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Posted: 17 years ago
#31


Part Five

Scene One: Shiv blames himself for Gauri's kidnap!
"Auntie, please forgive me! Whatever is happening right now is my fault. If I didn't take Gauri's joke indirectly to me than she wouldn't have followed me and none of this would happen. I am sorry Auntie but I promise you that I'll bring her back no matter what happens to me." Shiv asking forgives from Gauri's mother
Priya looks at Shiv and says "it's not your fault son... in fact it's my fault that both of my daughters got kidnap... Prachi when she was young witch made a huge influence on her life and now Gauri."
"It's no ones fault! So Mr. Shiv, can you describe exactly what happened before you guys found out that Gauri was kidnap?" ACP Pradyuman asked while Vivek takes few minute in writing down the details after seeing Gauri's picture Freddie is like "Abhijeet Sir, is this your niece?"
Abhijeet nods his head and Freddie remembers seeing her somewhere near the hill station they were...
Shashank comes to Juneja house after finding out that Gauri is kidnap through Prachi.
"Auntie, when did this happen? Why didn't anyone inform me earlier? If I didn't get Prachi's text message than I would have not known?" Shashank asked several questions to the family
Shiv whispers something into Pushkar's ear witch made him giggle slightly at the wrong moment.
Scene Two: Search begins
Gauri closed her eyes after noticing that was her dream... Gauri tried to untie her hands but failed.
"What's so funny?" senior inspector Daya asked
Pushkar and Shiv bend down their heads and says "nothing Sir", Daya found something fishy between those boys.
Anyways, ACP sends Vivek and Freddie together in the trace of the call Juneja Family got.
"Abhijeet, Daya both of you guys go and check out the hill station we were at while I go with the girls to check out Green Fields parking lot." APC announced to his officers
Shiv runs to ACP Sir and says "may I please be apart of the investigation because some what it's my fault that she went missing"
ACP nods his head to let Shiv tag along with them... because he notices the worried expression on his face and somewhere in his expression was love hidden in it.
Shashank also takes leave once CID team leaves from Juneja house. Prem kind of found Shashank's behavior slightly changed. After Gauri returns he decides to talk with his father about Gauri and Shashank's relationship if it should go further or called off.
Scene Three: Search take two days more...
People who kidnap Gauri had moved her to another location like they are aware of CID's each movement.
Shiv hardly had been to classes because he is helping CID to find Gauri because he feels guilt for her kidnap.
Heer consoled Prem, Neev does the same for Prachi witch irritated Sharad a-lot. Sharad realized that he started to develop a soft concern for Prachi but controlled his anger.
Gauri regain conscious in another place but this time locked in a room where no window is or no telephone.
Gauri cried to herself for her mother and father...
Three guys removed their mask from their face and takes money from a man who is none other than Shashank...
Shashank's face is shown in each different angles, with annoyed look afterwards take out his cell phone witch shows private caller on displays of caller Id.
Shashank dials Juneja places number...
Gauri's mother picks up...
Shashank says: I am the kidnapper of your daughter Gauri... Listen to me carefully... take your brother out of this case or else your daughter will suffer much more... this time I need half of the money I demanded two days ago...
Shashank hangs up the phone...

Please do appreciate it or criticize it....

Love,
Ehsaas


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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG!!!!!!!!!! i nw it!! tht stupid shahshank!1 arrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrh😔!!!!!!!!!! shiv is so concernd 4 gauri..... hw sweet!!!!šŸ˜› well, con ASAP!!!!šŸ‘šŸ‘

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Posted: 17 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: PyaarKiEhsaas



Part Four

Scene One: Panthers win!

"The most waited player as arrived and he is none other than Preet Juneja" announced by the announcers

Match begins...

Prem has the ball, he passes it to Samar, Samar passes it to Pushkar.

"Panthers only need one goal to win the game in ten seconds" announcers announced

Pushkar passes the ball to Neev and Neev passes the ball to Preet.

Preet kicks the ball toward Shiv and Shiv shoots the ball into the net.

Mahen, Nikhila, Kshitij, Priya, Gauri, Ganga, Heer, Prachi, and Bani are happy for the team.

Everyone rushes toward the winning team...

After awhile everything started to quiet down, Bani comes running towards Pushkar and hugs him.

Ipshita goes toward her brother instead of Shiv, Heer comes running toward Prem and hugs him.

