name in college to make Gauri jealous, but Gauri doesn't give a heck about Shiv or his personal life. She doesn't care how Shiv uses her because she believes that one day he will marry her.

Kripa Sharma (Neha Bamb): Kripa has feelings for Sharad but Sharad only thinks of her as a friend. Also good friend of Shiv in many ways...

Bani Dixit (Prachi Desai): Prachi is love of Pushkar's life.

Love,
Ehsaas
PS: Please leave your a-opinion on the characters and if I have to make a change than let me know in the characters....



Edited by PyaarKiEhsaas - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Reeno!!!

arey ehsaas yaar..... dont wry go ahead jaanu!! gr8 concept...sounds gud!! umm....xplain further ok?? nd giv da character sketch asap!! x muah x reeno



Thanks yaar!

I already posted character sketch so give me your a-opinion....!

Love,
Ehsaas
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow!! darling......jst read da sketch!
amazing....v sooo many ppl rnt able 2 cntrol soo many characters..in kuch pal........how will u carry on wid soo many??
lollz
bt very nyc..hmm...a blender of kasamh se nd kdmhmd nd kzk nd kayamath nd KAA lolzz
very nyc nd keep it up!!!!!!!
***********GOOD LUCK HONEYY**************
X MUAH X
reenoo
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Reeno!!!

wow!! darling......jst read da sketch!

amazing....v sooo many ppl rnt able 2 cntrol soo many characters..in kuch pal........how will u carry on wid soo many??
lollz
bt very nyc..hmm...a blender of kasamh se nd kdmhmd nd kzk nd kayamath nd KAA lolzz
very nyc nd keep it up!!!!!!!
***********GOOD LUCK HONEYY**************
X MUAH X
reenoo



Thanks Yaar so much for your luck and don't worry I have planned it out! Also if Ekta can use that many characters in her show than I can toooo.... 😆 At least I won't seperate my main leads over and over for same reason....

Love,
Ehsaas

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oh soo sweet ehsaas nd well said!!! x muah x reeno
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Guys... I am posting first part since I am busy tomorrow with shopping so I won't have time.... I hope you guys will like the first part.... tried to make it sightly different than the show.... more of a father and sons' friendship type.... who understands them a-lot like true friends!

Here I go....!



Part One

Scene One: Juneja Resident

Stanza 1: Raas Rachiyan Brindavan Ke
Gokul Ke Basi
Radha Tumhri Daasi
Darshan Ko Hai Pyaasi


Stanza 2: Shaam Shalone Nand Lala Krishna Banwari
Tumri Chab Hai Nyari
Mein To Hoon Tan Man Hari
Mein To Hoon Tan Man Hari


Stanza 3: Man Mohana Man Mohana Man Mohanaaaaa Man Mohana
Kanha Sunona Aaa
Tum Bin Paun Kaise Chaina
Tarsu Tumhiko Din Raina


Entire members of Juneja family gather around Gauri who is singing the morning prayers. Everyone is lost in her sweet voice sounds like god himself came on earth. Gauri turns around and takes the arti around everyone gathered around her. Also she takes blessings from her parents and her older brother Prem.

Gauri turns back to the idol, takes blessing from him afterwards helps her mother set the table for breakfast.

Stanza 4: Mein Hoon Tumhari
Hai Tumhara Yeh Mere Jeevan
Tumko Hi Dekhon Mein
Dekhun Koi Darpan
Bansi Ban Jaungi
In Hooton Ki Ho Jangui
In Sapno Se Jalthal
Hai Mera Maan Agan
Hain Mera Hmmm Hmmm


Scene Two: Kapoor Resident

We see footsteps walking down the central stair case of the Kapoor house. Black, finely polished shoes heading down the stairs, a deep blue suit and complementary shirt and tie. A man with a flair, style and authority with accompanying good looks, gave a beaming smile as he walked down the stairs, one hand in his trouser pocket and with the other blew a kiss to his so called first love towards his daring wife otherwise known as Nikhila.

"Mahen, grow up! You're a father of three sons who will come rushing down in few minutes with your daring daughter Ganga who hardly listens to me. I think its time we got Samar married so I can get some company in this house or else I'm lonely after you guys leave and if we have a daughter-in-law in this house than I can also take some rest from the kitchen." Nikhila complained to her husband.

Mahen trying to hug his wife and says "not a bad idea than we both can take retirement after Samar gets married because he handles every small things of his siblings and his wife can handle your duties in the kitchen, Not bad! I think I should have a father and son, talk about his marriage to him,"

"Who's getting married?" asked by three guys standing on the stair case looking at their father and mother romancing.

Mahen quickly lets go of his wife and tells his sons "I am thinking of getting married again since my sons are busy in their personal life that they don't have the time to get settled so I thought why not get married again and feel young."

"Not a bad idea, Dad! I don't think Mom has a problem with you getting married again. Right Mom...!" Shiv takes a bite out of his apple and winks at his siblings.

"Right Shiv...! I don't think Mom would mind," said by Sharad who had sitting next to Shiv.

Samar covers his mouth from laughing at the situation where their father tries to play a prank on them but Shiv turned the table around.

"Mahen, I think the kids have a point! I don't mind if you get married again." Nikhila tells him while serving breakfast to them.

"Nikhila, I was just joking! And I would never think about getting married again because I love you but where is Ganga the baby of this house." Mahen admits he can not beat his sons in their game afterwards ask about his daughter Ganga who is still sleeping in bed.

"Dad, I think she still is sleeping in her room? I'll go up and wake her up?" Samar suggest to his father.

Mahen nods his head!

Scene Three: Gauri meets Shashank than leaves with him.


Gauri rings the door...

Shashank's mother opens the door...

Gauri greets her than touches her feet...

She blesses Gauri...

Invites her inside the house...

And shouts for Shashank...

Shashank comes running down the stair...

Hugs his mother...

Greets Gauri...

Afterwards both of them leave together from his house. Shashank drops Gauri to her college than leaves from his job.

Gauri meets her friends in the basketball court where they wait for her than leaves to attend classes.

Shiv arrives at college...

Gives Ipshita a kiss on her cheek than leaves for his classes...

Gauri sits with her dearest friend Kaya. Shiv comes into the class makes Kaya get up from her seat and takes his place beside Gauri since it was exam day.

Gauri gives Shiv a dirty look...

Kaya sits beside Ipshita who was mad by Shiv actions now a day. He mostly tries to get near Gauri but Gauri keeps away from him because Shashank doesn't like him. He also tells Ipshita not to hang out with Shiv but she never listens to her brother.

Gauri turns around and asks Payal for her notebook she borrowed other day. Payal returns back Gauri's notebook but Shiv takes it.

"Shiv, give me back my book!" Gauri demanded

"I'm scared!" Shiv turns around and winks at his friends... and they wink back to him.
"Shiv, please give me back my notebook and I am not in the mood to argue with you so please return it back." Gauri told Shiv with a frown on her face

Shiv stopped for a moment and studied Gauri's facially expression. Ipshita was getting annoyed by Shiv's behavior towards Gauri now a day are killing her inside but she doesn't show it on her face.

Preview: Soccer match beings...!

Love,
Ehsaas
PS: Leave your thoughts about Concept, Character Sketch and First Part Now until Sunday.... 😳


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