FF:Shiv Ki Gauri chapter 32 P74 conclude! - Page 58

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

OMG!!!! u have ended it...i can't believe it!!!! but at the same time itz a GREAT ENDING!!!

do write another ff i luv reading ur ffs.

Originally posted by: pria4ever

OMG u ended it! 😭...anyways... aw yes sorry..sadly its come to an end..but hoping it was an ending to remember..really nice to here that you liked the end..

as usual a gr8 update!!!!👏

i luved it!!!😳...the conversation between Shiv-Gauri was really heartwarming...as for Shiv, uske gusse mein hi uska pyaar hai😉...luved the way he tries to dominate Gauri...but gives up seeing her tears...his luv for his child...u've described that scene just so perfectly...again takes me back to KAA where Sam held Sakshi for the very first time😊... ive got to say that was my frav bit too..the fact that shivs character is so strong but something so little as gauris expression melts him. its nice. to see the emotion. aw thank you soo much..too kind!! as for the baby sene i dont think i concentrated on that too much though..my detail was more on the emotion..well i dont know.. but thank you i dont think it can get close to the sam..sakshi caption though.

Gauris fear...yet this time she mustered the guts to speak the truth...her undying devotion n luv for Shiv is really commendable....i guess its this luv thats given Shiv the strength to face the truth and accept it...n he naming his child also GAuri speaks alot!!! you put it in better words than i could ever!..gauri did do her bit this time...i guess it was the love factor for both shiv gauri that solved things so effortlessly. no no no..no faceoff.. dont think i could write a face off ...no..

Honestly my filmy mind was expecting a huge face-off between Shiv- Sam for the child....anyways you've ended it on a real sweet and positive note!!!

Thanks for the same....n hope that u start writing more FF's...real great work!👏 i should be saying thank you!!! following me although through..thanks!! as for ffs...unki shidaat se is still running...ansooni dastaan..which uve read i guess..but to tell you the truth i have a strong idea for another ff which has been floating in my mind for a long time so..soon...will be sure to let you know..

Indeed Gauri is Shiv ki Gauri!!!😳😳 second that nothing but shiv ki gauri!!

Originally posted by: stranger in us

wow a beautifulending. this ff was really close to my heart as i started commenting after reading this ff , before i was a silent reader of all the ffs i read but this one forced me to comment because of your style of writing where the characters of shiv and gauri were so realistic and sweet. will miss this ff and thanks once again for such nice story

Originally posted by: swetha10

Hey Jagruti lovely update.. cute ending.. luved it....thanx a lot for the wonderful FF..

Originally posted by: luv_pavi

wonderful update........ but em shooo sad coz u ended 😭😭😭

saba

Originally posted by: alishah1988

aap ka ff wakai mein bhut acha tha aap ne bhut ache tareeka sey aise potrate kya hai well done👏

Originally posted by: sana866

nice ending dear loved it

Hi Jagruti....I read all your parts.........it took me couple of days but believe me couldnt wait to go the next part............all were written beautifully...........some gave numb ness to the eyes.....and at the same time some gave over joy.....happiness and sadness came to our eyes........and the last part really had mixed feeling of sorrow and joy.........above all the love bonding and Shiv ki Gauri was the feel all the time...........really suited the character and First Shiv (Iqbal) and Gauri come to our mind and if you close eyes....could see what you are writting...........your work is appreciable............and I am happy that I completed as I was not able to concentrate on my work....Take care...bye