"Heer, I'm fine" Prem begun to say but Heer shuts him up!

Preet begins to laugh at both of his brothers when Prachi comes from behind and pulls his ears even though she is younger than him.

Both Preet and Shiv begun to fun at Prem and Pushkar how they change in front of their girlfriends...

Gauri comes from behind and pulls her brother's ear afterwards say "Mr. Kishen Kanhaiya, many people now a day wants Ramji like Prem and Pushkar not like you Shiv. Entire college knows what a flirt you are..."

Samar covers his mouth after he said "what a burn...Gauri?"

Shiv gave his brother a dirty look than leaves from there... Gauri goes after Shiv... to make him more piss at her... so he re-thinks in working with her together on their history project.

Shashank watched from concern of his eyes how Gauri went behind Shiv who looked a-little angry at her.

"Ipshita, tell me what kind of relationship Gauri and Shiv share?" Shashank asked...

"Bhaiyya, they show to be enemies in front of the college, but my heart says that there is something going on between those two now a day. In fact, Shiv has been ignoring me for past few days because of Gauri." Ipshita told her brother while putting her head on his shoulders.

Scene Two: Two friends meet after along time & Gauri in trouble...

Shashank excused himself from Ipshita by using his phone as an excuse to leave.

Shiv changed his clothes and walked toward his car...

Gauri fallows Shiv toward his car but before she can touch him someone pulls Gauri into the van.

Shiv turns around and finds an anklet bracelet lying on the ground... He picks it up!
Priya came to meet her sons on the field with her husband... Both Prem and Pushkar go running toward their parents and hug them... Preet begins to walk away when Priya calls him over in the hug.

Nikhila also goes to meet her sons... both of them hug her than their parents... Afterwards Sharad says "Mom, I want you to meet my friends' Mom".

Nikhila nods her head...

Prem excuse himself from the hang to attend his call in the parking lot.

Shiv looks at the payal closely... to figure out who it belongs to...!

Prem touches Shiv's shoulders that makes him turn around scared... than says "it's you... I thought for a moment it was someone else..."

"Are you okay Shiv?" Prem asked him while studying his face...

"I don't know!" Shiv answered back

"Forget that! Where's Gauri?" Prem asked

Shiv looked at him funny way than said "why would your sister be with me...?"

Both Priya and Nikhila thanked their sons who introduced long lost friends again...

Their kids look at them strangely!

Mahen shook hands with Kshitij... At that moment they also became good friends...

Gauri looked horrified to see three guys in front of her with a gun pointing at her head...

"Shiv, stop joking! Where is Gauri? She came behind you?" Prem looked worried

Everything came clear to Shiv and asked Prem to identify the anklet bracket he found...

Prem said it belong to Gauri...

Color of Shiv's face drains out... even Prem when they find broken pieces of bangles showing a path down the road...

Scene Three: Both families are terrified to find out about Gauri's kidnap!

Gauri finds herself tied up in some, weird place witch kind of smells awful.

Everyone in Juneja resident, are tensed after knowing Gauri is missing and the call they got confirmed she has been kidnap.

All the young generation are trying their best in arranging money since the bank is closed for three days.

Priya is unable to control her tears and shouts at her husband to find their daughter.

Kshitij assures his wife nothing will happen to their daughter.

Mahen suggest in involving polices forces with them but Priya over reacts and says "no".

Without thinking Prachi says "we should inform Mamaji... he might be able to help us since he is part of CID Special Bureau."

Kshitij agrees with his daughter even Priya because she trusts her brother or than unknown strangers.

Priya asks her son Prem to call their Mamaji over here with his team...

Gauri looked scared when three men come into the room drunk. Gauri tries to move back...

Twenty minutes later, Priya's brother senior inspector Abhijeet comes with his team. Priya goes running into her brother's arm and cries and cries.

Abhijeet looks at his Juju for answers even the kids are crying... "Can anyone tell me what's going on? Nikhila...?" He asked with a worried look

"Mamaji, Gauri's kidnap...! They told us not to inform the police but your family so we had to..." Pushkar explained his Mamaji with tears coming out of his eyes...

Abhijeet gets more shocked to know his niece is kidnap after the soccer match.

Please do appreciate or criticize my work...

Love,
Ehsaas




suspencee hmmmm😳
saba
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Posted: 17 years ago
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this shaahsankkk huhhhh my innocent gauriii well now plz make shakky suffer gr88 update waise
sba

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