Ehsaas - a feeling - Pa 5 Pg 5 - 01/22/09 - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part Three

Scene One: Match begins against Panthers and Dopiness & Prachi's entry


"It's three to one! Panthers are in lead... Dopiness needs two points to catch up or more to win the game." Announcers' of the match announced

Mahen and his wife Nikhila also are present at the game to support their sons' team.

Kshitij and his wife Priya are also at the game to support their sons' in the game.

"Why are you so upset?" Priya asked her husband

"Where's Preet?" Kshitij asked

"He must be out their playing" his wife told him but he doesn't believe her.

Everyone is busy attending the game going on the fields while a young girl stays in the library studying on her own. And it's none other than Prachi Juneja far away from the crowd.

Shiv asked Neev to pass the ball...

Neev was about to pass the ball when one of the guys from dopiness come and trip him.

Neev gets badly injured but he does not give up...

One of Neev's friends informs Prachi about Neev's injury and she drops her books. And runs toward the field to find Neev bleeding badly but still playing in the game... Prachi tries to enter the field but they stop her by saying "if you enter the field than the other team will win."

Helpless Prachi sits down beside her sister on the bench looking at Neev who's hurt badly.

Scene Two: Shiv gets hurt!

Two minute break was announced by the ref...

Prachi runs into Neev's arms...

Pushkar stares at his sister's reaction... over a small thing!

Shiv makes some comments...

Sharad gets jealous of Prachi hugging Neev...

"Prachi, I'm fine" Neev assured her

Prachi won't let go off Neev...

"Prachi... Neev is fine!" Prem begun to assure her

"Oh! Please Bhaiyya! Don't try to comfort me because after this game you are a goner!" Prachi announced out aloud to her brother

"Prachi, I'm fine and the game is going to begin so let go off me." Neev tells Prachi even though he was in pain.

"Neev, are you sure?" Prachi asked

Neev nods his head... and Prachi lets go off him!

"Two minute break is over! Panthers are loosing by six points against Dopiness. Will this session of the game be a new turning point or not?" announced by the announcers

Entire Panther team is trying their best in catching up with the points... But no luck!

After along time Shiv gets the ball... he is running toward the shoot out area but halfway someone trips him.

Everyone gets shock including Gauri who's ten time shocked...

They pauses the game...!

Samar asked Shiv if he was alright...

Shiv nods his head and resumes the game...

Pushkar makes a goal for the team... with Shiv! They all hug those two together.

Gauri stands up and cheers for her brother... Shiv captured Gauri standing on the bench cheering for their team for awhile Shiv thought Gauri was cheering for him, but when he saw Prem waving at Gauri. His smile turns into a frown...

"Shiv, what's the matter?" Prem asked him

Shiv: Nothing! Let's focus on the game... we have to win

Scene Three: Preet makes his entry in the game!

Not only Shiv was observing Gauri but Shashank was also observing her actions.

Shashank gets mad and instruct his team to harm Shiv one ore time on his right arm.

Prem and Shiv made up a strategy to win the game. They are working on their strategy when one the players from Dopiness side trips both of them together.

Everyone stands up!

Priya wanted to run into the field by her son even Nikhila want to do the same but their husbands stop them or else the boys' injuries are meanness.

Prem shouts Preet's name with Gauri...

Far from the college, Preet is sleeping on top of his car! In the background you can hear... two of the players in Panthers are badly injured and they are waiting for their finally player who isn't here at the moment.

Preet's face is shown with his eyes close...

Gopi jan ras raas abhilaashi
kaurav kaaling kans vinasi
himkar baanuk saan prakasi
sarva bhut hi vas vaiyakhi
bolo jai kanhaiyya ki


Preet's body figure is shown in different angle sleeping on the car. He opens his eyes slowly; Prem is also getting up slowly back and forth afterwards he stands up on the car.

natkhat bansi wale gokul ke raja
meri ankhiyaan taras gayi ab toh aaja
aaja...

(natkhat bansi wale gokul ke raja
meri ankhiyaan taras gayi ab toh aaja
aaja)...

aa~


Preet comes to the match dressed in his outfit. He hears the ref talking back and forth about Prem can't play with Shiv but he says "they can play and they will."

Preet comes toward his brother and Shiv... Prem says Preet's name like Prachi...

Shiv looks at Preet... Preet looks at Prem... Pushkar turns around and see's Preet bending down in front of Prem...

Preet looks at Prem... Wipes his blood than gives his hand to both Shiv and Prem together...

Both brothers look at each other and lord Ram is reflected in Prem and lord Krishna is reflected in Preet.

Love,
Ehsaas


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Posted: 16 years ago
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kool...........amazing updtes hun!! luvd it.......... shiv's jealous??? x muah x reenoo
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Reeno!!!

kool...........amazing updtes hun!! luvd it.......... shiv's jealous??? x muah x reenoo



Thanks yaar 😛

Love,
Ehsaas
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank you my friend 😊

Love,
Ehsaas
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Posted: 16 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: misS Angelic

Wow brilliant FF...........nice update



Thanks yaar 😃

Love,
Ehsaas
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part Four

Scene One: Panthers win!

"The most waited player as arrived and he is none other than Preet Juneja" announced by the announcers

Match begins...

Prem has the ball, he passes it to Samar, Samar passes it to Pushkar.

"Panthers only need one goal to win the game in ten seconds" announcers announced

Pushkar passes the ball to Neev and Neev passes the ball to Preet.

Preet kicks the ball toward Shiv and Shiv shoots the ball into the net.

Mahen, Nikhila, Kshitij, Priya, Gauri, Ganga, Heer, Prachi, and Bani are happy for the team.

Everyone rushes toward the winning team...

After awhile everything started to quiet down, Bani comes running towards Pushkar and hugs him.

Ipshita goes toward her brother instead of Shiv, Heer comes running toward Prem and hugs him.

"Heer, I'm fine" Prem begun to say but Heer shuts him up!

Preet begins to laugh at both of his brothers when Prachi comes from behind and pulls his ears even though she is younger than him.

Both Preet and Shiv begun to fun at Prem and Pushkar how they change in front of their girlfriends...

Gauri comes from behind and pulls her brother's ear afterwards say "Mr. Kishen Kanhaiya, many people now a day wants Ramji like Prem and Pushkar not like you Shiv. Entire college knows what a flirt you are..."

Samar covers his mouth after he said "what a burn...Gauri?"

Shiv gave his brother a dirty look than leaves from there... Gauri goes after Shiv... to make him more piss at her... so he re-thinks in working with her together on their history project.

Shashank watched from concern of his eyes how Gauri went behind Shiv who looked a-little angry at her.

"Ipshita, tell me what kind of relationship Gauri and Shiv share?" Shashank asked...

"Bhaiyya, they show to be enemies in front of the college, but my heart says that there is something going on between those two now a day. In fact, Shiv has been ignoring me for past few days because of Gauri." Ipshita told her brother while putting her head on his shoulders.

Scene Two: Two friends meet after along time & Gauri in trouble...

Shashank excused himself from Ipshita by using his phone as an excuse to leave.

Shiv changed his clothes and walked toward his car...

Gauri fallows Shiv toward his car but before she can touch him someone pulls Gauri into the van.

Shiv turns around and finds an anklet bracelet lying on the ground... He picks it up!
Priya came to meet her sons on the field with her husband... Both Prem and Pushkar go running toward their parents and hug them... Preet begins to walk away when Priya calls him over in the hug.

Nikhila also goes to meet her sons... both of them hug her than their parents... Afterwards Sharad says "Mom, I want you to meet my friends' Mom".

Nikhila nods her head...

Prem excuse himself from the hang to attend his call in the parking lot.

Shiv looks at the payal closely... to figure out who it belongs to...!

Prem touches Shiv's shoulders that makes him turn around scared... than says "it's you... I thought for a moment it was someone else..."

"Are you okay Shiv?" Prem asked him while studying his face...

"I don't know!" Shiv answered back

"Forget that! Where's Gauri?" Prem asked

Shiv looked at him funny way than said "why would your sister be with me...?"

Both Priya and Nikhila thanked their sons who introduced long lost friends again...

Their kids look at them strangely!

Mahen shook hands with Kshitij... At that moment they also became good friends...

Gauri looked horrified to see three guys in front of her with a gun pointing at her head...

"Shiv, stop joking! Where is Gauri? She came behind you?" Prem looked worried

Everything came clear to Shiv and asked Prem to identify the anklet bracket he found...

Prem said it belong to Gauri...

Color of Shiv's face drains out... even Prem when they find broken pieces of bangles showing a path down the road...

Scene Three: Both families are terrified to find out about Gauri's kidnap!

Gauri finds herself tied up in some, weird place witch kind of smells awful.

Everyone in Juneja resident, are tensed after knowing Gauri is missing and the call they got confirmed she has been kidnap.

All the young generation are trying their best in arranging money since the bank is closed for three days.

Priya is unable to control her tears and shouts at her husband to find their daughter.

Kshitij assures his wife nothing will happen to their daughter.

Mahen suggest in involving polices forces with them but Priya over reacts and says "no".

Without thinking Prachi says "we should inform Mamaji... he might be able to help us since he is part of CID Special Bureau."

Kshitij agrees with his daughter even Priya because she trusts her brother or than unknown strangers.

Priya asks her son Prem to call their Mamaji over here with his team...

Gauri looked scared when three men come into the room drunk. Gauri tries to move back...

Twenty minutes later, Priya's brother senior inspector Abhijeet comes with his team. Priya goes running into her brother's arm and cries and cries.

Abhijeet looks at his Juju for answers even the kids are crying... "Can anyone tell me what's going on? Nikhila...?" He asked with a worried look

"Mamaji, Gauri's kidnap...! They told us not to inform the police but your family so we had to..." Pushkar explained his Mamaji with tears coming out of his eyes...

Abhijeet gets more shocked to know his niece is kidnap after the soccer match.

Please do appreciate or criticize my work...

Love,
Ehsaas




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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! gauri kidnapd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! rlly intrstin twist n i lik it!!!!!!!!!👏 us read oth parts n its gettin rlly fab!! may shashank is ehind da kidnapin 2 teach gauri a lesson. hope nuthin bad will happen.well, con soonnn!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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This is getting really intresting...

& do Continue Soon 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: starfan.shrk

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! gauri kidnapd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! rlly intrstin twist n i lik it!!!!!!!!!👏 us read oth parts n its gettin rlly fab!! may shashank is ehind da kidnapin 2 teach gauri a lesson. hope nuthin bad will happen.well, con soonnn!!!!!!



Yep.... Gauri is kidnap by someone! Thank you.... maybe Shashank kidnapped her....

Love,
Ehsaas


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: misS Angelic

This is getting really intresting...

& do Continue Soon 😉



Thank you

Love,
Ehsaas

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